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Civil Love-Chap 4
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Previously
Melvin reached in his pocket and showed the man his pass. This pass was given to him each time he left the plantation to let other slave owners and overseers know that he had been sent on an errand by his Master.
“Get this stuff up and go, boy. And next time you look at me like that, I’ll shoot you down.”
Melvin packed up the cargo again and hoped that the men wouldn’t find the family he had just dropped off.
A few miles away, the family of three safely made contact with the next person.
“Hi, I’m Alice, and I’m going to take you to your freedom.”
At nightfall, Bette and Tina both got ready for bed. Bette thought about what her Ma had told her. So did Tina. They wondered if this was the way God intended for things to be, why were they both feeling differently? Why didn’t it seem right to them?
Chapter 4
Some days later, Bette and Tina went on as expected. They played a role for weeks. Bette did all her chores as Tina commanded her to. It was a sunny day in Virginia. It was a very hot day. Tina came back from her horse riding lessons and Bette was ordered to come in from the fields and help Tina prepare for her brother’s return. Bette had never worked a day in the sugar fields until Miss Constance ordered her.
She wanted to remind Bette that yes, she was a slave. This was also the day that Young Master Michael was coming home. Master and the Mistress along with Melvin were heading to the train station to pick him up. This was going to take at least few hours to get there and back. Darlene was ordered to cook young master’s favorite food.
As Kit and Darlene prepared the meal, Bette was ordered to prepare Tina’s bath. When Bette entered the room, Tina ordered her to lock the door. Tina was happy that her parents were on this long journey. She didn’t have to pretend to be ugly to Bette; she didn’t have to order her to do things just to make her mother happy. When Bette turned from locking the door, Tina walked up to her.
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oh, succ I just don’t know here!! First off, I thought the Elizabeth and Christina were children-ish,like 12 or something in which case I don’t know if HOT is the appropriate reaction! But even more, I can’t read this without feeling terrified that they are going to be caught…or that, as was mentioned, someone will notice that Elizabeth is freshly bathed. It is clear that Christina knows the danger Elizabeth is in if they are caught, yet, she still wants what she wants, and she thinks that nothing bad will happen because she doesn’t want it to. This is more dangerous for Elizabeth and her family than obvious cruelty. Whether, as in earlier discussion, it is possible for slave owner and slave to have a true love relationship, will be beside the point if, or should I say when, Christina’s whims cause real harm to Elizabeth and her family. I also have a bad feeling about Christina’s brother…
I may be out of line here; but to me this is wrong on so many levels; i.e. Miss Tina has all the power and holds Bette and her family’s life in her hands. If Bette refuses her she’s done for and if she goes along she’s done for. Miss Tina is gonna marry Eric and take Bette and her family with her??? For one that’s laughable and secondly, so Bette will always be her slave plus sex slave?????
God Succulent, you sure found a way to make everybody uncomfortable in just about every conceivable way. Congratulations! You must be doing something right.
For Tina not to know what she should do to ease the strange feeling she is having she sure knows how to improvise.
How sensual a foot massage. It is widely known that a good foot massage will help release tension and other ailing parts of the body not too mention exciting other parts of the body.
Wow that was hot, hope they not get in truouble. Hope Tina’s brother are nice and good. Please post more, thanks!
Please let me know when it’s safe to breathe, because I know this scene isn’t done yet. I think I held my breath the whole time I read this chapter, so fearful that someone was going to walk in and catch them, unleashing terrible consequences for both Tina and Bette…not to mention the hotness of this scene really got to me (in a good way, of course). Great chapter, great story. I’m looking forward to more.
Whew…glad to hear you’re feeling better…I thought you gave up on this one. I’ve been looking for it every day. I’m totally hooked on this one. Please don’t let them get caught! Bette would be beaten for sure. I hope Tina knows what she’s doing and she better be able to protect Bette. PPS
:O!!!!!!!!!! I like the realism here. Bette knows not only she could get the crap kicked out of her, but her family would be in danger as well. Glad you’re feeling better. Those colds can get nasty!
Ooh, mama! That was hot, hot, hot! All that from a foot wash, and such an innocent way to get things started! But you know, this is a risky act in so many ways. A “sure thing” never really is, amd this cliffhanger is gonna be followed by a discovery that either Tina’s folks will return much earlier than expected, or Darlene and Kit will figure that something is going on and come to check in spite of how they aren’t “allowed” up there! Or you’ll come up with a totally different twist, which is far more likely! Anyway, I’m glad you’ve continued this challenging tale–you know I’m certainly hanging in here with it–amd you, too! :-)
i am first wow that’s a first, thank you my friend for this chapter but this is a slow burn you can’t really stop here please continue. i love this story and what are you trying to address, post soonlove
Geez, as I’m reading I’m so afrais that their going to get caught. how will Bette explain being so clean when she is supposed to be in the field? Great story. PPS
somebody is gonna get an ass whoppin!!
Ohhhh indeed!! Glad you are back with this story. I was trying to enjoy that wonderful bath, but I was terrified someone was going to catch them! Thanks!
Wow, indeed. I have to agree this is a dangerous game that T&B are playing. Does Tina not think that Bette mom and Kit will notice that she smells bath, that he hair is wet or washed. Tina thinks she thought this all out, but Bette may be beaten and sold before Tina can blink if she isn’t more careful. And why do have have a looming feeling that this brother of Tina’s is bad news.
Tinas brother is going to be trouble. He will go after Bette,he will want to be her honkie. Tina will put up a good fight to keep Bette safe thanks
Hell-o Suc, Good to have you back and more of this fabulous fan fiction. It is amazing the think that your tortured and tantalzing tale is only set a hundred and fifty years ago. Yes, there is still a world of prejudice and hatred out there but now it is focussed in so many different areas. Here Tina has a plan but we all know that life can intervine at any time an it all goes to shit. I think that Bette is wise to agree with Tina but still keep her guard up as the consequences for her are potentially fatal. And then the bath. How do you make the simplest of scenes, sizzle and steam up the screen. Tina undressing Bette, gave me goosebumps and a nearth region tingle. Then Tina slipped into the water and began to stroke and massage Bette’s foot. Amazing to see how this simple act began to dissolve their reserve and build a sexual awakening unlike any other. The imaginery was intense as they each tool in the other’s body and surrendered to their desire. Now I can wait to see what happens next. Please make it so and make it soon. Many, many thank you’s from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m a silent reader but.. please continue. It’s a lovely story.
Wow so uh……wow…..and wow. This while story is just wow. REally good job!!!!! and you know im not one for the whole foot thing so you better post soon!!!!!!