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    Unyielding Love

    Story written on January 20, 2008 by murph60.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68295
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    Text messaging between Tina, Bette, and Jodi

    Unyielding Love

     

    Tina:  Did you get all that?

     

    Bette: Yes

     

    Tina: Did you press send?

     

    Bette: Should I?

     

    Tina looked at Bette, not knowing what she wanted.

     

    Tina: Why do you ask?

     

    Bette wanted her to tell her No. No don’t send it. 

     

    Bette: Nothing.

     

    Bette pressed send, and the text message was off to Jodie.   She looked at the phone like as if it had been her last step. They were both too stubborn to admit they still loved each other.

     

    Tina: Will you follow her?

     

    Bette: I’m not sure.  I suppose if she wants me.

     

    Tina:  Why wouldn’t she?

     

    Bette snuck a sly look at Tina.

     

    Bette:  I don’t know. I feel a little rejected by women sometimes.

     

    Tina laughed big.

     

    Tina:  You? No, that couldn’t be.  Bette Porter has been a player for a long time.  You could get anyone.

     

    Bette: Maybe I wasn’t interested in just anyone.

     

    Tina stared at Bette’s smooth skin.

     

    Tina: I’m not sure what that means.

     

    Bette: I know.  I sometimes wonder how we use to know one another so well.

     

    Tina felt Bette’s demeanor to be a little nasty.

     

    Tina:  I don’t want to fight.

     

    Bette: I don’t either.    I probably should go.

     

    Bette received a text message back. She opened her phone and smiled.  Tina looked down, pretty sure it must be Jodie.

     

    Tina: Will you move there?

     

    Bette: I don’t know.  I was thinking of that job in New York.  The one I told you about before.  Maybe.

     

    Tina:  I’ll miss you.

     

    Bette: I’ve missed you for a long time.

     

    Tina sat quietly, watching Bette gather her purse and phone.  When Bette placed her sunglasses on, she felt it was a shade between them now.  Life wouldn’t be the same ever again. The unyielding love had won, and neither were winners.

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    Comments

    1. Hello murph60, that was a strong start there, I really like how you have Bette unyielding towards Tina… she isn’t holding her emotions inside anymore and Tina is seeing just how jaded Bette has become towards her. It will take Tina a lot to even think of reconciling… she will need to look deep inside and find away to actually take her share of the blame for how things turned out. Great start, PPS, Sincerely, JC

    2. As hawk said, strong start,amd kinda scary too. Neither of them sure if they should say anything to the other and both still loving each other very much but possibly moving on and too stubborn to stop each other. PPS

    5. Murph, that was a very powerful start to the story. Keep writing like that and I’ll be putty in your hands! This story has loads of potential, so please keep going and update soon!

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