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Closure – Chapter 8
WARNING: Contains violent scenes. Sorry for all the warnings. I just don’t want anyone to be blindsided by it.
Dana and Alice quickly broke apart once Jackie approached them. Alice was pretty sure she had not seen the kiss. If she had, Jackie would not have held back on attacking Dana. As it was, Jackie pulled Alice roughly to her feet and told her it was time to leave. Dana tried to stammer out the fact that there was nothing going on but Jackie was not in a mood to listen to anything this woman had to say. Alice was completely cowed and just went along with her girlfriend as she guided her towards the exit. Dana stood by the pool trying to digest everything that just happened.
Alice and Jackie quickly made their exit from the party. Jackie gave the excuse that she needed to be up early for an international conference call in the morning. The girls seemed upset that Alice was leaving so soon and Bette offered to drive Alice home later in the evening. Jackie would have none of it and swept her out of the house and into the car.
Jackie was very quiet on the drive back to her place and Alice knew better than to speak up. She had seen Jackie like this before.
By the time they reached the house, the tension level was through the roof. Alice racked her brain trying to figure out a way to defuse it, but, was coming up empty due to her panicked state. Once they were in the door, Alice pulled off her shoes and tried to head for the bedroom.
“So you and Dana seemed cozy.” Jackie finally said in a tone that caused Alice to stop in her tracks and turn around.
Alice was well aware that she was walking into a mine field.
“We haven’t seen each other in a while. We had a lot of catching up to do. That’s all.”
“Hmm. Do you miss her?”
“I miss all my friends.”
“I didn’t ask about all your friends.” Jackie growled as she took off one of her own shoes and threw it roughly at the wall. “Do you want to get back with Dana?”
Alice almost wished Jackie would yell. She would yell when she was just angry. Being quiet like this meant she was furious.
“No! Not at all! We just have a history. I am with you now. Just you.” Alice slowly closed the gap between them and moved to stand beside her girlfriend. “What Dana and I had was great at the time, but, it’s over.” Alice stroked Jackie’s arm gently with her hand.
Jackie’s voice dropped dangerously low. “That’s not the truth, is it?” She swung around to look at Alice. The look in her eyes made Alice’s blood run cold.
Jackie’s hand reached out and grabbed Alice by the hair on the back of her head. She pulled her forward into a kiss that was forceful and possessive and completely lacking any love.
Jackie pulled back but kept her fist in Alice’s hair. She was pulling a bit and it hurt. Alice saw that her eyes were unfocused. She had to think fast.
“Babe? Let’s just go to bed. I know you must be exhausted. You have had such a long week. Maybe I could draw you a bath to relax you?”
“A bath isn’t what I need to relax me right now.” Jackie said and she released Alice’s hair only to start roughly unbuttoning the front of Alice’s dress, causing several buttons to go flying.
“Babe? Jackie? Maybe we could just go to sleep?” Alice almost begged.
“Would you still want to just “sleep” if your tennis player were here? Huh?” Jackie undid her belt, removed it from the loops and held both ends in her fist.
In the blink of an eye, the belt whistled down and struck Alice across the back as she turned to prevent the blow hitting her across the chest. The force of the blow knocked Alice to the ground.
Jackie reached down and easily lifted the stunned Alice up into her arms.
Jackie whispered into Alice’s ear “I’ll make you forget the tennis player. You’re mine, Alice.” Jackie marched through the bedroom door and kicked it closed it behind them.
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(41 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
wow a great update!! poor alice she needs to tell jackie to step off bitch :0) pms
MaGoose, I try to do my share in giving feedbacks as I have done before to other Danish fanfics. It is you writers that have motivated me to show my support. I hope to continue as long as there are Danish stories. Back to this story, I smell “battered wife syndrome” with a rape scene here. It would be horrible but I think your story is fantastic and dramatic. A became totally submissive because of her low self esteem combining with J’s controlling and aggressive personality, I can understand that this could happen. I second what Jackiee1 said and am thrilled to see you addressing this difficult issue. D could not afford to think too long. Either she should go J’s place to check things out or send couple of the gang to make sure A was ok. There are so many possibilities and I think you really have something incredible brewing here. Thanks a lot!!!
Alright. This is no red bull today. this is a lot less calm. Dana really needs to go ape shit on her. Most people would write shane doing the beat ass or bette. But it has to be my girl D. Jackie needs to get her ass handed to her. And Dana needs to put it on a silver platter. SHe needs to smack her around a bit. I don’t care. Dana is going to beat her ass. I love the story Magoose. I’ll be watching you with a baseball bat in hand.
Sorry i havent posted b4 but i am now and i want to say you are doing a wonderful job with this story and please continue doing so. I hope Dana goes and kicks Jackies ASS and saves Al,this is a problem that does happen alot in this world and you are doing a awesome job writing this. Thanks and PPS
If this goes where I think it’s going, I hope you have Jackie get a worse beating than anything seen in “Radio Flyer”, Shane’s attack in season 2, and the most violent murder in CSI.
um..can we somehow get the girls to follow them home and beat the crap out of Jackie or maybe Alice can come out of her shell and drop kick the bitch in the head?
This type of drama plays out many times during the day all over the world. You are doing a good job writing the emotions
i want to cry for alice oh i was so scared wen i read the warning..dana needs to come rite over with her racket and bash jackie right now how dare she hurt alice like that i hope there aren’t ne more of these chapters where alice gets hurt shes been through so much its just not fair!!! can’t she just be happy i do love this story though very much :)
OMFG, that bitch, is up beating in my poor alice! OMG if the gang finds out they will fight each otherto see who will pulverise jackie, so either alice can start to defend herself, which i doubt she will do…oh man.. dana needs to step and take care of business… you touch on something that happens all the time frankly it happens more times than ppl realise or care to admit.. excellent!!