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The Beginning of a Friendship, chapter 57
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Previously in the beginning of a friendship:
Bette:
The trembling transformed into strong, jerking convulsions, overwhelming me with their power and their need… Waving through me, building up time and time again, I felt it as Ive never done before… The strenght of every constriction, mutliplied the power of my fiercest emotions, it was as if body and soul reinfirced eachother, making every wave of trembling desire, of shivering climax, rise above the other…
I rode the wave of my love for her, and with every movement, dizzyness overwhelmed me more, and yet the fuzz that surounded me now was by no means one of sleepiness…
I felt it all…
The pounding of my heart against my chest, so quickly it was impossible to discover a rhythm…
The throbbing of the waves that continued to free my body of the tension that had built and built untill incredible heights…
The release of the lips that still met my core, slowly moving, as if reluctant to withdraw…
The delicate structure of her hair, surrounding my hands…
I felt it all…
Not in a dream…
Not in a blur…
She was as true, as the feelings in my heart… The heart only she had been able to free… The heart that now skipped beats in the realisation that all of it had been true…
The heart that trembled, inable to believe it true, as she uttered the words it so desparately longed for…
I love you… I love you… I love you…
Tina:
Her legs had started trembling, as did her hands, and I felt how her hips rose several inches from the ground as her taste changed, subtely… My fingers moving faster and faster, deeper and deeper, smoother and smoother inside of her, my lips conquering the throbbing heat underneath them…
With every thrust of my fingers, I wanted her more, I felt the sensation in my mouth change as well as the pressure of her fingertips on my skull. Her abdomen was toned, her navel filled with the droplets of transpiration that travelled down her body, her legs, enduring great amounts of tension, quivering tremendously. The sweetness exploded in my mouth as I felt the first tug of her body… Like nectar, filling my oral cavity, coating it carefully so I could relish her taste wholly…
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I had this chapter ready to be posted for a while, and something happened in the mean while to which I want to draw some attention… In the Mexican state Tabasco there is a terrible situation due to the rain, 80% of the state is under water, hunderd-and-thousands of ppl have lost there houses, their possesions, their land… All crops, all for which is worked so hard, is lost… Ppl are on the roofs of their houses, and for those who are safe, terrible times are ahead to, for they have lost everything… Pls lets all try and find a way to help Tabasco! http://mexicotoday.blogspot.com/2007/11/how-to-help-tabasco_02.html (Not much yet from other countries then Mexico, but pls keep ur eye out!)
you posted… im glad. Thanks so much for ur post and for everything in it. It is a great deal for me that you care about my place, even im not there i have family and friends there that is suffering because this… Please put Tabasco in theirs prayers that will be of so much help…My friend ur post is as good as always… i like so much to read such a wonderful chapter. Thanks for everything u are such amazing person. TAPS EIFEUNA xxx
I’m not first this time either because, well, YOU ARE! XD It’s weird how tears can mean several things. When I get super pissed off I tend to cry because there’s just nothing else I can do. And yes I’m looking forward to Blackpool! :D
It’s about time Bette woke up! Tears are a great way to release some emotion. Wonderful update.
Ok being in their heads drove me crazy they need to talk lolI meant to say that the super long post make me happy!!!!!!
Chapter was god. You take pleasure in scaring me don’t you??
Back you certainly are, my dear friend!!! What a chapter “a la” JLBT!!! But gosh aren’t you a tease… You scared me there. I thought Tina was going to take off and the muisunderstanding lead to some awful misinterpretation of each other’s actions… One would certainly say that it’s high time they’d reassure each other about their feelings, but noooooo…. Not with JLBT, the “slowburn” queen!… But hey, that’s what we love about you!!! Don’t change a thing! ;) I just hope that Bette can allay Tina’s fears in your next update, cause I really felt for Tina, who considers her actions as shameful whereas we all know that Bette would in fact probably wish to wake up that way every single morning, wouldn’t she?… Anyway J, I’ve really missed you, and i’m so glad you’re back. Your writing, and especially this fic, as you well know, make my days, and you can count on my eternal hookeditude (a French word created in royal times that means that I’m so completely hooked!). May the fanfic gods bless you my friend! Thanks ;) K.
well again my dear friend u leave me absolutely breathless and with tears in my eyes..i dont know how u do it but u evoke so much emotion in your writing and it just fills my heart with such joy and hope..if only i could find a true love that u depict in your writing i would be so happy and fulfilled in life..**blushing**..your writing just moves me so much and i can always feel the great intensity of it with every word u convey..if only u knew how truly marvelous of a writer u were,its like words cant even describe the breadth of your writing..i appreciate it so much b/c it gives me a feeling of hope and peace within myself that maybe one day i will find that one person who completes me.. i cant wait to read more and more of your other stories as well..please post as soon as u can… :) :)francament(sincerly),your fan,Christina :) :) may love and happiness be always with u… Ciao bella..until we meet again..love always, me..mwaaauuhhhhh..xoxoxoxoxo
Wow – you do know how to wake someone up (smiling) damn you leave cliffhangers girl (laughinh) but just as amazing as always. I sooo love this story as so do many others. Can’t wait for the next chapter to arrive. Post soon
firstly, its such a shame about the ppl in Tabasco. Hopefully they will get more than enough support!! I’ll def be makin a contribution..secondly, once again a great chapter! You can def keep us guessin doll… so very sneaky of you was that chapter ;)Can’t wait for more!
I was excited to see that you had posted a new chapter to this loving story. This just goes to show how we can second guess ourselves all the time and may cause more pain to our selves in the long run. I hope that they can talk about what had just taken place and put what they thought away.
JLBT Thanks very much for asking help to relieve the ppl of my Country, at the state of Tabasco. They surely need that support. We have already made our contribution. You are an amazing woman and the most kind human being we have ever met.- As for ur update, the journey you have taken us is not uncommon for Marsha (my Madame proper) & I. Sometimes, true love can be so intense that it makes us weep, not out of sadness, but because we are so overwhelmed about that feeling. It bursts out of your chest and reaches your soul and everything else goes beyond reason. You are completely reduced to feelings… and being hugged by the one you love, it just shatters you, but also gives you comfort and peace. Then, the crying is a release of all the pent up emotions you have inside and you feel relieved and in peace. A dear friend, who passed away 3 months ago, told us something once. He said: “When you find someone you’re not afraid of crying in her arms, and even if everyone else around you think you are making a fool out of yourself; if that special someone holds you tight, comforts you and never lets you go, then, you have found true love”. Perhaps you caught his wisdom and you pour it into this bittersweet chapter, to share it with us. Thank you so much, from the bottom of our hears. Hugs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Wow what an excellent chapter. You really took me on a mind trip here – and I loved it. Can’t wait for you to send me on another one! Your writing is beautiful! Thank you!
Great chapter. Love B&T and can’t wait to see more, thanks!!!!!!!!
I love your story so much! Hope you´ll write us another chapter as soon as possible…
thanks honey i am heading to read now then comment love
Hey you :) You got me scared at first… I thought they’re going to run away and avoid each other forever after that :P But then it turned intense… how tears find their way when the emotions are overwhelming and how Bette’s fear of being abandoned when she found love. This just shows that it’s very important that a child’s upbringing will over shadow their adult life path. For Bette’s case her mother’s leaving and for Tina’s case… I think it has something to do with the mother too? To make her self-confidence so low and blaming herself when even a small thing turn out not in the right place? Hope they’ll clear the air soon and will stick together eternally ;) And ooo… hope can catch you on IM sometimes, sorry to have missed you last time as I tend to leave my IM on even when I’m sleeping or not around ;P The trip was a blast! Will share more with u when I catch you on IM. :D
Seriously, what a way to wake up girl!!! Finally, you posted!! Hey there JLBT!!! I was starting to think that you have forgoten about the story. Jeje. No, I’m just kidding. I know sometime work gets heavy. But I’m happy that you are back and whit a lonnnng chapy… I love it amd you really are the “slowburn” queen my friend! I just hope for the next chap that they talk, Please! It’s driving me crazy to be inside her heads and I almost got into my PC to shake Bette and make her wake up!!! Please, let them talk, even if it’s about the weather… Ok. I’m off to study, I managed a nice mark on my last examen and now I have to learn about the parasites!! I hope we can chat sometime soon. Take care and don’t take so long to post the next one…..
Had the super glue ready to help men Tinas broken heart.The fear she had was so heartbreaking. My young friend you have out done yourself on this chapter. What a wonderful way to be woke up. Tears of fear then of happeness. thanks
great chapter, very emotional…..yep, i’m ready for blackpool ;)
You took me to that tunnel of love that you go through once in a life time and see the light of freedom of the soul at the end of it holding the love that you have found, not knowing whether your paths are going to collide or not after passing it, that’s how your story make me feel. You are a love biologist and your story is like the wisdom that a man conceive at the end of his life journey and realize, it all has been about love, I know most of us see it as a love scene but I see it as poetry. for the love that is in your heart and for the tenderness in your words and for the gentleness of your soul, I am honored to be one of the recipient of your talent, I truly understand what are you trying to shed light upon, the concept of how angelic the feeling of love can be, it still can make you weep, however the reality of the feeling makes it all reasonable, and I have been an actual witness, those tears are for the possible loss of the earthly heaven that you have been blessed with. My dear friend I thank God for your alluring existence, believe me with all the things that I have said and with the urge of saying more, I don’t have the capacity nor the imagination to express the gratitude the I feel in my heart for the love that you share with us, your proud readers.Thank you. With All my love.