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Let it Ride 14b (Bonus Chapter)
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The Next Morning- (3 Days since Hospitalization) (or, enjoy this as much as I did writing it.)
The low, throaty moan filled the room effortlessly and there was no doubt it had trickled out into the hallway.
Grinning smugly in the dimness at the thoroughly arousing sound, Alice pulled her head back and whispered in a warning tone, "Better be quiet, Dane. We don’t want to wake up Helena."
Dana groaned in frustration at the teasing lilt in her girlfriend’s voice and she tried to push Alice’s head back down to where it had been just seconds before. Alice wouldn’t resume her previous ministrations but met Dana’s gaze with a questioning glint in her own eyes as she asked seriously, "You promise you’ll be quiet?"
The tennis player’s breath grew shallow as she managed an enthusiastic nod. Wrapping her hand back around Alice’s head, Dana tried again to bring Alice’s lips closer to her bare chest. The musician had thrown her bra and top beyond the couch just moments before and Dana shivered at the conflicting sensations. The cool air made her shiver but the warmth of Alice’s body and the heat in her touch caused even more quaking. This time Alice responded to the pressure at her neck and dropped her mouth to Dana’s chest with a greedy sigh. The athlete’s eyes rolled beyond up and she arched her back to Alice’s coaxing touch; consequently pressing her head further into the cushions.
Dana bit her lip roughly to keep from voicing her pleasure too loudly and between muffled choruses that consisted mostly of Alice’s name and God’s, the tennis player managed to pant urgently, "Bedroom, Al. Let’s go."
The musician’s eyes twinkled mischievously as she whispered playfully, "I’m too weak. I can’t move from the couch."
Dana let out an agonized breath and her eyes shut tightly as Alice’s mouth closed around a hardened nipple.
The tennis player stuggled to remain lucid enough to ask breathlessly, "What- what about, Helena?"
The athlete could feel Alice smiling against her breast; truly feel the shape of the musician’s happiness as her teeth scraped against the sensitive flesh. Looking down through veiled blue eyes, she saw only the top of Alice’s head and she gently combed her fingers through it as Alice worked.
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What do you mean ‘don’t comment’ – we have to comment on this fantastic additional sexy chapter – wonderful – keep it coming.
Have to say that I don’t get onto the site as frequently as you update (not that I’d ever complain about you updating this story so much–its fn phenomenal), so I don’t get to comment as much as I should because I usually read a few chapters at a time. Anyway, I love this story so much. Your writing is just incredible and you are churning out these chapters so quickly that it makes me feel like a jerk for updating my story once every three months…oh well. This story is absolutely perfect–keep up the good work!
hey i love this story so much i havnt left to many comments just a few at the start but i just want to say how good it is and where are you? i miss you you’ve been gone 2long!!i know its only been like 4days or so but i still miss you!come back soon!!
You are so bad… no, so good. I did not expect you to write again tonight and you did. Naughty naughty! “I’m too weak. I can’t move from the couch.” & “Dana could have caused the dead to rise.” What happened to the no sex rule? Did they toss it out the window? This was indeed a lot of fun. It was a 5 alarm hot update. Helena catching them reminded me when Lara & D was caught in B & T’s living room. That was very funny. Thank you again. btw, I forgot to say in the your last post that you cannot compare apples and oranges. MT’s “You” focuses on D’s illness. Becaue it is a very heavy subject, of course the writing will be more serious. This does not mean your story is any less significant. I want you to know for the last time, this story is excellent. You are way too humble! Just graciously accept all the compliment that comes your way. Ok? And good night for the 2nd time. (you are going to kill me sooner or later!)
w0w! sure wasn’t expecting this to come so fast, glad you posted again though. HOT! yeah that was all I wanted to say. okay, gotta go n0w!:)
Ha ha….poor Helena to have to witness that…what am I saying? I wish I was Helena and got to witness Dana and Alice…it’s very reminicent of the Lara and Dana in Bette and Tina’s living room scene…so glad to have gotten my fix of ur writing this morning.
Frip that was great I loved it,,and poor Helena loved what she told them LOL,
Okay, I know you said not to comment, but I wanted to thank you for this little gem before I run to class. Not that I’ll be able to concentrate on Contemporary World Issues now or anything, but still. Thanks. :)
Haven’t had a chance to post much on your story!!! Love it & Have been reading since the beggining!! Keep up the good work!
Ok, I started reading this this morning and I just finished because I had to work, but anyways, you did a wonderful job with this lil’ chapter. You did a VERY good job! I love how Dana tried to be quiet and whisper to keep Helena from waking up, but it didn’t work!!! LOL Anyways, can’t wait 4 the new chapter!!! PPS.