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You (Part the Fifty-Seventh)
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Shopping with Alice was one of those things that Dana knew she could never get tired of, not even when they were both old and crotchety. Watching the way Alice would start calmly at the beginning of a rack of clothes, making her way methodically to the end as if it were the most boring thing in all the world, only to squeal with glee and actually clap her hands together excitedly when she found something “cute,” was just too adorable for her to ever think was anything but. Even when her antics caused the other shoppers to look at them as if they were both on some form of hallucinogenic drugs…a bit like the look an old lady was shooting in Alice’s general direction right this very second.
Without really thinking about it, Dana shot a protective glare at the old lady and moved a little closer to Alice, who was now doing a little dance of sorts over the dress in her hands. “Isn’t it cute? I love it. I so have to get this, Dana. Right?”
Dana looked at the dress, but she had never had any eye for fashion. Still, the smile on Alice’s face was enough to make her like the dress, even though in her heart of hearts she sometimes thought Al could stand to stop wearing such weird outfits. The dress wasn’t bad, though, and she supposed if Alice liked it so much there was no reason to try and dissuade her.
“Right,” she answered, moving a little closer to Alice in order to give her a hug. It was made a little difficult since the dress was still on its hanger and Alice didn’t seem to have any intention of moving it, but Dana hugged her anyway. “It’ll be perfect for the party, baby,” she murmured into Alice’s ear.
Alice beamed at her, and it made Dana give her a spontaneous kiss. The old lady made a noise of disgust and moved away to look at dresses on another rack, and Dana giggled when Alice flipped her off.
“She was really starting to bug me. Anyway, I think I’m done here. Do you want to get something new to wear?” Alice asked, trying to be gentle. Dana could still wear her pre-cancer clothes since she’d always been pretty skinny, but even those tended to look like they were drowning her. She’d gained a tiny bit of weight back, but due to her lack of appetite since everything had happened, she was still underweight. Dr. Shapiro had told them it was normal, especially for someone with a metabolism as high as Dana’s still was, but every now and then Alice couldn’t help but worry about it. She tried not to, but it was tough.
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So excited to see a new chapter, but, Dana finding a lump? Oh, no. Even if it is benign it will still put the girls through hell. Poor Danish! So happy that the girls talked about talking more about their problems. Dana handled that really well by bringing up something she was nervous to talk to Alice about. I’m also glad Dana told Alice about the lump. Thank you for the scene at the end — bittersweet though it was. BTW: As long as I have internet access, I will still be reading this story. It really is wonderful. I hope the depression passes soon, hun. Hang in there!
Please, plz, plz, don’t even go there. I beg you!! It is bad enough that D was not on S5 and plz don’t make her go through a 2nd time or die. A would be devastated. You certainly will not want that?! I am glad to see A & D seemed to have improved on their communication and openness. I can never get enough of your writing, just touching and beautiful. Thank you. And I also hope that your current mood will improve soon.
oh……………wow……………………hmmm, I don’t think Dana will die, would she? plz don’t kill her. They love each other so much…… The scene they bond together was amazing. and Alice’s response “then we fucking fight it” still resounds my ears! They’ve grown so much. I love love love it. Personally, I believe in you that you won’t kill or let Dana have cancer again. yeah.. I strongly believe so. Don’t kill her!!!! :( I beg you. They deserve to be back to happy and kinky Danish……. *sniff sniff*
ok where to begin….I absoloutely loved this chapter. I don’t know how you did it but you had me on edge from the start. When Dana asked Alice to go for a walk with her I just felt all mushy and emotional and from there on I spiralled into a great big mess. I was soooooo pleased when Dana told Alice what was going on with her, you are slowly progressing them and letting them work on the things they need to in order to create a real relationship that survives the trials and tribulations that life throws at them…speaking of which I’m so sorry to hear that things aren’t going well for you at the moment, it seems like you manage to find some outlet in your writing so if that helps keep going but don’t feel like it’s something else to stress about… we love your stories and will all be here waiting for your next post whenever it comes. Take care xxxx
^Oh FFS get a grip everyone knows that Danish rules…..go back to your wee IC land.
BTW great chapter MT :D
that’s horrible. i hope it is just a false alarm. i don’t know if they can deal with anything else. great update. i was a few behind and was able to keep reading, i was so bummed when ‘next post by this author’ wasn’t highlighted. :) but post soon. thanks alot.
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! please muted no!!! lol marriage aaah!, i always thought dana would be doing the asking..dnt kill her please..they deserve the happily ever after:( pps
Wow!! What an amazing chapter. Its almost as though they need this little scare to make them re-realise how much they need each other, they’ve been a bit distant over the last little while. I know it’ll all work out ok in the end but i think its a brilliant place for the story to go. And i know you won’t hurt Dana but i’m still very excited for the next part!