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    Young Love: Chapter Twenty-Nine

    Story written on November 4, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Carmen wants to be alone. Shane catches her father and figures something out. Dana and Helena meets a new girl.

    “Carmen!” Shane grabbed a hold of Carmen’s wrist, and Carmen snatched her hand out of her grasp.

    “Don’t touch me right now. I really don’t want to see you.” Shane took a step back. “Just leave me alone.” Carmen walked away from Shane, and Shane hit the locker. Shane walked away and headed back to the cafeteria. She walked out the door and back over to the table. She took a seat and rested her head on the table.

    “Where did she go?” Dana asked

    “I don’t know,” Shane shook her head. “She told me to leave her alone.” She sat back up and sighed. “All I did was look.”

    “That’s all it takes, is just one look. You were looking at busty cadet once again while you were talking to Carmen.” Dana spoke up. “If you want Carmen to stay around, you better watch yourself around Roxy. Better yet, just stay away from her.”

    “You know Dana’s right. You should just stay away from her.” Helena nodded.

    “Thanks guys, but I know I can keep my distance from Roxy.” Shane got up from the table. “I’m going home for today.” They said bye to Shane as she walked away from the table.

    “I really hope that Shane doesn’t do anything stupid. Carmen is great for her.” Bette took a drink of her shake.

    “Let’s just hope that she doesn’t. We can’t stop Shane from doing what she wants to do.” Alice added. “She’s eighteen years old. She’s technically an adult. Well not the best thinking adult, but an adult.”

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    “Shane,” Shane looked up and saw her dad rushing into the foyer of the house. “What are you doing home?”

    “I wasn’t feeling well so I came home.” She looked at her dad and noticed that he was all sweaty and out of breath. “What are you doing home? I thought you had to work.”

    “I took the day off,” he sighed and smiled, and Shane smiled skeptically.

    “I’m going to get something to drink.”

    “I-uh let me get that drink for you. Why don’t you go upstairs and lay down.”

    “O-okay,” Gabriel patted her on the shoulder as she began to walk up the steps. She looked back at him as he watched her go up the steps. She continued to go up the steps and made it to her door. She opened it and closed it. Gabriel finally walked off towards the kitchen. Shane slowly made her way back to the steps and stayed behind the corner. She heard voices and looked down.

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    1. Whaaat? I really liked your story.. And you bring JENNY of all people into it? *disappointed head shake* Unless you plan on her being TRAGICALLY stranded on the top of a flag-pole hanging from her underwear..? Is that a maybe? Well, unless you can’t think of something more horrible for her, let’s call it Plan B ;-)

    2. Okay, now how in the world did you have to bring in JENNY..LOL!!!!!!Now thatn she is coming into the picture she will most likely be best pals with Shane, HUH,,hehehehe….And I like how you had Shane and her dad talk, and have Dana might want to come out and take Al the the Cabin, so cool…but hey I miss B&H,,,great chapter Aki

    3. It has to be awful for anyone to have Gab as a father. It brought back all the bad feelings on S3E12. For S, at a tender age of 18 and came to a realization that she was just like her dad was sad. S could do better because we all try not to repeat the same mistakes our parents made. I hope with the help from the gang she would come to terms with it. Little Ms sneaky D, who would have ever guessed that she had the courage to pull a fast one on her parents. Hope A & D would have lots of fun up at the cabin. I always thought D had a thing for J as in S1E1 at the planet when J was walking by outside. And here we are again. Echoing what AngelDana & patpez said, why bother bringing her in and the gang was doing great without her. For the record, I have no problem with MK and like her as an actress. But the character J is way to painful and weird IMO. What the hell, now she got here and c’est la vie! Thanks AKcb for the post.

    4. Like I could ever stop reading your story, it’s to effin’ good. Don’t mind drama/angst just really like happy endings. Even though I also am not a fan of Jenny (only time I found her some what normal and tolerable was S2 with J&S friendship,now she’s just a crazy biotch) I am quite intriqued to see what you do with her cause you are one hell of a writer.

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