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You (Part the Fifty-Eighth)
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“Just relax, okay baby? Everything’s gonna be fine,” Alice comforted on the way to the hospital the next morning. The words sounded hollow even to her, though. She was trying to push down the wave of panic that kept trying to take over, and every time she managed to fight it off it seemed to get harder. But one look at Dana strengthened her resolve. Whatever internal hell she was going through, she had to focus on calming Dana down.
With that in mind, she reached across the center console and took Dana’s hand, which had been clenched around her other hand in a death grip. The palm was sweaty, and as much as Dana was trying to hide it, Alice could feel her trembling. “It’s gonna be okay,” she whispered again, terrified that she really didn’t believe what she was saying.
Dana was trying to calm herself down too. She knew that being on edge was going to set Alice off, but for all her trying she couldn’t seem to stop trembling. Of course, logically she knew there was nothing to worry about as yet, but with everything she’d already been through, she couldn’t help it.
She knew Alice was having the same problem. She had been supportive from the second Dana had shown her the lump, doing everything she could to make it easier on Dana. Still, she could sense the panic simmering just below the surface, the tiny waver in Alice’s soothing voice that barely masked the fear she was trying to keep out of it.
Dana felt horrible. She knew she was justified in feeling a little panicked herself, but every time she glanced at Alice, she was almost overwhelmed by guilt because Alice was doing what she always did when things got to be too much for her. Completely brushing her own feelings aside and trying to take care of someone else. It had taken Dana quite awhile to realize that it was just another defense mechanism that Alice had grown to use, but it was one of the most common. She figured it was just harder to see it for what it was since Alice had always been a good friend, and most people probably wouldn’t notice that when she got extra-accommodating, it meant she was dealing with something.
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I would marry Alice too. I love her to death. MT don’t let it be bad. I think i will cry. I really will cry.
1st of all I am completely behind you addressing the “kill Dana” comment. It is like a vegetarian will not bother visiting a steak house. But to tell the restaurant to stop selling beef is just ludicrous. Furthermore, on the show, Dana is dead and why can’t she be left alone and be allowed to continue her existence in the fanfic world. I see no apology necessary. To have the audacity to tell you to “kill Dana” is just cruel. And thank god, there are still plenty of us Danish fans rooting on Dana and Alice in all the Danish stories. MT, your comment was eloquent and to the point. Thank you. Back to this update, I am both sad and happy. Sad to see A & D going through the mills again. MaGoose said it all. Happy because A proposed. What a surprise ending to have D show up at the apt. Thank you to you too Gemzo. MT, I truly appreciate their characters being stronger by each chapter. It will be how I would imagine them if D was still alive, together through thick and thin, living and loving side by side, growing old until death do them apart . I love the way you write the scenes too. I could feel their anxiety and distress. It was touching all the way through. Thank you again MT for yet another masterpiece.
Words literally fail me. This was another incredible chapter. I loved the proposal, that’s the thing about the bad times in life they just put everything else into perspective. I love that your Dana and Alice are figuring out what’s really important in life. Thank-you so much for the update! x
another great update! ive been slacking on the comments lately, but i have been keeping up (to some degree). this is great, cant wait for more. you were very gracious with your reply to that danish hater that commented on the last chapter. i had a few choice words slightly different than yours that came to mind :) anyway, well done my dear.
that was such a gret chapter…omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they’re getting married argh!!!!!! so good..im so happy for them..go alice for asking so effing sweet excellent job muted. i’m calm now :)
So heartbreaking how the girls were trying to be so strong and supportive of each other while inside they were both so scared — and then literally holding each other up. I can completely understand Dana’s desire to just run away. The proposal was beautiful. Love that Dana allowed Alice to take care of her — it is what they both needed. Can I get some of whatever was in Dana’s IV? ;-D “Yes, Al. I’ll marry you” — Perfect! Thanks for another amazing update to this great story, MT!!
Hey, wow, a lot has happened in this story while I was not here. I really hope Dana is going to be fine. This came out of the blue, I didn’t expect her to find a new lump. Loved the proposal. Fantastic work as always.