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Collision Course 4.92 – FINALE
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Collision Course 4.92
Tina picked up Angelica as Shane waved at her to get in her chair, “I have to do you,” said Shane. The venue was in high spirits and the place, packed with friends and family, most of whom were flown in on Shane’s dime, were all milling around the compound. Bette was on the other side of the large resort getting ready.
“Oh Shane, I never knew…,” laughed Tina, attempting to wink at Shane, but failing miserably. A playfulness had crept into Tina’s voice over the last few days; she was finally getting exactly what she wanted, Bette. Their family, after today, would be complete and whole, the way it should always have been.
Lara burst out in sweet laughter and Shane grew bright red, trying to stammer an appropriate response, “Baby, Tina is kidding.”
“I know that!” grumbled Shane. Her player ways were long gone, but the stigma of having been that player for so long would forever taint everyone’s view of her. “Sit down so I can do your hair, smart alec. When did you start being so damn funny?”
“It’s Alice rubbing off on me, Alice is funny you know,” said Tina, kissing Angelica as she set her on the ground, letting her race into Lara’s arms. “Have you two started looking for houses yet?”
“Justin’s mom is a realtor and she’s looking for something right now. She found one, but I think it’s too far away from Justin and Brian’s house. Shane on the other hand, likes it because of the huge indoor pool,” grinned Lara.
“It’s great, you can swim in the winter, just like in LA,” offered Shane as she began to run her fingers through Tina’s soft curls, “So we doing simple or are we doing like, 80’s big hair?”
“Simple,” growled Tina. “Can you imagine Bette’s face if I walk down the aisle with a huge Amy Winehouse beehive?”
“It would be cute,” said Lara softly. “She’d probably demand that the wedding be stopped and that Shane be reprimanded for doing your hair up like that.”
“Angie, what do you think?” asked Tina, they all turned and realized that Angelica was gone. Lara, Shane, and Tina all stood there, wondering just where in the world Angelica had run off to?
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Hello Janet Marie, I have been following this story since the beginning and I must tell you I have loved it absolutely. I am sorry that this is the first time I have commented. I love your style… you have a certain grace and with this story. It is such a unique challenge compared to your other writing under your tJR name. I want to thank you for joining us over in the spotlight as you have… you are completely brilliant my friend and I cannot wait to see what your creatively fertile and vibrant mind can create. Absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely JC (of the Dani and Justin show)…
I have been a silent reader from the beginning and have enjoyed this story immensely. What a wonderful ending. Can’t wait to see what else you come up with.
JM, what can I say about this story that I haven’t already? This last one was sweet, and the TiBetter in me naturally loved it. I’m glad they’ve gotten their happily ever after out of it. I wonder about Jo though, if she’ll get hers own happiness somewhere along the way. I like to think she will. I’m really, really going to miss this story, but I’ll be reading whatever the Rogue one comes up. Amazing, Janet. Thank you for all the posts. Cheers
Silent reader here too. This is one of the ONLY stories I have read Where Bette is with someone else. I am a fierce TiBetter, but liked Jo and her relationship with Bette. In the end Bette is where she is meant to be, Although I do hope Jo finds where she is meant to be, and not alone. The words to the song were wonderful and fitting. Thank You for the story.
What can I say that over the yrs I haven’t said. You are a brillant writer. and do so hope to read more in the future. You know my favor was and is The Girls Next Door. I will read anything you write. Thanks so much for you time to please so many/ thanks bvh
What can I say that I haven’t said before? There are lots of stories we love to read on this site, but if we absolutely had to, how many would we be willing to pay $15.95 for? That is about how much one lesbian fiction book costs, depending on the author. And, considering a regular paperback with heterosexual characters costs about $7.99, you have to be a really dedicated reader to fork over $15.95 for one paperback book. But Janet, I would pay $15.95 over and over again if I had the opportunity to read your rich, complex characters thrown into unique and deep storylines. As for what name you will continue to write under, that is for your comfort only, because your gift for telling a tale is just as strong no matter what you call yourself. If this site gave out awards for the most three dimensional original characters, I would vote for you each and every time. If that wasn’t true there wouldn’t be so many of us who want fate to deliver to Jo what it did for Bette and Tina. We care about these characters, Jo, Quin, Spencer, Emily, Amy, Rosita, and on and on. Okay…change of subject, you sent me an e-mail asking a question…I will fulfill your curiosity, but I am in the middle of moving to a bigger place, and I am working six days a week, so it might be a couple weeks…but you will get your answer. ;-) LOL Take care, and let me know when I can buy your books through one of the lesbian publishers!!
Brilliant ending to a brilliant story!
Thank you for another great story. I look forward to the jaded rogue!
Janet, fantastic chapter, fantastic story from start to finish. I thought maybe that you would pull one on us, I know you love to have twists and turns in your stories but Tibette together at the end, I know you don’t do sweet but that was sweet. Love your style of writing, glad to know that you will continue under the jadedrogue name. Good luck in your classes to get your qualification to be a R.N. and thank you for keeping me entertained with your story writing. Cheers!
My morning has been made.TY for letting Bette and Tina get married.So glad you have continued writing, it doesn’t matter what name you use to me.
beautiful ending, this story was nothing short of amazing! good luck with your classes
Ro, PERFECTO!!!! That was the best ending. I loved how you just weaved Fate throughout. I was afraid there was going to be some drama at the wedding, but you played with that fine line, and then brought it all together nicely. You wrapped this up beautifully. Well done hun.
Hey JM, I’ve also been a silent reader since the very beginning. I rarely if not at all comment on stories, but I wanted to thank you for such a great story, and so many other stories as well. You’re a amazing writer, and I’ll be reading whatever the Rogue as in store for us. Thanks again.
Makes me a little sad thats it’s all done now.. I’ll just have to re-read everything, and move on to your jadedrogue stories. Great stories though and excellent endings to all your work.