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Who Would Have Thought? Chapter 33
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Tina’s Side
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"What are you saying?" I asked Bette.
"I told you already Tina, I can’t do this anymore." Bette told me.
"You can’t do what?!" I asked Bette.
"I don’t love you anymore." Bette said as she cried.
"I don’t believe you." I said as I approach Bette. "Why are you saying this?" I asked Bette. "Something’s wrong. Just tell me what it is."
"I told you! I don’t love you anymore. That’s the problem!" Bette said as she avoided my hug.
"Why are you doing this Bette? Just tell me what is going on." I pleaded again knowing that Bette didn’t mean it when she said she didn’t love me anymore.
"You’re never around, you left me!" Bette said. "I needed you but you weren’t here." Bette paused as she wiped her tears.
"What?!" I exclaimed as I can’t believe what I am hearing. "I was with my dying father Bette. I thought you understood when I said I needed to be with him."
"I did understood but I didn’t promise I wouldn’t fall for someone else." Bette said smiling. "And I did fall for someone who’s been there for me when I needed someone."
"Julie." I whispered. "Fuck you Bette!" I said as I left the bedroom.
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Bette’s Side
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The moment I saw Tina with that sad, hurtful look on her face, I suddenly felt guilty. I just wanted to die right that moment.
"Why am I doing this to the woman I love?"
"Fuck you Bette!" Tina exclaimed as she walked towards the door.
I reached for Tina’s arm before she got the chance to leave our bedroom. I don’t want her to leave, it’s already late. I don’t want her to drive outside with her being at this condition.
"Tina, please don’t leave." I said as I reached for Tina’s arm.
"Let me go!" Tina exclaimed.
"Please.. stay here. It’s already late I don’t want you to get hurt." I said as I gripped her arms even tighter.
"You don’t want me to get hurt?!" Tina said as she looked at me. " Fuck you!" Tina said as she started to cry. "You don’t want to hurt me?? You have no idea how much I am hurting right now! I love you soo much.. how could you do this to me?"
"Tina.." I could only say her name.
"Just let me go." Tina said as she removed my hand from her arms.
And with that, Tina left.
"Oh I forgot." Tina said as she turned around. "Give these to Julie." Tina said as she removed the rings on her ring finger. The one that we both have and the one I bought her.
It’s done.
My plan worked.
It fucking worked.
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Hello x_krusty, I trust you are going to fix this, but I just want you to know you broke my heart. I hope Tina’s mother drowns in a river of sorrow for what she has done to her daughter and her soul mate. JC
KRUS!!! Please… please don’t do this.
ouch, cheeeeeeetttttttttt, ouch, if Tina’s mother had ever been deeply in love she never would have done this to either of them. Md
I”m glad you’re feeling some better.As I said in the last post Tina will probably have a bad wreck. No matter what Tina’s mom wanted for Bette to be that cruel to Tina she doesn’t deserve her. aaaaaa i’m so angry at Bette right now! Please post soon.
How will Tina ever forgive Bette. Her fathers dying for crying out loud. And what the hell is wrong with Bette. Never mind the shame Tina’s mother should and hopefully will fill. Poor Tina, With loved ones like that who the hell needs them.
I’m glad I’m not in this story. The ending wouldn’t be a happy one. lol Seriously I would not forgive my mom and if I forgave Bette it would take a LONG time to get there.
With a broken heart I will continue to read, I still have trust in you don’t let me down. PPS
Oh no..NO YOU DIDN´T :(
Perhaps Tina getting into a car wreck will be the icing on her mother’s plan. That way Bette and her mother can wound her physically as well as emotionally. Two for the price of one… yippy!
Tina will hate her Mother for a long time over this,if and when she finds out. I would never ask someone to hurt one of my childre like Tina Mom did. Dont believe that the two hearts that was broken can be mended let hope they can. thanks
OMG!!! Damn you did do it. Poor B&T. PPVS Thanks
How Could u? :(
Hope you’re gonna fix this!!!
It’s official: I HATE Tina’s selfish mother for coming up with this scheme. Thanks!
Damn, I guess that it did work. The only problem is that with Tina being devastated she will be no help to her mother or father. In fact it will probably be worse because she is soooo depressed.
Im crying!
And your plan to break our heart works… it does… really… oh my… please please please get well soon and post more :)
You’re in deep s***. Make this right please!
Auch… That hurt! :S Don´t like Bette anymore! xD Can I kill please Tina´s mom? Great chapter , hope you stay better! :D
plz fix this !!! i can’t see them like this
Oh boy…….X……I sure hope you put on your armour today!!! Very touching, very moving, very, very, hurtful……FIX IT soon.
Tina’s dad needs to see how hurt Tina is and change his tune
hi there iam sorry to hear that you were sick and i hope that you feel better today we missed you, now about the story that was harsh i feel so sad but you are going to fix this right, i hope that tina’s mother realizes what she has done to her daughter, this chapter was hard to read the only good thing that you are back Thanks.
ummm x_Krusty I know you wrote this a long time ago but just know if I find out who you are im gonna kick your ass! lol hahahahahha ok im only kidding but could you do this, I really feel the pain Tina’s heart and you know what it freaking hurts *tears*