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You (Part the Fifty-First)
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The next few weeks were pretty low-key for both of them. Alice kept working on her broadcasts and on her website. Sometimes she worked with the IT guys from the station, but she mostly worked while Max was hanging around the apartment. After a couple evenings it got to be nice having him around. Dana really seemed to enjoy his company, and sometimes Alice would come home from the station and find the two of them camped out on the couch, watching old tennis broadcasts on ESPN2 and commenting on everything they saw.
She supposed it was good. None of the rest of them were really THAT into tennis. Sure, they watched it, but mostly because Dana was on it. Or at least had been before. Helena had a passing interest, but even she wasn’t as enamored with the sport as Max seemed to be. He could spend what seemed like hours on the couch with Dana, analyzing every play with her. Of course, Harrison could do that too, but Alice knew how elated Dana always got when someone not directly involved with the sport was a fan of hers. It seemed like she was grateful just to have someone to talk about it with, which Alice totally understood.
She knew how hard it was for Dana to even watch a match anymore. The two of them had tried it, but it just hadn’t gone that well. Alice had figured the wound was still too raw, but it seemed to be the opposite when Max was around. She guessed it might have had something to do with Max being excited that one day Dana would play again. While Alice certainly supported the idea, she knew Dana could tell she had reservations on it just by looking at her. While she knew it didn’t upset Dana and that she understood, Alice still hated feeling like she was bringing her girlfriend down.
She could see how hard Dana was working, Since they’d come back from their weekend, her physical therapy had gotten more intensive, and Harrison had started to come over every few days to stretch Dana’s arm out and work her through some range-of-motion exercises. While it was obvious that Dana realized her limitations and wasn’t expecting to jump back on the court right away, the desire to do so was in her eyes plain as day. She never said anything about it, but Alice knew how much she wanted to get back out there, in whatever way she could. It broke her heart to try and imagine the pain Dana must be feeling at the prospect of never again having something that had been her entire life for a very long time.
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geez, I think your story is kinda turning me lesbian! ;p (you should add a warning next to the NC-17… ACHTUNG BABY!!!) Seriously now, I loved it MT! Eskerrik asko! (thanks!;)
Huh, somehow parts of this chapter seemed familiar, lol. Nicely done with the trust issues leading to the final scene. Makes me wonder what’s going to happen next?!
It worked beautifully. I am touched by the presentation of this trust issue. There is no doubt after this act that they should be able to move forward emotionally without any other doubt of their love and devotion. Having A stopped at the first try was genius because it showed her compassion and thoughtfulness towards D. I echo what MaGoose wrote. See, there was no need to kill Dana and once again, you have shown us how to explore deeper into their relationship (no pun intended). I love this chapter and I salute you, MT. I wish all couples would be able love and respect each other like you have with these two and the world will be a much happier place.
Thank You For The Update!Classic Line: “Or poke you in the eye with it,” Dana replied. “And I didn’t mean to! But think of it this way…if I hadn’t done that, I’d have thrown up on you. Take your pick.” PPS
Fantastic again MT, i truely dont know how you manage to outdo yourself with each new chapter. I love the way in which you have slowly developed our favourite characters but i’m still so mad. Why could we not have seen this growth and depth on the show. Not long till we actually meet Erin and Leisha tho! :D
What a nice surprise to log in this morning and find a new chapter of “You”. Impeccably written, MT. Wow. This is a great example of how to talk to your lover. Again I am blown away by how you have the girls communicate their thoughts and feelings. I also love the progression of the story and how Dana continues to slowly get stronger and Alice is slowly battling her daemons. Thank you!!
hey MT, and I was quite sure I won’t have a dose of Danish today, thanks for proving me wrong. I’m glad I checked in here. I really like how the girls are communicating with each other. I like how Dana trusts Alice and they’re very open to each other. It’s nice that Dana is still progressing health-wise physically and mentally, even sexually. I hope Alice gets better though. All-in-all this is a VERY good chapter. Thanks for updating. ‘ppreciate it!:D
Hey dude…..a fisting chapter just for me awww dude I’m so happy, but can I just say one thing if we could all communictate as well as they two do in this story we’d get on alot better. I will be looking for updates while I’m in Spain :)
great chapter muted as usual ofcourse god i love this story!! im gunna hate it so much wen it ends if it ends but lets not think about that..hey haha i thort she was gunn ask her to marry her for some reason lol quite the opposite hehe good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey, great as always, they sure do learn how to communicate a lot better with each other and that’s great considering all the problems they had before with that. Very good, great update!