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Rekindle an Old Love
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Two weeks, one day, twenty hours, thirty minutes, and fifteen seconds since Dana broke it off with Alice. The night that they said their goodbyes was heart wrenching. Alice didn’t want to let go of her actual first, true love. “I don’t think that I can live without you.” The words echo in Alice’s head as she laid on her living room floor, listening to Tori Amos. She lay between her dirty clothes, beer bottles, Dana’s few items of clothing, pictures of her and Dana and then in the background of her dimly lit living room her wall was full of pictures of her shrine to Dana. She had on Dana’s tennis jacket as she laid there listening to her deafening music. The black mascara stained her face as she stared up at the ceiling. Everything felt to surround Alice more and more closely around her than usual. She closed her eyes and swallowed hard. Her throat was dry and her body was numb. Her phone was off the hook, her cell was lying next to her, but it was turned off. She didn’t want to be bothered. The first day after the break up, Alice was getting phone calls. Her first phone call was from Shane.
“Hey Al, its Shane,” she sighed heavily. “I wanted to call to see how you were doing. What the fuck happened? I-I don’t understand. I’m sorry. Just give me a call, love you.”
Her next phone call was from Helena.
“Hey Alice. It’s Helena. I—umm, I’m sorry about you and Dana. If you need me for anything darling, just call me okay. Bye.”
Her last phone call was from Bette.
“Hey—it’s Bette. I really hope that you’re doing all right. I’m sorry that this happened. I wish there was more for me to say. Just give me a call.”
Alice was waiting for the next phone call to be from Dana, she was hoping that she would call and tell her that she was sorry for breaking up with her and wanted to take her back, but it never came. She unhooked the phone and threw it across the room. She was knocked out of her trance when she heard the buzzer to her apartment. She licked her dry lips and groaned.
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Loved your new story. NOW DON’T MAKE IT TO EASY FOR DANA. How can she treat Alice like that, after everyting Alice has done for her.
Love it! This is my favorite area for Danish stories. I think the show handled the break-up so badly for the most part. I love to see the fan fiction writers do a better job. I can’t wait to see where you take it next. Thanks so much! PPS!
Wow – I am just back from holiday and found another Danish story which I am thrilled about – and more especially being this part of their relationship – can’t wait to see where you take it as it has got to be much better than the way athe show handled it.
im liking this very much, sad though:( i hope dana realises wat shes left i hope alice doesnt make it easy for her either :) great writing
daaaaaaanish. i’m more of a lace fan myself, which is odd i suppose and is in no way meant to imply that i wanted dana out of the show cuz i did NOT approve of that firing…but i digress…i think this is really interesting. the dynamics with helena and shane and their growing friendship, all totally in the subtext of the show but as always, dealt with much more thoroughly in your fanfic:) dana was a wierd one in a way. she really was cold toward al, not working shit out at all. dana was way more of an enigma than the show was obvious about. anyhoo, i’m reflecting on these things again cuz you hilite them so well. c’est bon akira!
I’m lovin it already. As much as I love Dana I could have strangled her for the way she acted after the break-up. It was as if she didn’t care. But anyway keep going and I can’t wait for your next post.
Awwwww, my poor Al. I hated the breakup if only for the fact that it just didn’t seem true to the the characters, although making Alice crazy was a very stupid way to go. Having Dana leave made sense, since I really don’t think she should have stayed with Alice through all the stupidity…but as helbette pointed out, it didn’t seem like Dana, to leave so abruptly without making sure Alice was okay. Sigh. I’m glad you’re showing that Alice’s friends were there for her, despite Dana walking away so unrealistically. I’ve been reading your stuff for a long time now, I just suck at leaving comments. Can’t wait to see what you do with this one.
Thank you Acb for starting another Danish story. Now I know why A built the shrine to keep herself occupied. Nice touch. This was a really hard time for A and you are doing a great job telling the story. pps.