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Carmine lips : caramel skin # 3
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Previously
She took her time to find my ear.
“See babe…”, she bit my ear lobe and waited, my moan was my response.. How could I resist?
“We don’t need to rest or wait…”
And she dipped forcefully, my fingers inside of her wet and hot core.
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I felt… I felt I was one of those watches on the Dali’s The Persistence of Memory… One of those melting watches… I felt…I felt washed. A wave of flames spread itself all over me. It began in my fingers, and warmed my body. Then a portion of cold breeze took place. The pure and utter excitement.
But other of her innumerous gracious torments took my breath away. The moment she pushed my fingers deep inside of herself, her body reacted and Bette…, Bette arched her back and my nipples met hers, and to me, the merciful shot came when Bette moaned.
“Ahhhhhhhhh, Babe…it feels so good to have you deep inside”
When her heavy words, that mass of air, full of redness, need, pleasure, lust, impacted my ear, my senses, absolutely shameless and impervious to disgrace, I was lost to the unbelievers: I was found to love.
That’s when I felt liquid.
Bette was moving slowly, almost finger fucking herself. I was moving in the same path, letting she engulf my fingers. Intently following her movements. She slid her left hand to found my pussy.
My pleasure, my desired spread all over it. She slid it between my labia minora. Slowly in. Slowly out. Her fingers crossing, brushing, grazing, burning my clit.
And I felt myself going … I felt follow. I felt traveling. I felt my heavy breath. I felt a smile crossing her face. Because her face was brushing mine. She was still breathing in my senses.
Her lacking in promptness. Her willingness told me…Now I would have other experience. There was a night and Bette took her time. No desire precipitation’s now.
She brought her face from mine and locked eyes with me. Her hand found mine still inside of herself, slowly moving. Now she was following me. Her eyes craved mine. She stopped the movements. She slowly took her fingers inside of herself. I could see the mix of pain and pleasure in her frowned remark. Then she opened her eyes found mine, brought my fingers again to her mouth and sucked.
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wow Braz !!!! that was more than hot… that was wild… :-)) The way you tell this story, this love scene, is so lively, it’s really overwhelming, especially because you tell it from Tina’s point of view, it makes us not spectators but actors of the scene, and it’s very moving :-) —-so you wonder what I mean by “one night, centuries ago…” : well my very first night of love was… so loooong agooooo, and if I’m nothing like Tina, and She was not at all like Bette…(we’re real life ordinary girls, not Hollywood stars ;-) I remember it very well, ……and you have such a way with words that it’s like you’re telling what I would have liked to write (if I had the talent… ;-)) She was my soul mate… (she still is), but the passion of youth is irreplaceable, and the very first discovery of feelings, emotions, sensations is something that cannot be matched, ever, when decades have gone, and habits have blunt the fierceness of sensations… You, my dear, really have the power to attract the reader into the story you tell, instead of just giving it to watch … it’s something quite rare and you are very talented at it… you make me feel young again, and wanting to travel 20 or 30 years in the past to undo some things, and redo some others differently… or simply to re-live some… ;-) — no threesome for me, thank you ;-) and how do you dare to write that “I” provoke and forget about it… when you write such wonderful, and teasing scenes… and just stop in the middle… well I hope it’s not the “middle” yet… let’s have some more, please !! —- and I also want some more of your other (and dramatic) story (which, fortunately, doesn’t remind me of my personal history…) So, Please, continue to grace us with your wonderful writings…
Braz Baby you get me hot each time I proofread a chapter. I was proofing this last night while I was on Skype, and I was reading parts out loud, adding a little raspy tone, and a few satiable moans at all the right places. Needless to say my friend, you had a few woman rather hot and a little bothered…well some….some of us could act on our urges and take care of them. YOU are ONE HOT NC HOOCHIE MAMA!!!!! Thanks for the emails babe. xoxoxo
Thank you for not letting this chappy be a cliffy!!!Wow Braz, I don’t know what melted faster my ice cream cone or my……!!!This is better than running my 2 miles daily,either way I sweat and get hott!!LMAOOOO!!! GRRRRRRRR,LOVED THIS CHAPPY BRAZ!!!Mwahhh, talk to ya laterz babe!
Wow, quite exciting. A shower will not even cool me off now.
Damn that was hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Oh my,this other side to your authorship is, for lack of a better wording, juicy:-) PPS;-)
This is so overwhelming good. You describe so good the connection between those two. My heart skips a beat thinking about this will end later on. Thanks.
Wow. I shouldn’t have read that at school. But wow! That was great. And you know what ? I’ve always loved Dali, and that’s not about to change lol. Great chapter, I can feel my libido burning right now. Good thing I have a swimming class a little later right?
Well, I read this at work which wasn’t the smartest idea. LOL! Usually seven pages of sex make me groan and not in a good way. This however, wasn’t boring at all. It wasn’t the erotic equivalent to the Hokey Pokey. But fuck, this isn’t going to have a happy ending, is it? :(
wow, what a hell of a way to start the day, but dear god woman are u trying to kill us, my heart is beating so fast, and i think i am actually sweating from reading this. i think we should do the ratings in flames and this would be a 10 alarm fire…..great job!!!!smokin!!!
OH MY GOD!! Just OMG!! I’m at a loss for words!This chapter was so awesome, & HOT!! OMG I really need a cold shower LOL!!I really love the way you write, it’s poetic!I can’t wait for the next chapter!!Thank you so much for this amazing fic my dear Braz!!