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Summer Vacation. Chapter 35
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Previously
“Arrrrgggh! … what now!” Bette cried as the phone rang again, interrupting the fact that she’d just woken Tina up enough to get her to snuggle,
“I bet ‘that’s’ Angie …” replied Tina sleepily, sure that their scatterbrained daughter must have forgotten at least one thing,
Bette picked up the phone in trepidation, “Hello?”
Alice grinned, “Hi Bette,”
Bette smiled, the disturbance was helped somewhat by the fact that every time the phone rang Tina cuddled closer to her body so that she could hear the other person speaking, “Hey Al, what’s up?”
Alice paused and giggled, plotting as she did so, she leant close to Helena and drew up so much suspense with her great long pause that both Helena and Bette were leaning in close to their respective phones,
“Helena’s got something to tell you Bette,” she said quickly, before passing the phone to Helena and running off,
Helena stared at the phone in her hand, not really sure why she’d accepted it,
“Helena?”
Helena sighed, “Hey Bette …”
Summer Vacation Chapter 35
Tina’s ears perked up a little as she heard a change in the undertone of Bette’s voice, her brain still half-asleep, half-exhausted from their almost literal mind-blowing sex, so she dragged herself awake, struggling to understand what had changed from the light and chatty Sunday morning conversation of before,
“She didn’t actually *tell* us it’s her birthday,” Helena stressed, hopeful that she wasn’t about to be on the receiving end of one of Bette’s infrequent but renowned bad moods, “we just sort of ‘found out’”
Bette sighed, “Helena, do you expect me to be mad at you or something?”
Tina head flicked around in surprise, mouthing ‘what?’
“Hang on Helena,” Bette asked, giving her friend no time to answer the rhetorical question she’d just laid out. She turned to Tina, “Al came across Lottie’s licence down the back of the sofa and it turns out it’s her birthday on Thursday,” said Bette, rather flatly, “and now everyone seems to think I’m about to commit hara-kiri because I didn’t know,”
Tina smiled, “Oh,”
Bette returned to Helena, waiting patiently on the other end, “Thanks …” she mumbled, not sure what else she could say,
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i have so been hanging out for this story but didn’t have the cheek to PM u seeing as i’m way behind…but u did it; i love it; pps.
and i’m actually 1st!!!!
I’ve missed this story, thanks for posting…not that I don’t like what you have given us…it’s just I really love this story.
Wow, you did an amazing job picking right back up with the intrique. I am excited that you have gone back to writing this story,
Not first!!! Look who’s being all prolific and stuff. Good to see this one back. As long as you’re taking requests, how about revisiting “London Town”? (That is what it’s called, isn’t it? It’s been so long.)
I am thrilled to see your story updated! I wish Bette and Lottie would just talk to each other. They are both so afraid of losing the other that they don’t really even get the chance to know each other.
Lottie doesn’t have to stay in France the whole month… she’s got like trillions in the bank, can’t she hire a jet and just go see Jo for 4 or 5 days then come back for a week a couple of times? Or, can’t she fly her new family over to France for a visit while she stays with Jo? I dunno, money=options, and she’s got loads. As for Bette and the old idiots on the board, I think she can easily win one of them over. Or, failing that, make them scared to vote against her! And Al + Hels, too cute! I’m glad to see this back, thanks for the post, sofa, cheers!
what a great story! i think tina being a therapist so fitting for her personality!
Good chapter. Drama coming !
Wow. The drama. Glad to see a B/T story back. Hope you end up updating that story where they are in London sometime if you get the chance.
Thanks for updating this story, I really like this one. This should be a pretty tough decision for Lottie, but Jo doesn’t seem to be having as hard a time as Lottie with it.
Hey Sofa! thanks a lot for this update. I’ve loved this story from the beginning and I think you’re doing a marvelous job with the intrigue. And i’ve already said it but i love Tina’s personnality and B&T’s dynamic here. But I admit that I also fell in love with London Town and would love to see it continue… *hint* *hint*…. Thanks!!!
hehe, ok, see? i’m like 25th down the list, not the first to comment this time. yay for dying batteries. lol. i must say…super cute baby, super cute…lottie and jo and their mini dramas are just adorable and touching and really great. bette and joyce drunk are great, but you paint joyce in this really layered way so that i’m giggling over bette’s ‘curled lip’ while thinking at that very same moment ‘poor joyce’ and worrying about her. i love it, love the directions this story goes, love how you write it, love the characters…i’ll stop gushing now. but i’m glad you had a chance to get to this one. perhaps you’ll do some writing on my little ‘prezzy’ today? *giggles* xo
OH and i love alice and helena…that was also totally adorable. peggy’s whole thing about hearing them. hehehe…more of those two! :) i’m such a demanding grlfriend;)
“tons of inappropriate questions” And we want to hear the answers to all of them… Go Joyce!… ;-)
Thanks for the update. Enjoyed having this story back and the B/T/H safari.
YAY!! I was so excited to read this, & I loved this installment…I wonder what Lottie’s going to do about Jo…? Joyce’s appearance was great, Alice & Helena are hilarious as always, and of course I always love B&T. Thanks, sofa!!