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It Will Grow Stronger – Chpt 2
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Previously
“She’s with Mees Annie,” Manuel said.
“Oh, fuck!” Bette breathed.
She stood petrified in a state of disbelief and pain. She felt her heart contract in her chest, and then begin fiercely pounding. She wanted to escape. And yet she couldn’t move.
Helena withdrew from the woman with her and looked up. She shielded her eyes with her hand.
“Bette? Is that you?”
Bette took off running for her car.
“Bette! Wait, Bette!”
Chapter 2
Helena ran as fast as she could up the row to catch Bette. Bewildered, Annie took off after Helena.
Just as Bette backed out of her parking space, Helena reached the car.
Bette peeled out as Helena slapped her trunk and cursed her.
“Fuck you! Goddammit! You didn’t give me a chance to explain! Fuck you! I know what you’re thinking and you’re wrong! Fuck! Goddammit! God fucking dammit!”
Helena dropped to the gravel on her knees. The heels of her palms drove into her eyes.
“Oh, fucking God!”
Manuel ran to grab Helena up.
“Eets okay! Eets okay,” Manuel tried to console Helena.
Helena hung onto Manuel’s neck tightly. “Oh, God, what just fucking happened? What just fucking happened?”
Manuel held Helena tightly.
Annie skidded to a stop, just short of Helena and Manuel.
“What’s going on?” Annie asked, completely oblivious to the circumstances.
Helena withdrew from Manuel’s embrace.
“What did Bette say? What happened? Why?…Oh, God, Manuel, what happened?” Helena pled.
Annie wrapped her arm around Helena and kissed her cheek.
“Are you alright, baby?” Annie asked, with concern. “What’s going on?”
“She wanted to surprise you, Mees ’Elena. She meesed you,” Manuel answered Helena.
“Why did she leave, Manuel?” Helena asked.
“I dunt know,” Manuel replied.
“Manuel! What happened? What did you say to her?” Helena was frantic. And began pulling Manuel’s clothing at his chest.
“Nothing! Nothing, Mees ’Elena! I swear! Mees Bette just said shee came to supprize you. And assed where shee coul’ fine you. I tole her…down ’at row…you er ’ith Mees Annie.”
“Oh, God,” Helena wailed, falling back to her knees. “Get my fucking keys. Please. Somebody get my keys!”
She beat on Manuel’s chest with her fists.
Annie raced towards the house, screaming. “Somebody get Helena’s keys. Get Helena’s keys!”
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OMG this is just too good and I am loving it Z…you spoil us too much and I myself love you for this wonderful story that you got us captivated us into!!
oh z…that was hi-la-rious…rotflmao….the visual on that is just hysterical…it is my sincere hope that the muse stays nearby because i love this story…work-it now!!!
jesus, chocolatechild…I think I effed up. That wasn’t supposed to be funny! **Throwing up my hands***I give up! I’ll finish this story. And then I’ll disappear. I think that’s a good strategy. Yup yup..that’s it! I apparently ain’t got it anymore…Ain’t had it for awhile. Gettin’ too effin old!
Yeah, somebody get Helena’s goddamn keys before she beats the living shit out of poor Manuel. Wow, somebody should tell her we no longer treat the help like that no matter how overwrought we may be feeling. Jesus! She and Bette are two peas in a pod when it comes to overreacting. Do they both have severe chemical imbalances?
Too old? Give me a break.
OK..Z..you are killing me, thud…can these two catch a break? They jump to conclusions so fast..although, if I saw my woman in a hug with her ex, well, I might jump to a conclusion too. Only thing I would stick around and let them both have it..sorry italian, gotta’ have that say..:) PPS lovin this!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh and yeah…you still got IT!!!! you aint’ to effin’ old…Z you rock!
ok zhee zhee, the story didn’t make me laugh but funny did..at least Bette didn’t maul and mangle poor Jose..no Jose is at the sea..Manuel, in HER overreacting…but God help the poor sap who can’t find Helena’s keys…and Bette better be driving carefully, and Helena better find her, and Bette better believe her, and Bette’s butter is better and I need to stop now….but no disappearin for you!
Overreaction, much? Haha.
( stomping my foot ) How come I just found out an hour ago about this new story of yours, Zheese ? There was no mention of this new fic in the news and it didn’t even make the headlines in my Fanfic newsletter today. Oh, there is something very wrong with the world. Anyway, jokes apart, This is a very very interesting start, Zheese. I’m loving this. Please make this story last a little longer than just 3 chapters. Please…
Drama – here we go again! I just love it… And your writing tops it… Hear me? You’re great, brillant, you rock!! But if you decide to disappear and leave us in the lurch we’ll just have to reread every single one of your previous posts… heheh ;) But somehow that’s not the best idea I guess… o_O So pleeease ps!! (btw: Let Helena find Bette!!- though neither Bette nor Helena should drive under these circumstances… hmmm…+ There has to be so much love as both of them seem to be shaken to the core.)Thanks and love, w
Hello zheese, please let Helena find her keys. I love Bette to death but her insecurities are going to prevent her from having a happy life. Sometimes we need to jump in on the deep end and see how far down we go until we start to float. Please don’t leave, I will miss you. Selfish aren’t I :(. I love every word you write and will for a long time to come (I hope). Sincerely, JC (PS – “If food is the body of good living, wine is its soul.” ~ Clifton Fadiman)
ah! i did miss that last chapter! so i’ll comment here instead. it’s all fantastic. two thumbs up and more more more:) the bette and helena lovefests are always so dramatic and romantic and well written around zheese’s world!
what did i miss? i thought i read the last chapter! *goes back to re-read* helena shouldn’t hit her servants. hehehe…i kinda laughed a bit at that to zheese, but in a nervous ‘oh dear’ kinda way, but actually the keys issue was great. lol@chocolatechild rolling on the floor laughing…heehee
yes let Helena find her keys and pronto cuz she has some things to straight out here.And Z dearie don’t you dare disappear on us, we need your stories way too much :)
Bette and Helena overreact like two crazy maniacs sometimes…its actually one of their more endearing qualities…pps