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Tina walked out to the patio needing to clear the haze of desire and anger which mingled together clouding her thoughts and judgment. Bette was so fucking hers. She would not touch her in anger again. She was not sure that she could touch her tonight without the anger which she was now keenly aware had been under the surface for years now.
Bette had let someone else touch her when she was hers. That was what Tina had not been able to forgive or forget. She needed her so badly she was shaking. ‘Damn you Bette’ she hissed aloud.
She paced around the pool imagining Jodi and Candace and some TA she had heard about touching her woman. How many others had Bette allowed that part of her that was hers alone? She really was going to have to put a chastity belt on her. There was really no other solution. Jodi was right; Bette could not be allowed to run around loose.
She laughed to herself imagining Bette with a gold ring with her name tag dangling from her mound. She knew just the spot she would mount the ring. The thought of mounting Bette did her in. She just had to have her.
She returned to the kitchen and was mildly surprised but very pleased that Bette had not moved.
“Let’s continue this discussion… some place more private.” Tina said crisply. She needed her discipline to prevent her from taking Bette right then and there. Tina gathered Bette with a look and walked out of the kitchen and down the hall to the bedroom.
Once they were in the bedroom Tina closed the door and leaned against it. Bette stood in the center of the room in front of the bed. Tina eyes roamed over her lover’s body. The brunette curls were a tumbling riot framing the slender face with the sensuous lips. Her gaze dropped to her full breasts, her nipples were hard she could see the points straining against the poor excuse for a shirt that Bette wore over loosely fitting lounge pants that hugged the brunette’s hips.
Bette exuded sexual presence. Tina knew only too well the heights the brunette was capable of taking her. Tonight however she was in charge and she was determined that Bette understand once and for all that she was it for her. Bette had driven that point home for her unquestionably last night. Was it only last night that Bette had taken her with an intensity that she hadn’t even imagined?
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so freaking hot and Tina was so in control of her BEtte…loved it K
Damn, that was amazing!! Thank you for a wonderful trip through your imagination.
OMG!!! amazing!!!!!!!!
omg that was HOT HOT HOT but i’m still sad to see sutch a great story come to an end…
OMFG………thats all i can say
If that’s your imagination, what are you like in RL?Excellent story especially if one likes it a bit rough. PP something else.
Wow…Wow, where’s that Tina been hiding? Actually, I have always thought that Tina, not Bette, controlled all their sexual encounters…just not like this. Great story…I can’t wait until you write another one. Here’s to a Tibette reunion in ’08!
“..I will no longer have a need to write.” WTF? Regardless how IC chooses to write B/T I will always love your writing. You’re the queen of NC-17. I’ll be patiently awaiting the next story.
When I read this – Tina spanked her open center then drug her hand across her soothing her. Bette jumped in response. “You do not have permission to let anyone touch what is mine.” – Okay, I am not trying to be rude or mean, but I just want to share my opinion. I thought, ‘oh brother Tina, get over yourself!’ This whole ownership, mistress stuff isn’t about showing each other love. It’s about power, control, demeaning someone to get what you want. Even when you are training a dog you don’t slap them then pat them to soothe where you just inflicted pain. This was not about love. Again, just my opinion.
Big sigh…it hurts to read comments like yours CaseyB. I sent you a PM in case you don’t read this. Bette was not demeaned. She was loved. I hesitated to post this for precisely this reason and warned people that if they were offended by dominance and submission not to read further. That said, I think that what undergirds what is called last time I checked S&M is trust and love in a relationship. Surrendering control and assuming the power in an explicit manner in an intimate sexual encounter can be the ultimate testiment of love. In this story I wanted Tina to reassure Bette that she would always love her, that she is the only one who can take Bette to the heights that she knows and vice versa. Of course a little (maybe alot) of me is here to in that the ‘sacredness’ that we can sometimes touch with physical intimacy is not something that I am willing for my partner to share with anyone else. I would argue that the Bette and Tina I see feel the same way.
I totally support your take on the whole s&m issue/relationship.Speaking of love and trust – I love your writing and trust that you will not let me, and others who might also love your writing, down by not submitting new (sexy.. hopefully;-)) tales of B&T:-) happy new year
I don’t usually comment on that kind of NC-17 because it’s damn too close to home. But I haver to say that love not anything else transpired in this chapter. That was beautifully written and I wanted you to know that I understood it that way. It’s not about being humiliated, it’s about giving yourself to someone, someway it’s about leaving the care of your being to your loved one. And I think that was a beautiful way to describe it without just skipping the part where we are all jealous of what’s ours. Thank you for a beautiful chapter and a wonderful story Kelika.
Atually CaseyB, “This whole ownership, mistress stuff isn’t about showing each other love. It’s about power, control, demeaning someone to get what you want” couldn’t be farther from the truth. As a practioner of that lifestyle, I find it offensive that someone would compare me to a dog (yes, I’m the sub :D). I know the woman I have given myself to values the gift I give her daily with my service and devotion. kelika, I love the fact that you’ve shown Tina’s strength with her woman and that you’ve shown Bette’s devotion to her owner. Bravo!
WOW that was really hott there. It’s the author’s like *you* who make waiting for the next season go by fast! Promise me, no matter if our girls do or don’t get back together, you’ll always write and share your amazing stories… I really liked this, but like you said it’s, “Just my imagination” and it’s a great one. *Some* might say this story was not about love, yea whatever, I say it was one f*cking,hott,ORGASMIC, how we all want to see Tina on the show-,story! Heehee I think I’m not the only one when I say this was really hott. Great Job here!! AND I AM looking foward to another story here Kelika, please don’t let your fans/readers down!!!PPS!
Kelika, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope you write anothr one soon. Happy that we can have B & T together even if its only in fan fic land. Hopefully this season will see them back together as a family.
Kelika, Thanks for this story and for the informed way you handled this particular scene. Most people do not understand the love, respect and trust that exists in d/s parts of relationships. I have hesitated to write another story like Possessions because of the lack of understanding on the part of many people and because of some truly inane PMs I received after I wrote it. Tina doesn’t just need to take back Bette’s body for her own; they need to re-establish the trust that their relationship is based on. There is such equality in relationships that include this type of sexuality. Again, thanks for your wonderful words. Happy New Year!Lin
This chapter was HOT beyond belief. The love, trust, and passion displayed in Tina and Bette’s relationship is beautiful! I am sad to see this story end and look forward to reading more wonderful stories by you.
Hi, that was one amazing story, thank you dear for sharing it with us, I hope that we can have another wonderful one soon.Happy new yearwith all my best
I too was surprised by what seemed to be a sharp turn in the direction their reconnection made in this last chapter. I agree with Techgal that it is not my cup of tea. However, there can be no doubt that you, my dear Kelika deserve to FINALLY win an award! Thanks!!
I always get right into your stories and in the last chapter you never fail to surprise me. (Big grin). Thx for sharing your awesome talent.
luved every word, luved every chapter, great job, but i really think you melted my computer with this one!!!!!
IMHO, whatever floats your and your partner’s boat…good job, kelika! Greedily awaiting your next story!
kelika….As chicki wrote,”different strokes….” Everyone is entitled to their own opinion and expressing it in a respectful way. I thought casey B fulfilled those criteria. That’s why they have a menu in restaurants. It was bold of you to write about this topic. Keep on keeping on!
wow. Tina in control this way is certainly interesting.
Kelika, you are one of the fearless writers. You will go where few have, and you did this storyline the justice it deserves. Be proud of your writing hun. Different strokes for different folks. Clearly how you wrote Bette and Tina was with equal and mutual participation in this part of their relationship. Thank you for sharing your creative mind with all of us, and please continue to share that which sometimes people don’t always understand completely. Thanks again.
I was a bit bewildered as to how this chapter related to the rest of this story. Suddenly, a story about two lovers reconnecting turned into an ode to dominance and submission. Not my cup of tea. I was surprised as I had no inkling of this from what went on before. I prefer my B&T cuddling and kissing, minus the spanking, and certainly not being spanked on the v-jay-jay. Ouch!!!
That was so freaking hot I need a cold shower to cool off. That was a job well done! Bravo!
kelika, i love you stories! i’m so happy to see chapters updated and new stories started (as long as there is a b/t happy ending! lol!) i think that tina needed to take ownership of bette again so that they can start fresh again. great job! great story! can’t wait for your next one.
Yes, you have come full circle. I remember your first story and I could not get enough. The only story that I could not read was the one that Bette and Tina were not together in the end. All the others I throughly enjoyed reading. I hope that you will continue to write and bring B&T together. I don’t trust ic and feel that I can only trust ff.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it!
I’m with techgal and Seahurst. I admire the way you write, but I didn’t see this coming, at least not given the tone and feel of the preceding parts of this series. This concluding piece feels out of place, disjointed from the rest of the series.