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    Something so right – chapter two

    Story written on December 2, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette and Tina start to talk

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter Two

    Tina tried to turn away but Bette held onto her arm and they faced each other

    “I am so sorry “

    “Tina – please talk to me”

    “I am sorry “
    “Tina “

    Tina looked at the stunningly beautiful brunette

    “I have never slept with a woman – I am utterly terrified Bette — I am sorry “

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    Bette cursed herself – how the hell had she made such a error ? Her gay-dar was the most advanced in all of LA. She never made mistakes like this – women who were just curious sent out a red warning signal to Bette and she steered clear. Tina was crying – her make up smudged and her face was just crumpled with pain. Bette’s first instinct was to get her mobile and get a cab so she could get the hell out of this situation.

     

    She paused and looked around the apartment – the art was stunning – pieces that she would be proud to own. She realised that she was standing beside a wall covered by bookcases -books were always a great way of assessing a person. There were political biographies, a couple of classics – The Great Gatsby and Catcher in the Rye, lesbian texts – short stories and several crime novels by authors that Bette loved.

     

     

    Bette’s mind flashed back to one night when she had gone back to a woman’s house and they had been undressing when she had cast a quick glance at the books on a shelve above the bed – – as Bette had told Alice later – 50 books – all about serial killers with titles such as “ Women who kill” – it had made her twitchy to say the least.

     

    Then there had been the woman who had to remove the 21 teddy bears from her bed before they had got into it. Maybe Bette’s gay-dar was not as good as she liked to boast.

     

     

    Bette looked at Tina – in the words of The Clash – should I stay or should I go ?

     

    She walked across to Tina and put her arms around her

     

    “Its okay “

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    Comments

    1. Yeah, this story is very easy to fall into because the premise is so good. I’m guessing Helena will hate Bette..and not trust her. However, I hope Bette keeps proving she isn’t just a one night fuck them and leave them type.

    2. My God that is a total torture, i can’t seem to wait, can you make it alittle faster, but i guess that is just a wish and i have to wait right?? very nice Ally as always please continue.Love

    3. Ditto all comments. Audi has a very good point Helena being the preditor type herself will automatically think Bette is out to victomize Tina since I am sure they have run around in the same circles at some time or another but actions speak louder than words. So if Hel watches and listens instead of jumping to conclusions she will see that the old Bette is no more.

    7. Wonderful beginning – how Bette leaves the predator past behind and maybe we will learn something interesting about Tina’s past – thank you Ally great new road with this one.

    11. Yeap… hooked on this one too… Sigh… why did my boss has to changed my flight to UK to 11 Dec instead of 27 Nov, or else I would have met this certain blonde called Laurel in Blackpool too ;)

    14. It’s just something special about beginnings. I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina get along. Sounds like Bette’s predator nature will be put to the test. PPS

    17. ok here I am leaving a note (when I said I hardly ever with your stories), I AM REALLY LOVING THIS ONE, now I can honestly say between this and The L Wing I don’t know which one I’d like you to update sooner!!!! LOVE THIS TINA (strong, confident, knows what she wants etc). GREAT START!!!!

    19. If Liquid is a bear pit how come it’s full of lesbians and not big, hairy, gay boys? Must be nice to be 26 and a rich executive, I’ve not been so blessed. OK, they’ve gone all gooey for each other-carry on.

    20. I love that this Tina has some guns of her own, vulnerable yes, but doesn’t seem to be a pushover…a mix that will be sure to keep Bette on her toes…PPS, as usual I’m addicted already, in a kind way….you’re like what I read about chrystal meth….one dose and you’re hooked for life

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