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Daily, together and apart # 31
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“God, then came the discussion about Angelica and the sole custody affair! That day…the day you ran with Angie…I was out of my mind. I was mad at you. I was hurt. You betrayed me once again…”
Bette tried to interrupt.
“ No…No…Please…I know what I also did…. I know, believe me. I threatened you with the gift that you most love: our daughter…But, I was so mad. So frustrated! And our friends saw it. I heard from myself. I seemed like a shore in a tormented day. The waves of anger against you. They heard. Our friends heard. I saw I broke their hearts.” Her voice diminished the volume. “And worst…I ignored it. I felt so…so different. I felt like It wasn’t me. ”
The significance of the absence of sound.
“But… After that I finally got what my revenge wanted…I could live deeply all your pain… I could smell it. It could taste it. A monster with sharp nails and ugly face kidnapped your soul and tortured your body. I saw you were defeated. I finally defeated Bette Porter and I ruined my hopes of happiness.
“It was written on your arched shoulder, like you were carrying the weight of the world. Your paled face. The significance of the absence of your smile.
Jenny told me, the girls commented you didn’t eat anymore, you were recluse…They commented…and commented… and commented. They expected a reaction. I knew they were expecting a single human reaction from me. A reaction of someone who lived with you so many years. But they didn’t see it. I was so… so… so damned blind.”
Tina was crying. She was trying hard to hold all the tears inside to give space to her voice, but she was failing.
“And then they just didn’t talk about you anymore. They didn’t want to share your sadness with me…I knew it.”
Bette took Tina’s hands on hers. “Babe…It’s over, T…”
“I have to confess that I went to the university to see you, more than once. I don’t know why…MY hands took me there and when I finally met you, I couldn’t believe my eyes. It was Bette Porter, in a Dolce Gabanna´s power suit sat by a tree.”
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Braz, very HOT chapter!!!! I so love B&T talking. Thanks Great Chapter!!!!! PPS
Boss… No words seriously! It´s fantastic! Love the way Tina is telling the things to Bette!Great chapter and PPS
You are so good Braz! Love this story. So happy that Shane’s prayer “God…Please…Give them the right words…” has been answered. And you write it perfectly. Thank you!
DELICIOUSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Mmmmmmmm this was beautifully written. It is hard whenever one has to talk about difficult things, particularly if it is a painful past. However, its the only way to a happier future for sure. If you cannot clear the air with your partner, spouse, or past love (hoping to be a resumed love * wink *), then it is likely to always have cracks. Gotta get some good putty and fill em up! Hee Hee. Thanks Braz, your the best babe.
Wow that was geat and awesome. Please post more, thanks!
Didn’t read this chapter yet, but i had to let you know that even it’s been a long time since i commented on your stories that i always looking forward to read them. i just love them so much especially this one and carmine lips. thanks for your amazing writing. now i am going to read.
Way too hot for a simple discussion! Thanks great chapter!
Hey, Braz.. Loved the chapter. Strawberry/Tomato LOL! Lots of important talking here. It’s good.. And their passion is still there even after recalling those painful memories.. They’re not running away and that proves they’re different from the last times. Thank you, babe, but what is it you’re congratulating me for? Hmm..? Post soon, dear Brazzy xx
wow!!! that’s all I can say my feelings are so mixed up. Love it.Now did u get my PM? U may be able to help me, plz go look.
I just have to ask. How the hell does one confuse a strawberry with a tomato? lol I’ve had enough homegrown tomatoes this past summer to not make that mistake!
wow, I agree with Kendra here : MUCH too hot for a simple conversation, more like preliminaries to me, hey ;-)) (even if I somewhat got lost with who was saying what sometimes…) dear Braz, I must say, you just get me in the palm of your hand with your writing ;-) — *blushing* I never intended to target your heart, dear, I’m not a huntress… (much too shy for it) and most of the words I wrote in my last comment were not mine (I wouldn’t dare to claim them…) they just express my feelings so well, and I just LOVE poetry, well, that kind of poetry ;-) —- I sent you a PM, did you get it ?
… oh, and really, how can one confuse a strawberry with a tomato ? LMAO, except for the color, they really do not feel and taste the same, and their size is quite different (except if you thought of those really tiny and delectable “date-tomatoes” (I don’t know their name in english, just the raw translation of their name), which are very sweet and sensual ;-) – they are certainly both very enjoyable, but the fruits I really really enjoy are fresh figs, when they are very mature, and you open them with your fingers and just……… hmmmmm *blushing again* I feel I’m just wandering there so I will just stop and re-read your post again (just can’t have enough of them… should have nominated you for “Da Bomb”, well maybe I did, can’t remember if I did or just for “cold shower”…)
Dear Braz, I so agree with helene78 here : “MUCH too hot for a simple conversation, more like preliminaries to me”. God, yes ! Reading these new pages of yours, I just got the delightful tactility of a sweet and very sensuous montain stream running around my hand… sweet sensation of softness in despite of some pebbles bluring the wave here and there – some painful memories in the middle of all this powerful underlying seduction… Our dear aching lovebirds are SO close of the next step, beyond mutual absolution, right into Loveland for good. This slow and increasing pas de deux is SO obviously charged of longing, it could almost be graded NC-17 ! (*wink & grin*) Wonderful work as always, dear Braz. … and thank you for the virtual kiss, Miss : I catched it and send you an other one in return ! ^_^
Yes, please give us another more positive view about B&T’s path to reconcile their hard and painful past, to a new and brighter chapter on their lives. We’ve coped with enough trash with the depressing, sad and nonsense S3, plus a disappointing S4. You surely know how to pour the best inner feelings of B&T bare.