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To Hell And Back
Like most California days everyone was always in a hurry it seems. Or maybe it was the thought of getting it right for a change. Whatever the reason she had to make a change in her life. But to start the day off on a positive note, she would call her baby girl. Her little girl she couldn’t help but smile. Oh how she love that child. The one joy that was constant in her life.
But she wanted more, no she needed more. For almost 8 years she shared her life, her body and soul to one person. The one woman that she thought she would spend the rest of her life with. How could she have been so stupid? What was she thinking? To betray the one person to whom you have sworn your undying love to. There was no excuses for what she did, none at all. It had been almost 3 years since their split and things were alot better between Tina and herself. Tina was now in a steady relationship with the chairwoman of one of California largest hospital. A woman who adored her in every way and she was happy for them. As for her and Jodie it was fun while it lasted, but they both knew when to call it quits. And indoing so they still remained friends. The sex was good though, very good indeed. How long had it been since she had a good rump in the sack? To long to think about and she had more important things to do right now. Calling her daughter was one, plus she promise to meet the gang at the Planet.
Meanwhile on the other side of town thoughts were being played out in another brunette’s head. During her stay in jail Helena had alot to think about and none of it was good. She was cut off from the Peabody fortune, she stole money from Catherine even though it was rightfully her’s, and the dumbest thing she could have done was too stay in town like an idiot. Now she sat in jail waiting her faith. Without the funds to pay a lawyer she had to depend on a court appointed one which meant she may be spending along time in here. She missed her kids and wondered when she would see them again. That was enough to bring tears too her eyes. Between the kids and her friends that made her stay a little more bearable. Even her cellmate from hell was not so bad. In fact she kept the other inmates off her back. For deal with just her was a whole lot easier than dealing with the others. She still had a few run ends that left some emotional and physical bruises, but that would heal in time. Yes she was in her own little private hell that was never going to end. Every time it seemed she would catch a break, something would come up or the court date was pushed back. Enough was enough where the hell was her mother? Did she honestly believe this was teaching her a lesson. She knew she was not the best daughter but did this warrant this type of treatment? Just a phone call or a mother’s touch would have meant so much. But instead she had spent over 3 months in this place losing hope or returning to the would she once knew.
What Helena or anyone else knew, Peggy was hard at work trying to get her child out. But Catherine was one smart bitch and in some ways Peggy admired her. Every time Peggy made a move Catherine countered and it was really starting too piss her off. She wanted something on this woman, because for everyday her child was in jail the more she wanted her to suffer, short of killing her. And suffer she would.
Four months to the day of her incarceration Helena was a free woman. All the charges had been dropped as well as all the evidence had mysteriouly disappeared. As the limo pulled up in front of the prison, Peggy stepped out to wait for her daughter. Helena walked out the doors with a small duffle bag across her shoulder, with everything she owned in it. There was a loud click of the slamming and locking of the prison doors. The sound made Helena jump and the tears began to fall. Now that she was out what would she do now. She had no home, no money or even a job. She had the look of a lost and broken woman. And this broke Peggy’s heart knowing she had alot to do with the ordeal her daughter had to endure. And for this she was sorry. If it take her the rest of her life she would do her best to make it up to her.
Slowly she walked up to Helena not wanting too startle her in anyway."Helena it’s mummy baby look at me sweetheart, please. I’m here and it’s going to be ok." She tried too hug her, but Helena stepped back and tried to walk away. Peggy knew this was what she did when she was frighten or upset, she would pulled away. But not this time she would not allow it. She was determine not to lose her child again, and whatever it took she would do it.
Now tell me folks should I continue this or stop before I make a complete fool of myself?
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(27 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
How could you even ask? IT is extremely captivating. I hope to see chappie 2 tonight. Awesome start
Yes, absolutely please do continue.
agree with Squirl…enough said!!!
I thought this was a very interesting chapter… please keep going!
You absolutely need to continue, especially if perchance Bette and Helena may cast any admiring glance toward each other! I think it’s time Bette stopped her self flagellation about the affair…she is human, people make mistakes. Let her off the cross!! I feel so sorry for Helena and just want to hug her. Please do continue!
By all means, please, continue with this story. You have gotten off to a very intriguing start. I am all for Helena and Bette uniting, if that is what you are planning. I am also glad to see Peggy trying to improve her relationship with Helena, as well. I am definitely going to be waiting for another post. So, please, continue.
jac, you have not many any sort of fool! i loved this beginning…its exactly what i would want to watch…i’m itching for more:) i’m thrilled with the twist of putting tina in a happy relationship and leaving her to her life. fantastically planned out storyline so far. more please:)
Hello JacOfClub, That was an excellent start, I love how you have Helena react to Peggy, that is exactly how I would imagine, not just pulling away out of fear but out of shame, the shame she must feel not knowing what her mother has been going through for her, she is probably thinking at how much she has disappointed her. I think it is refreshing to see Tina in somewhat a stable path of life, and hopefully Bette will find her path as well… hopefully to Helena but if not then to someone that will treasure her for whom she is. I cannot wait to see where you take this, so get to work. Sincerely, JC
That was a great start, jac, and u should definitely continue…if u don’t, I will have to find u and persuade u to continue..lol…I also think, like susannah, that Bette should totally stop being down on herself regarding the things she did to Tina…it happened and its over, time to move on…pps