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Civil Love Chapter 5
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Previously
Tina also began to feel the electricity. Something was moving throughout her body. Her fingers began to knead back and forth on the sole, then she rotated it while pressing. Tina noticed that Bette’s nipples were getting hard. She wanted so much to feel them in her mouth, so much to suck on them. She could see herself rolling her tongue over them.
“Uh…..Hmmmm………hmmm,” Bette moaned when she felt Tina’s fingers walking along her heel.
Bette couldn’t take it any longer. She slowly eased down, laid back and placed her hand on her thigh. As she eased down, she slid her other foot against Tina’s inner thigh.
“Ohhhhhhhhhh……” Tina moaned.
Chapter 5
Bette knew that anything that felt this good had to be a sin. She didn’t want to get caught up in this pleasure: this wave that she was riding, this wave that was taking her to heights off limits. She opened her eyes and saw the white, soft skinned girl in front of her. Her owner, her enemy, her weakness. She looked at the girl who held her life and her family’s lives in her hands. The girl who could make all the promises in the world but had no way of keeping them. She jumped out of the tub, grabbed the towel and wrapped it around herself.
Tina sat up in tub and watched Bette. She couldn’t believe that she wasn’t enjoying herself. That Bette would deny her once again.
“What’s the matter now?” Tina whispered, looking down into the water, feeling embarrassed about what her body and heart were feeling.
“Miss Tina, we can’t do this……we…”
“I told you to call me Tina, Bette!”
“NO, I will not…..You are my master. You are Miss Tina. We can’t explore this. This is all wrong. It’s a sin. We both could burn in hell for this.”
Bette rushed to get her clothes and got dressed. She never turned back around to see Tina. She placed the towel next to the tub and ran out of the room.
Tina sat there and cried. She knew Bette spoke the truth. She knew that what she was trying to do was completely wrong. There could never be anything between them. But how could she not act on her feelings, seeing Bette everyday? She knew what she had to do. She would have to sell Bette.
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Succ, you’re back! I wanted to wait til I had thought about it a while before I responded to the chapter, but I had just one thought or suggestion, and it is just my opinion, and here it is. I know the fic is based on the characters from the show, but those characters are not in this fic…this is stand alone, and so rich and full, and painful and angrymaking that it may be better served using the names they would have been called by in that time period and not the cute modern nicknames? Bette and Tina are now. It pulls me out of the time period. Anyway, this is just my opinion…will write more later. Awesome fic, succ!!
To your credit this story evokes so many emotions, one of them being very angry. To know that people of colour where treated this way, like they where nothing is upsetting and disturbing to me…You are doing a tremendous job with this stroy and I can’t wait to read more. Thanks a bunch Succulent.
I can only imagine all the pain and agony that Bette and her family went through every breath that they took. I was hoping that Michael could help but now I want Michael as far away from Bette as possible. Tina selling Bette is not going to be good either. Maybe Tina and Bette can run away or something like that.
Drama coming poor Bette!
So glad you’re back!!! I’ve really missed this one. What a mess Tina has created…even if she didn’t mean to. Tina’s brother will try to have his way with Bette, Tina will be so upset…then her mother is going to sell Bette off. My heart goes out to Bette being caught in the middle of this family. Being beaten, raped, sold off from her family and hated by the other slaves. She’s getting it from all sides. What a horrible life. Tina needs to think very hard about her feelings for Bette and try to keep her safe somehow. PPS!! This is too good to wait for. :)
Hello Succulent1, I can only imagine how much research this story is for you. This is such a brutal and unsympathetic time in history. You are doing a brilliant job handling the delicate truths that this time held, as well as creating a story that hasn’t (as far as I’m aware) been told during this time line. Can love really conquer everything and how much pain and suffering are you willing to go through and bestow to be with the one you love. Keep up the amazing work. Sincerely, JC
Oh no…
Although you had us all at the edge of our seats at the end of the last chapter, we never lost sight of the danger lurking in the background. Now, you’ve brought it to the forefront in several different realms! This is getting even more scary, and it elicits quite a visceral reaction as one reads this–and you haven’t even gotten graphic! Maybe it’s because we all know far too much about this era… This is very powerful, baby, and I trust you to continue to do justice to this story during this awful time in history!
Aww HEll!! HELL I SAY!! I feel bad for Bette cuz she’s in that situation. I feel bad for Tina cuz she wants Bette, wants to protect her, but doesn’t understand that some of her actions hurt Bette. AND…i feel sorry for me…cuz now i gotta wait around for another part to this amazing story!! LOL.
what is going to happen?? you are such a tease do you know that, but your story is incredible, there is something special about it, thank you my friend for all the efforts that you are putting into this story, it’s absolutely worth it, now don’t be long posting another chapter OK. All my love
I’m hating the direction this story is going. Or maybe I’m just hating the reality of it all. At any rate, you are doing a wonderful job writing it.
Good to see you again Succulent. Ugly times and Tina is only beginning to see that nothing is simple. Michael may not believe in slavery, but as long as it’s around he seems to have few qualms about enjoying his privleges. I guess it’s good to be king. Until you get toppled off your throne.
I was so glad Elizabeth came to her senses and got out of there before anyone caught them, and that only her mother saw her. I think that it is clear that Christina wants what she wants from E, and is not too concerned, it seems to me, with what can happen to Elizabeth. Christina may care for her but she wants her own way, and the fact that she ordered the slaves next to Elizabeth whipped, and the way she spoke to Elizabeth’s mother, indicates she knows exactly what is what. Elizabeth is in so much danger from all of that family. It would be interesting to find out exactly what about slavery brother Michael is opposed to, since I don’t see him volunteering to work in the fields, and obviously has no problem with forcing himself on Elizabeth either, even announcing his intention at the dinner table. It struck me though that as race and class conscious as this time period seemed to be, it really isn’t about race and class, for if it was,privileged Christina would only have to want and it would be so. She is so privileged that she doesn’t even know she has no real power, because she is female, but she has enough to destroy Elizabeth. I stand by my earlier opinion that a slave and a slave owner can’t have a true, equal love relationship. Please don’t wait so long to post again succ!!!