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Young Love: Chapter Eleven
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Shane poked her food with her fork as she stared down at her plate. Carmen took a bite of her food and looked over at Shane.
“So Carmen,” she looked at Carla. “So are you from the OC?” Carla smiled, and Carmen smiled back.
“No,” she cleared her throat. “I’m actually from East L.A.”
“Oh,” Carla nodded. “Where did you and Shane meet exactly?” Carmen went to answer, but Shane spoke up.
“Actually, she moved to Laguna Beach last week. We met at school.” She nodded and took a drink of her soda.
“So why the big move?” Gabriel sat back in his chair.
“My mom didn’t want me living with her anymore because we live in a bad area, so she decided that I move in with my aunt and her husband.” She smiled softly and took another bite of her food.
“So are you two seeing each other?”
“Dad,” Shane looked at her father.
“Gabe—I don’t think that’s any of our business.” Carla smiled nervously at Carmen. “I’m sorry—sometimes Gabe doesn’t know his manners.” She shot him a look.
“It’s okay, I don’t mind the questioning.”
“Yes you do mind,” Shane crossed her arms and looked at Carmen. “I think we’re done. I’m going to take Carmen home.” She pushed herself away from the table and walked out of the dining room. Carmen excused herself and walked away from the table also.
“Shane,” Shane stopped as she placed her hand on the banister. “Are you okay?”
She turned her head towards Carmen. “I’m going to take you home.” She walked up the steps, and Carmen sighed. She followed Shane upstairs to grab her things.
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Bette and Helena lay on the top of the hood of Bette’s car as they looked up at the stars.
“I’m really surprised that none of the girls has called us.” Helena looked at Bette.
“I’m guessing that Shane probably told them not to bother.” Bette smiled.
“What do you think Tina will say?”
“Say about what?”
“Y’know—us not being at school.”
“I really don’t give two shits on what Tina has to say.” Bette said bitterly and looked at Helena. She sighed softly. “I’m sorry—I didn’t mean to sound like a bitch.”
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i loved this too!!!
Aki sure did like this chapter and how Al and Dana had their first sex together, funny and sweet at the same time. And felt bad for Shane telling her story of herself to Carmen, and last but not least my fav couple Helena and Bette,,,,,so sexy and already I know they are falling for each other and hard whether they want to or not. Oh yeah, I love Kit she rocks and tells things as they are, and she can see that Bette is into Helena. Great chapter Aki!!!
As long as you will write, I shall read. Tomorrow I had to get up at 8 so I am really glad that I get to read your post as my night cap and a damn good one too. Wow, a younger version of S2 Ep5, I love it. It is like 61 outside right now, even with several windows open, I still feel hot. What have you done? I miss those two together. Oh well… Shane being jealous, I forgot the Carmen/ Jenny thing. I always view Shane as the really cool type with very controlled emotion. She is my favorite after A & D because she is Yoda. I am glad right away she opened up to Carmen. Why couldn’t IC write like you people. I have said it before, most of the fanfics are way better than the show. Akira, thank you for a memorable chapter. Can’t wait till your next post.
i’m always a big fan of this story… but… hey, shane and carmen is going extremely SLOW…!! I don’t know how long shane can wait, i mean the sex (maybe it’s just me can’t wait, lol) please update soon!!
helena and bette as teens is a great fit…they’re just a great fit overall. maybe thats why the show hasn’t put them together–they’d be too easy in a way. you should write this as an epic, making them go through their 20s and then 30s, with partings and coming togethers and all of that fun stuff…i’d totally keep reading, even if it took you a long long time.
Clumsy Alice and Dana sex? Classic! I loved it all..pps
yay! you posted! mmmm first hot Danish sex!
ACB, Good to see Bette and Kit sorting things through. Bette’s needs to listen to her sister sounds and follow her instructions. Taking days off could coz her problems in the future. Shame about their college plans but I guess that there is time to sort things out. Sweet to see Shane open up to Carmen. It explains a lot about how Shane deals with the world in the way that she does. I think that Carmen will take this on board and see the real Shane. Loved Dana and Alice. They are just beginning the marvelous adventure of physical pleasure. More please as I am waiting to see how Tina handles this all, Fabulous. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.