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Soft Spoken Secrets (Gudamg Garang) # 10
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But, Tina had to finish the story.
“We became so much…I discovered myself completely and utterly in love with her. She was…everything to me. She made me wonder a future with her. She was…She was so much.
But, but…” Tina’s voice failed, “ But… I was not so strong, so…self assured, so brave like Bette, Madison…I wasn’t… I thought that I was…but I wasn’t.”
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It broke their hearts. Helena and Dana had cried alone on the dinner room, after watch, impotents: the pain ripped their dear friend’s heart apart. They tried to comfort Bette for hours, but she was inconsolable. Helena led her to the bedroom, embraced her friend till she fall sleep on her chest. Bette sobbed like a child. And Dana listened she woke crying during the night.
They were there before and they are at that moment. Yes…Intrinsic to friendship relied a terrible task. It’s the worst part of friendship: when all you can do is just to hold, embrace your dear friend, offer comfort. Nonetheless, they knew that none of them both could divide the weight of Bette’s hopelessness and saved her of all this burden of row pain.
The past so present.
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Three weeks and Tina had tried all kinds of approaches to talk to Bette. But the professor didn’t want to be found. Helena said she could not betray her friend. But she also said that Tina should give sometime. “Bette is hurt…, No… this is not the word, Tina. She’s confused…”.
Dana: “Sorry, Tina. Give Porter a time. But, I can guarantee…Time is something that you still have, now that you found each other…”
I know that they wanted us to talk. That they will support me, at least, to talk to her. But it was not enough…I needed to see Bette.
Tina didn’t want to appear at the university.
Finally Madison, after saw all the anxiety of both women decided to gave her a tip.
Besides, Madison noted that Bette seamed, in doubt. The young girl was tired of watch the struggle of these women and decided to let slip out: “Bette will be at a barbecue party, singing and playing with us, mom, next Saturday. Tina recognized her opportunity.
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wow,great post:)can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Heyyy… you must have read my mind… or did I read yours ? (if you don’t know what I mean, read my comment on your previous post ;-) — well, Santa, thank you soooo much for that third post… a very sad one… but hopefully, they will be able to talk to one another… to say what they never said 22 years ago… I have a feeling I can now guess what happened… :-) but I will let you tell it, with your words, and I hope you will tell it soon… well, after all, they already waited 22 years, what’s a few more days (please tell me, it won’t be weeks) before the next post ;-) — OK, now, on my way to Dreamland… – thank you again ;-*
WOW tat song told it all and yet not everything. And the ending to this chapter how Madison had Bette go over to the cottage brilliant,,loved it Braz..
I LOVE how you have both of them “sensing” the other. That is one hell of a connection there, and you bring it to life so very well. The other thing, that I felt strongly towards the end, was the need for Tina to FIGHT for that woman. When you truly love someone, you never let them completely walk out of your life. You never cut those final ties. If you do, you usually will always be left with so much wonder about what could have been. I think we see this so strongly in this story. That bond was always there, and though it layed dormant for years, it’s time that Tina not let Bette go again. If she wants that woman, she better step up to the plate and go after her, and make her realize just how much she means to her. Oh Braz…please dear, make Tina fight. Post soon hun, and thank you for your personal shout out. {{hugs}}
Ok that hurt very bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! see everbody knows that bette is hotttttt
They really should talk, although Bette has told Tina exactly what happened through her song, but I get the feeling there is more to Bette. Tina needs to really talk to Bette and explain what happened if that is possible. Sometimes we do things that make absolutely no sense and it seems that is what Tina did.
Damn that was great, the song say it all, the hurt Bette have!
What the hell. Did you HAVE to stop right there? :< PPS!
We could feel how the heart wounds have not healed on both women. Tina should right what she did wrong and fight for her love. Tell us why they fell apart so bad. PPS Hs & ks – Lucero & Marsha