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Young Love: Chapter Thirty
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“So Jennifer, what state are you from in the Midwest?”
“Illinois—Skokie, Illinois.”
“So were you surrounded by fields of corn?” Dana asked interested.
“Yeah—Illinois is just full of farms and corn.”
“Why did you guys move out here?” Helena took a bite of her fry.
“Because my mother wanted something different.” Bette came over to the table and saw the new girl. Jennifer looked up and smiled softly. Helena looked up at her girlfriend and smiled.
“Bette, this is Jennifer Schechter.”
“She’s from Skokie, Illinois.” Dana smiled.
“It’s nice to meet you Jennifer. I’m Bette Porter.”
“Nice to meet you.” Jennifer smiled.
“Are you hungry or thirsty?”
“I’ll take a glass of water.”
“All right,” Bette smiled. “I’ll be right back.” Jennifer smiled at the two ladies coyly.
“What’s wrong?” Helena asked.
“I’ve never met anyone as beautiful and nice as you guys are.”
“Well thank you,” Dana grinned bashfully.
“Thank you,” Helena smiled. “So what school are you going to?”
“I haven’t registered yet. I’m just looking for a job right now.”
“So Jennifer,” Dana spoke up.
“Jenny—call me Jenny.”
“Well Jenny,” Dana smiled. “How do you like California?”
“It’s beautiful here, besides the smog.” The girls laughed.
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Shane stood outside of her house smoking a cigarette. She sighed heavily and exhaled the smoke. She heard the door open and looked back. Shay walked out and closed the door.
“Hey Shay,” Shane snubbed out her cigarette and flicked it. “What’s up?”
“Nothing,” he walked over to his sister. She wrapped her arm around his shoulders and pulled him close. “Where’s Carmen?”
She licked her lips. “I’m guessing she’s at home. I haven’t talk to her lately.”
“Did you do something to make her mad?” He looked up at his sister, and Shane looked down at him.
“Yeah, I did. She wants me to leave her alone for a while.”
“Are you going to talk to her again?”
“Yeah, hopefully,” Shane gave her brother an assuring smile, and he returned the smile.
“I hope you do because I like her.”
“So do I. Hey,” Shay looked up at her. “You wanna go play Halo 3?”
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Great yet again. was alittle worried in the summary about D and A. But it was a nice sweet suggestion from alice. I hope shane and carmen start to talk to each othe more and Bette and Helena. As always they are cute.
loved it of course, and am happy to see that you have college plans..more for us to look forward to!
AKcb, continue to love this story. Plz do not send them to college so soon. There are plenty of time and let just get through Christmas first. I love how A was always so thoughtful and considerate for D. Just so Danish and I never am tired of reading them. Thanks again.
hmmm guess I’m first. Even though you were tired this was one good chapter. If I were dana I wouldn’t rush things either, she might do something she might regret especially with a mother like hers.Hmmm take me somewhere…… now doesn’t that sound familiar LOL.Great job dear can’t wait for more.
Young Love– I hope Shane and Carmen sort things out sooner or later. I’m looking forward to where Dana will come out and how she’s gonna do it. This is good stuff AC…. hmmm take me somewhere hehe PPS:D
Hello ACB, Good to see anothger great chapter for this terrific tale. I just adore reading about the misadventures of these young bucks. Good to see that Shane was able to admit her mistake to Carmen. I do hope this pair can sort themselves out this time. Brilliant to have Dana at a place where she wants to tell the whole world who she really is and stop living a lie. I do think that Alice has to support her at every turn. Then Bette and Helena, wonderful twist on “Take me somewhere” line. Hope that this time it won’t lead to so much destruction. Just perfect. Am loving this story. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Aki you wrote a great chapter here, well you always do, but Iliked thatfact that Al gave sound good advice to her GF. Shay sweet as always and Jenny well she is normal for now,,LOL. And what can I say about my fav couple BH, they are so much in love AWESOME!!!