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It Will Grow Stronger – Chpt 3
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Previously
“Manuel! What happened? What did you say to her?” Helena was frantic. And began pulling Manuel’s clothing at his chest.
“Nothing! Nothing, Mees ’Elena! I swear! Mees Bette just said shee came to supprize you. And assed where shee coul’ fine you. I tole her…down ’at row…you er ’ith Mees Annie.”
“Oh, God,” Helena wailed, falling back to her knees. “Get my fucking keys. Please. Somebody get my keys!”
She beat on Manuel’s chest with her fists.
Annie raced towards the house, screaming. “Somebody get Helena’s keys. Get Helena’s keys!”
Chapter 3
Helena had gotten into her truck. She sat in the driver’s seat, her head resting on the steering wheel.
Annie came running towards the truck and placed the keys in Helena’s hand when she looked up.
“I came as fast as I could, Baby,” Annie said. “Do you want me to come with you?”
“No, this is something I need to do alone,” Helena replied, placing the key in the ignition and hearing the engine roar to life.
Annie kissed Helena on the cheek and shut the door.
Helena turned on her headlights and sped off down the serpentine road after Bette. She knew each curve well, and counted on that knowledge and experience to allow her to catch up with Bette, before she got too far away.
Within a few short minutes, Helena espied Bette’s vehicle disappearing around the hill. Helena sped up, vigorously pursuing her target. She rounded the belly of the curve in hot pursuit, as the road straightened out. Darkness descended rapidly.
“Bette, I love you. You are so fucking crazy. What have I done? Let me fix this,” Helena murmured to herself.
The truck gained on the rental sedan. It drew within several feet. Helena could see Bette eying her in the rearview mirror.
“Be careful, Darling,” Helena pled out loud. “Please slow down. Please find some place to pull over,” she continuously thought, as she began hitting her horn.
Helena’s phone rang. And she answered.
“Quit following me, Helena. Leave me alone,” Bette cried out desperately into Helena’s ear.
“Pull over, Bette! You didn’t see what you thought you saw!” Helena exclaimed, flashing her headlights in the darkness.
“I saw you with your old love. That’s why you haven’t cared if you’ve seen me for the past month! God, you had me fooled! I hope you’ll be very happy with Annie,” Bette said sarcastically, hurt to her core.
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“crush” That Bette is so debonair. So Bette seems to have learned a lesson about being impetuous and coming to the wrong conclusion. (Helena may have her lesson waiting for her when she gets back to the villa and the bruised Manuel). Now how about you, zheese? At the end of the last chapter you were making noises about having made a mistake with this story, but with this chapter we see that that is not so. You just go ahead and dance to the muse’s tune whenever she visits.
There also needs to be less Annies in Helena’s life, or a number system or something.Funny.. do you mean that Manuel’s boys are going to be waiting for poor Helena, to teach her her lesson?? Please, excuse, she was quite overwrought and didn’t mean to fold, spindle and mutilate him!! See, zheese, listen to funny…you no make mistakee!!
I’m pissed at them both. How can they go a month without seeing each other?Another romance story from Zheese ;-)
Z this was so good,,Annie the cousin loved it. And how Helena was scared too but cause she loved Bette so much and wanted her to move and make a change and leave LA to be with her, so awesome,,,,
Thank you darling for not breaking them up, glad to see Annie was the cousin :). So let your muse bring you another good B & H story which we can all enjoy. Thanks Z.
Awww, Zheese, this was so beautiful. You are just so talented. And your writing has sooo much class. No wonder I can’t choose between Tibette and Belena. You have this amazing ability to make this ( let’s be honest ) “improbable” couple so believable… I truly love this story. Oh, and I’m very glad I didn’t see the dreadful “The end” words… Shall we expect more of this story ?… Please say yes.
loved the chase scene..bette is so hyper-emotional and quick to action…love the balanace helena provides…relationship, i do say..they are something…fantastic Z..hope this wasn’t the last post…otherwise, PPS
Hello zheese, that was simply absolutely beautiful, like I said before a romantic fairy tale to transport you away to a place of bliss and desire. That was a magical experience and I thank you for sharing it. Sincerely, JC
“I said, I will go up to the palm tree, I will take hold of the boughs thereof; now also thy breasts shall be as clusters of the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples; And the roof of thy mouth like the best wine for my beloved, that goeth down sweetly, causing the lips of those that are asleep to speak.” – Bible
Hey zheese! Thank God Annie’s Helena’s cousin!! ;) Really like the idea of Bette moving in with Helena- And I’m sure, Bella’s happy, too *laughs and winks* Can’t wait for the next post!(and the chase scene was great! =) ) love, w