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Scenario 1.9 – Last Chapter
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I love you.
Did Bette just whispered that to me? I asked myself as I was not sure if I heard her right as I was paying attention to Alice’s suggestions. I looked at Bette and saw her returning back to her eating and reading the newspaper as if she didn’t say anything.
"You love me?" I asked Bette, not thinking that Alice was our audience.
"Yeah, I just whispered it to you." Bette said non-chalantly.
"What?" Alice said and no one paid attention to her.
Both me and Alice have the same question in our mind. What? Is she serious? Why is she saying it like she doesn’t mean it? Why now? Why.. Why?
"You love me?" Tina asked again with her heart pounding so fast.
"Yes." Bette said looking directly at Tina. "I love you."
"Why?" Tina asked, unable to day all the thoughts that were in her head.
"I don’t know.. I just did.." Bette started. "I can’t help it, I just fall in love you with you all over again." Bette said. "Crazy, right?"
"You love me." Tina said again and Bette smiled at her.
"Guys, what’s happening?" Alice asked but before she could continue asking questions she saw Tina leaning into
Bette and Bette waiting for Tina’s lips to land on hers.
"You love me." Tina said again, for the nth time.
"Yes, I do. So stop worrying, okay?" Bette said.
"What the hell?" Alice exclaimed and both Bette and Tina realized that Alice was just looking at them in total confussion.
"I’m dating her." Tina said pointing at Bette.
"I’m with her." Bette said.
"What?" Both Tina and Alice asked.
"I’m with you." Bette simply said.
"Uh what about Jodi?" Alice asked doing Tina a favor.
"We’re over, I called it off." Bette said and both Alice and Tina has this surprised look on their face. "What?!" Bette said. "I fall in love with a girl who’s been courting me, I have to choose her and dump the other. Can you blame me?" Bette said playfully.
"Okay.. guys, this is too confusing. Can you tell me what’s happening again?" Alice said and was ignored by her two friends.
"You love me." Tina said again, still can’t believe that the day she’s been waiting for has finally come.
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Didn’t always get to comment but I have enjoyed the story, just wish there was a little more of it. Now for reasons I think they should be back together this season, if not, maybe by s6.1. Tina still loves Bette2. Bette still loves Tina, Yes, I said that.3. Jodie does NOT like children.4. Bette is really NOT in love with Jodie. Jodie is safe because her heart belongs to Tina. Jodie is safe because she is not in love with Bette just playing around and not really serious.5. Bette hates Jodie’s friends.6. Bette does not do things the way Jodie likes. Yes, the tablecloth. Was Jodie reared in a barn or what. What kind of ungrateful bitch would say that to someone trying to create a lovely space for her? When she was not there to do it for herself. As Bette said that night, I don’t know what to do anymore: 7. I DO: Go Back to Tina!!!!!!!!!!
Well, I’m not sure what I can say. I don’t trust IC to reunite TiBette because I really think she is in love with the Jodi character. However, I think Jodi treats Bette pretty poorly. She is always bitching at her. I’m spoiled but what I’m interested in is E12. You know the last scene will likely tell us what the deal is.. if its JoBette I’m canceling Showtime.
JoBette is a couple that is better to hear that they have great sex than actually seeing it. LOL.
GREAT STORY!!!!! We can only hope this will happen on the show. Thank you
Henry went bye-bye at the end of S4 if that helps you at all. And this was a lovely ending to the story. :D
At the end of S5 they will make a commitment to try again with each other. 1) Bette and Tina are rediscovering all the reasons that they fell in love in the first place 2) They complement one another, same interests, goals in life, family is very important to them etc. 3) Their attraction is so strong to one another, they will never be able to settle for another partner as long as they are in each other’s solar system. Aftr demonstrating this to the viewership this season, there is no other acceptable conclusion that IC could right that would begin to make sense.
Oh I forgot to say that you can also list reasons why you think Bette and Tina will NOT be reunited this season. I’m a sucker.. I forgot that not all of us are hopeful that Bette and Tina will be reunited.
ok, X-krusty, first your story was very touching and sweet, I enjoyed it as I like fan fiction better than the TV show, most of the time. The emotions in some writers stories like yours, is so enjoyable to read. as for the show, whenever I read comments on how we think IC is just teasing us, and letting us believe B & T will get back together as the weeks progress, then make bette stay with Jodi at the end, just doesnt ring true for me. I think IC is a romantic like us at heart, and these past seasons, she was just showing us, what happens to a couple when they stop listening to each other, we can never take our other half for granted. i think this is the way she wanted it to play all through the seasons. yes, I think they have earned it, they will be back together at the end, I truly believe that. If for some slim reason they arent, I am with Audi, showtime will not be played at my house anymore
“Will Bette and Tina will be reunited this season? ” ——– ——- ——- ——-Other reasons to be optimistic: ___(1) Jodi is building connections to storylines besides Bette’s. Via the CU, she is already linked to Phyllis’s storyline, plus she’s now been included in group scenes, like her ‘podcast’ w/Alice. The gang even decided to include her in ‘Team Dana’. If Jodi was only connected thru Bette (the way Tasha is to Alice) I might think J/B was permanent. As it is, those other links provide a reason to have MM stick around into S6 without Jodi being attached at the hip to Bette. Thus making way for a T&B reconcilliation before the end of S5. ___(2) We know that family ties have been a strong theme in Bette’s storyline. She nursed her homo-disdaining dad, and kept up a relationship with her annoying nephew. Plus she’s been there for Kit, even though they had a rocky past. Lastly, Bette’s strongest ‘family card’; she was determined to be in Angelica’s life even without a genetic link to her. So Bette was always intended to be a family person. And following that logic, then even if B is equally attracted to both J, and T, she will choose to be with the one that is linked to her child, meaning Tina. And considering how swiftly these TLW storylines travel, that could easily happen before the end of S5.
I’m putting my two cents in. I slowly see Jodie putting Bette down,she want Bette meeker and able to control, The tabecloth was one, The wearing socks in jodie house,I might go bare feet in my home but would be hard to do in some one elses. Them she sorta brow beat her in to not doing her job ad go with her to her friends party,The soft voice that Bette use around her friend The looks she give Bette when Bette didagrees with her. If Bette love jodie,we know she is in love with Tina. Super glue wont fix their broken heart. Love and being with your soul mate will/////// Love the chapter. If only thanks
Loved the ending but I hate to see it end. I say the just belong together although Tina did look pretty hot with the Doc.
The most obvious reason why Bette and Tina will reunite is that they are in love with each other. You can see it in the way they gaze at each other, the way Tina has allowed Bette to pursue this relationship, whatever it is, with Jodie, and the way Bette continues to turn to Tina when she needs to vent or simply talk. I think Bette knows deep down that Tina wants her back, but through the changes they are going through, I believe the purpose of Bette and Jodie being together is to allow Jodie the chance to show Bette the things she’s done wrong with Tina and how to right them.
great story. happy that the other is returning! Although I don’t trust IC, I do think that t/b will reunite. too many fans are screaming for that to happen. i think (hope) IC realizes it’s the only way to keep her fan base; moreover, if she wants any attempt at a season 6, she’d have to keep her fans happy… just my opinion, though! I’ll say it again, I don’t trust IC!
I guess we tibetters will find out where we stand when Bette answers Tina’s question if she is in love with Jodie. I actually like the Jodie character, but I don’t like her with Bette. Hook her up with Shane since neither of them like to hug.
Hey my friend! a) Thank you for being you! :) b) Thank you soooooo much for this story! c) Love the *ranting*! really enjoyed reading the comments! d) my tiny taking part in it: There are so many hints, I think it’s almost inevitable!! Have a wonderful day and talk to you soon! xx ps: I’m sorry for the delay…
You’d have to be a complete idiot not to realize that Bette and Tina belong together. I’m with you so glad no sex scenes with Bette and Jodi it makes me want to turn the TV off, usually I just close my eye till its over. Jodi does not appreciate Bette. Sure she has her faults but damn its not for lack of trying. Tina, whether she’s mad, hurt, upset, in-love whatever with Bette always appreciated her and still does. She keeps trying to let Bette know, but for some reason our Miss B is suddenly not the Yale graduate she claims to be. Come on woman get a clue. Love your story, lets just hope IC is not playing with us, cos if she is, someones gonna get hurt.
Thank you for writing this wonderful story! I was really into it, it’s great! :)
that was the cutest story =) thanks! hope to read more from you!
I would like to think Bette and Tina will get back together if not for the obvious reason then because they are still very much in love with each other. Jodi so wanted to stay with her friends but I’m sure she could feel that would be pushing Bette way too far when it comes to her family all bets are off. I can not believe that Bette defered to Jodi when she had important work related things to do I think her abandonment issues are coming into play here. Jodi has her running around like a lost puppy.
I love Bette & Tina too. This is a great story. Thanks for posting. Oh, and I do think that B&T will reunite this season. I don’t get the table cloth thing either, it was weird and bordering on mean. I don’t even understand why “What does she do?” is a hideous question as Jodi put it. Seems like she is picking on Bette and so hard on her for nothing. Tina would have said something like “Why is that important?” I do think that they so desperately want to be together, just that maybe B is scared coz she thinks that T doesnt love her anymore after all the drama. Plus, she’s kinda stuck with Jodi now so for me, it’s not a matter of if, it’s more like how she’s going to get out of this Jodi thing without feeling awful and T just has to tell B that she wants her back. Well, that’s just my take on it (or maybe my hope). Anyway, please post soon ok. Thanks again.
I don’t think I ever commented on this story, but I really liked it & loved the ending. I’m sure B&T will get back together. If not this season then next for sure. They’re comfortable around each other, they have the same friends (Jodie’s friend Michaelangelo got on my last nerve, Bette’s too), they know each others likes & dislikes & according to the last episode, they’re both snobs! Perfect for each other in my book.
jodie gets upset at Bette’s type a personality, what she refuses to see is that she is like an A-plus. sex making out kissing between them is just UGH!! TIBETTE ANYTHING TIBETTE IS JUST HOTT. however I totally love … loved seeing Tina getting it on with that cute chick!!!! Sunday cannot come fast enuff. lol
I’m sure they will at least give it another try to get back together. they have grown so much.if there was no history between bette and tina, i’m sure they would hooked up anyway.bette has learned to follow and allow somone to catch her when she falls. tina has learned to lead and wants to lead and learned to accept other ppl’s faults. jodie only cares about jodie and her freak ass friends. she tries to mold ppl to what she wants, instead of allowing them to be. the more she smothers bette, the better it will be for tina, cuz tina knows to let bette have her space. tina knows how to win back bettes heart( tina was never really as stupid as some ppl think she maybe)she knew she could never be her own person as long as she lived with bette. that is why she hopped to henry he was her only “friend” when everyone else turned their back on her…jodie hates children, how can you be with someone who hate children and doesn’t support you 100%.bette and tina needed to relearn a thing or two about life. they were both so hurt and so torn apart, vengeful of each other. the time apart as done them well. bette is bidding her time until tina really knows what she wants and why. did tina really want to be with men? NO, she used henry to claim her life back. did she get scared and why? yes, a baby due soon, she knew helena won’t stay around long, bette was tina security blanket, even thought tina still hadn’t gotten over carpenter. bette and her abandonment issuses,problems of never being enough for her father, control freak isssuses. tina and her fairytale imagines for how perfect everything should be, perhaps her expectations were to high, even for bette. they have worked so hard to claim back their own lives before CAC. CAC helped in the destruction of their marriage.but they should not go back to how the old days, they need to start fresh a new chapter in theirs. they need to date and see it goes and fall inlove all over again…great ending to the story. love how bette is just so casual about saying she loves tina,lol so cute!
You are brilliant my friend and your stories are one of the most touching ones’ too, I love everything you do, you never disappoint me, thanks for sharing your beautiful spirit and wonderful talent, and about this last chapter, it really made me sad and happy at the same time, sad because the story has come to an end, and happy cause what we wanted finally had happened, this is how things should be and I can really feel your eagerness to know “would they belong” or it’s just fantasy and teasing, the tablecloth thing was an obvious massage that they are starting to find their way apart, I can see that Marline doesn’t like it but she is acting it professionally. Thanks my darling for all the love and enjoyment that you pleasured us with, I wish you all the luck with your next story, so till next time with all my love.
Yes I am not 100% convinced that IC will really reunite Bette and Tina. I hope she does but it wont surprise me either if she does not. So if that happens to be the case, well I will just have to read this story again and again. It was great and thanks for sharing.
Great Story….thanks!!!
Hi, thanks for your lovely story. I really enjoyed it.As for Tina and Bette getting back together: I wish they will be together soon, but I am quite..afraid to believe in it. Thery is harmony between them. They just look together so right.. Yes, now Bette has Jody, and Tina is trying to find someone, but when I saw B & J and T& someone else I just.. feel it’s wrong. Or better say, I dont feel anything. T&B is like two pieces of one puzzle.And I think there are enought reasond for them to be together.1) Tina feels smth for Bette.2) I believe Bette also has feelings, she just dont notice it. 3) I think that Jody is trying to change Bette.. like she dont like Bette the way she already is. 4) If T&B will start talking about some problems they had in the past, they will have more chances to stay together.And if not.. well, I will stop seeing L word this moment forever.
That was happy and awesome ending, love it. Well 1- Tina still in love with Bette and want Bette back. 2-Bette still in love with Tina but need to figure out how to get rib of Jodi so she can get back with Tina. 3- Jodi is weir and crazy so Bette gonna dump her and get back with Tina and B&T will have a happy ending! Anyway thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you with another story soon, thanks!
I may not have commented on every posting, but I loved your story. I like you hope to see Bette and Tina reunite this season, thanks for giving me hope. :)
Omg I absolutely adore this little story..Tina got her woman back just like on the show..I don’t know what I would’ve done if Tibette wasn’t reunited omg the hearts that would’ve been broke beyond repair…Tibette forever