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Part 5 – Three’s a Crowd.
“Helena …”
Soft hands touched her skin, melting the two sensations together as one, their lips on her as they spoke, moving with a well-understood synchronicity. She struggled to open her eyes, seeing once she did nothing more than a great expanse of mingled flesh, some pale and some darker, limbs moving, hair flowing, all of it jumbled and slightly out of focus. She strained her eyes harder, the touch of their lips against her body making her writhe and curl, her muscles aching to find a pinnacle of release from the mounting tension within. Their chants melodic like a harmony, calling her name to propel her to surrender. Her body rushed with intense overwhelming heat as together they seemed to mould into one, before shattering apart into a million tiny pieces as she awoke, startled, aware that the heat within the room was her own, the hands her own, and the visuals of Bette … and Tina … lying naked with her in a giant bed, sweaty and out of breath, nothing more alarming than a most confusing dream.
She sat huddled beneath the protective enclave of her net,
Bette … and Tina …
That was new.
Her head ached, knowing that she should have taken her own advice and stopped after the fourth, instead of continuing to drink with Bette until her own inhibitions could take no more,
They parted with the safe understanding they would meet the following day, in the café downtown where Bette had regularly met with Tom for updates on Helena’s whereabouts. The identities of the mystery men intrigued her, adding to the gaping hole in her memory of what had been happening in her other life, her LA life and her family life in the months she’d been away.
The sun barely up; on the island she would have been bathing already, preparing to face another day. In the hotel it wasn’t an issue yet she woke with the same diurnal alarm clock, expecting to find herself back there as she’d opened her eyes. Two lives: one simple and uncomplicated yet tinged with sorrow and unfulfilled prospects, the other gentler and calmer but stuck in limbo as she fought against bureaucracy and theft.
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Hello sofasitter, this story is so amazing, you have brought up a lot of questions, will it be; B and T, B and H, T and H, or will they all go there separate ways when this is over, or will this little journey finally show B and T that they truly belong together, will Helena give them the one gift that they have been looking for since the beginning, that together they can finally be a family, there need to see if the grass is greener on the other side will be quenched and they will realize that here and now it is Bette and Tina. You are rocking this one out of the park. Sincerely, JC
*smile* that was fantastic babe…i knew you’d do the swimming scene with a perfect balance, in this case playfullness, seduction, and the total joy of being in the water itself. made me wanna go for a swim, it was that vivid, which is funny, because it’s really REALLY cold out here. now *this* is the kind of storytelling that i feel so inspired by. no answers or solid ground provided, much the way we live and much the way we stumble comically through ‘life’. very cool, very cool, and as always, i love your writing–the attention to details, the little touches, like bette’s sunglasses placing her apart. so true, so true…ah, i could go on! i’ll go back over mine to see if i can polish it up, but this challenge is already won hands down by you sweety;) post when you can, noooooo pressure. xxhb
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! This was a NAIL BITER and so flipping HOT! The threesome idea….GRRRRRR….all I will say is ….I can’t say it. We will leave it at that. The scene was just superb. Thank you for such a nice reflection in your author note. It is amazing how many writer’s have become inspired by others. It’s a wonderful gift to pass along to one another. Keep up your brilliant work Sofa, but remember when doing so, not to neglect your lovely woman. * wink * Post soon.
I’m just not into threesomes. I’ve never found them sexy. Take Tina out of the equation and it would be fine she just doesn’t do it for me.
Hmmmm, ahem, well….yes! While I appreciate your busy schedule (I nearly PMed you but decided not to harass you) you seriously cannot make us wait for the next chapter. Sorry they didn’t let the newbie get much of a Christmas break. Seniority does have it’s privleges.
Lovin’ this story. I like Chicki will be biting my nails for the next post.Triangle and threesomes interesting but there is always an alpha coupling. As DHD1 asks who will it be.
You are definitely keeping us guessing in who will wind up together or whether they will all wind up friends. This chapter shared a gamut of emotions sadness at Helena having to leave a place where she had found a home, happiness at the girls reuniting with Helena and telling her how much she had been missed, and teasing hotness with the girls exploring their mutual attraction and desire. I am very interested in seeing where you take us next.
ok, i know i know, i do this every time you post…but i can’t help it, this is just really really good! i’m so non-specific…ok, you weave together stories like…like…a sculptor or like a woman i once saw making a giant traditional tapestry on a loom. and its always so effortless, the way you tell the story. beautiful, really:) i’ll stop now…heh…x
Sofasitter, you are one fine writer! That chapter had so much in it to think about and I’m dying to see where you’re going to take it. Please update soon….wow….still thinking about it!
god you didn’t just stop there.. So hot plz update again very soon !
Well sofa, you have certainly conquered the challenge. What a sexy little development this was! Sexy, but also caring and fun. This may be just what they each need to move forward, whether together or apart. So looking forward to the next chapter!
well you really pulled this off – I have to say I didn’t think it was going to work but it flipping does. Wonderful work. You are so damn good.
Ahhhh, how I wish I were Tina….Sigh.
Mmm. It’s late and I should really go to bed but I had to comment… Loved the chapter and really, the idea of Helena offering *anything* Bette wants is just…. well. This threesome rocks. *sigh* Ok ta-ra, g’nite, Happy belated New year and thank you for the post… cheers, sofa
Errmm, I’m not into threesome and I don’t even like the idea of these three going at it. But I must admit, the way you wrote the story is very captivating, you actually got me into it… I’m just worried about the after effects. What will happen next and will B&T end up together?
The idea of Bette some-people-actually-do-practice-monogamy’ Porter having to deal with the concept of you-are-monogamous-untill-your-not is very interesting. Love and trust finding new ways of manifesting themselves inside relationships truly is an interesting, but also challenging, idea to explore. However you and your writing is keeping my mind open and keen to see where you are taking this. So whether or not you make it on time before tonights episode is not important as long as you keep your chapters as intersting and tantalizing as you have so far. Happy new year.
It kills me that after 3 seasons of dismantling Helena that some people still see her as an alpha. Even at the end of season 2 we see her dismantled. Her alphaness was all tied up in her money. She has been totally wussed up. I suppose stealing the money and running of to Africa is an alpha move. But either way this triple play is well done and very sexy. I still think someone will be felling a but left out when its all said and done.
Wow! the scene on the beahc was just amazing! i wonder what will happen after it’s all said and done? i don’t see bette and helena togther as a perment thing, just too much alphaism. but really like tina’s new found assertiveness and i think bette is likes it as well! :)
The threesome will be HOT, as long as Bette goes home with Tina.