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Who Would Have Thought? Chapter 29
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Tina’s Side
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"Baby I need to stay here for a few more days or maybe I’ll ask my boss if I can take a leave of absence for a whole month." I said as we made our way to our hotel. "Baby are you okay?" I asked Bette when I saw her almost tearing up.
"Yes I am." Bette said as she smiled at me and reached for my hand.
"Thank you for being here." I said as I kissed her hand.
Bette just nodded and looked outside the window.
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Bette’s Side
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Just when I thought everything is going so well, this thing happens.
Am I really going to break up with Tina? I don’t know if I can do it. What if I hurt her so much that she won’t come back to me.
I looked at Tina who is lying beside me and I felt my tears starting to fall.
"I don’t want to break up with you." I thought to myself as I kiss her on the forehead.
"Why are you crying?" Tina asked me.
"Nothing. I just love you so much. Remember that. Please remember that." I said as tears continued to fall.
"I know that." Tina said as she wiped away my tears.
"I love you." I said as I kissed Tina on the lips.
I wanted to feel her.
I don’t know how much time we have left before I break up with her. I just want to feel her. This may be the last time I would be beside her like this.
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Tina’s Side
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Something is bothering Bette but I can’t tell what it is. I assumed it was because of my father because when we talked to him earlier, he acted like Bette didn’t even exist.
"How am I going to make it up to Bette? She left work yesterday even though she had a meeting and she also has to finish a report." I thought to myself as I make our breakfast.
"You’re already up." I said as I saw Bette walk out of our bedroom. And for the first time, she didn’t greet me good morning with a kiss on the lips.
"Baby what’s wrong?" I asked Bette as I walked towards her.
"Nothing." Bette said avoiding my stare.
I reached for her face and I saw her puffy eyes.
"Have you been crying all night?" I asked her as I hugged her "Why?"
And I felt Bette started to cry. I pulled back from our embrace so that I can see her face but Bette just held me closer to her.
"I love you." I heard Bette say.
"Baby what’s wrong?" I asked again and I was having this weird feeling that something wrong is happening.
Bette took a deep breath.
"Nothing." Bette said as she wiped away her tears. "Good morning." She said and she kissed me on the lips.
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Bette’s Side
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"Pull yourself together!" I said to myself. "If you’re going to do this better do it right!"
So I did.
I pretended that nothing is bothering me.
I pretended that everything is fine.
I pretended that nothing wrong will happen between us.
"We have to go back to LA. I still have to talk to my boss about my leave of absence and I know that you have a report to finish. And I also have to bring more clothes." Tina said as we left the hospital.
"Tina I don’t think that I can come back here with you." I said.
"It’s okay babe. I understand." Tina said.
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Love this story but thats B.S. Bette should so not do this, she should actually tell Tina about it. I’m getting angry,.
Hope more is coming tonight. This seems unfinished like a page is missing rather than a cliffhanger. Thanks for sharing your talents with us!
Yeah it does feel like a page is missing. I also agree that Tina’s mom’s idea is total bullshit. It’s only a story but if Bette goes through with this, it will probably be the most I’ve ever been pissed off at a character. Seriously.
I’m usually a silent reader but I have to comment and say that I can’t believe that you would let Bette act that way. I am one of the mad readers right now.
uuuuhhh milking it for all its worth dramaqueen:-) I like your resistance and patience, not everyone can handle the pressure of us tibetters hehe. All I can say is please post very soon!
OK this really sucks ass what Tina’s mom has asked is just crazy. Why would Bette think doing this would help anything? It’s tearing her apart now what does she think it will do to T. Tina’s parents are going to cause her to be devistated, what kind of way is that to show love and Bette should see that it is so not the right thing to do. Please let T sit Bette down and make her tell her what is going on. PPS
Please please don´t let bet do anything silly she shouldn´t listen Tina´s mom!
That’s just a bunch of BS!!! How Tina’s mom can even shaper her mouth to spout out foolishness such as this is beyond me!!! I hope Bette folds under the pressure and tells Tina what’s up!
The love of my kife had a heart attack in 1977. He worked for 15 more yrs, before the next one. With a heart attack some are ill and never recover completely, Some set on there butt pretending to be ill. People will wait on them hand and foot. Tina Mom is so wrong. so wrong. Bette csn’t hurt herself and Tina because 10 yrs down the road Tinas Dad might die That is so wrong.
WOW!!!! Krusty, you have started something that has a lot of people up in arms. Bette needs to tell Tina the truth and let Tina deal with her mother. I so love the DRAMA!!! Great Update. Thanks
Please Bette don´t do this! Tina´s mom really sucks! Bahh she is a bad mom! Great chapter and PPS
Now you know what Ilene must have felt like when the “tractor” scene was leaked out. WOW talk about hate mail. I trust you will ocntinue the story in the same manner that you started, great. And the sign of a good story, movie etc is to get the audience to react positive or negative. My dear, I believe you have done that!!! PPS.
I hate you!
Breaking up would be a horrible idea! Bette should just be honest and talk to Tina. And then Tina should have a serious talk with her mom for being so stupid.
Really now, Tina’s mother should be ashamed of herself for even suggesting such a thing and even though Bette is very upset just contemplating a move of that sort surely, Tina will keep bugging her to get to the bottom of why she is crying.Surely, you will let Bette break down and tell Tina and not go through with this farce. I know you will stop this madness. Really like the story. PPS
i really don’t like where this is headed.. i don’t want them to brake up
You’re starting a riot here (lol). I agree Bette should talk to Tina.
I can actually feel Bette’s pain… sigh… but I do believe in you in bringing them back right? Right? Just don’t hurt Tina too much until she won’t accept Bette back… ok? Deal? ;)
Hey Krust, I was shouting NOOOOOOOOOOO at the scene yet again. Bette can not do this. I forbid it. Tina’s mom took a real liberty in asking Bette to do this. To do this is denying the love that Bette and Tina share. To do this is the deny that lesbianism is a valid lifestyle. To do this will break Tina’s heart and deny the onw true love that she feels. OK so her father doesn’t accept them but that is his problem. I think that Bette and Tina need to sort through this a be open and honest. Only then will they be content. I know tha you will shape this in your style but puh-lease don’t kill off something so pure and true. There’s my two cents. Many thanks for this frustrating fiction. Your Loyal Fan.
Poor my Bette and please don’t break them up!