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    Director’s Cut/Writer’s Cut

    Story written on January 22, 2008 by Squirl.
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    Helen/Bev Hook up Take 2

    Director’s Cut/Writer’s Cut

    Here I am a Belena fan, the unofficial list keeper of all stories written about Belena or with Belena. Everyone knows Squirl and her former alias (es) (who will remain silent/RIP) is a huge Belena fan. So when I heard about the teaser, Bev and Helen actually kissing I was excited. Woo Hoo! Well I saw the clip a few weeks ago as a banner in someone’s signature and I asked, “Hey, who’s wresting in your banner?” The answer shocked and disappointed me. “Bev and Helen.” I thought WTF? Is this the best we are going to get? Unfortunately it would seem so. Undaunted I decided to change the director’s cut just a little. I hope you enjoy.

     

    Now to review what they gave us:

    The scene opens. Producer, Jenny and Tina discussing “Lez Girls”. The producers want more sex. More lesbian hook ups. (Who doesn’t want that? That’s why we watch right?) He proposes Bev hook-up with Shaun. Jenny and Tina both gasp in unison, “That will never happen”. But it is kind of sexy. Two tops and we KNOW these are TWO TOPS, going at it. Slowly kissing, hugging and groping but what do you know? Maybe I’m deprived and depraved, but it was kind of sexy.         

    He then proposes Nina and Shaun. Jenny proclaims “No, no nobody ever wants to see Nina having sex”

    Tina counters it’s wrong because “Nina is too loyal to cheat. It goes against her nature”

    The scene shows Nina as a pillow princess, as usual, being undressed by Shaun who is kissing her getting ready to go down on her. Hey again, maybe depraved, maybe deprived but it was sexy too.

    He then suggests Bev and Helen, “Now that’s hot!” (Yes it is!)

    Tina immediately says, “That would never happen. They are too much alike”

    Jenny recognizes the potential and chastises Tina with, “That’s ok. They are not having a relationship Tina, they are just fucking” (Go Jenny!)

    The scene shows Helen strutting in. She licks her finger then runs her hand down her chest and throws her head back. She has this determined I’m going to fuck you til you scream look. (Now I think 9 of 10 lesbians thought that entrance was fucking hot. Well whatever, 100% of Squirls thought it was anyway.).

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    1. ok, that was really hot, and really really well thought out…i was a bit yucked by the fact that a dude was watching….i’m trying to get over it. hehe, i like the part where ‘bev’ crosses that line of orality that we’ve not seen her cross. damn, you’ve proven yet again that this pairing would have set the screen on fire;)

    2. That was hot, and I’m a die hard tibetter!, now movin on that what actually happened, it sucked how they did it, but F*CK Yes how Helen entered, frig-in hell, I would of had no problem in tappin that lol!, seriously that strut was sexy as Hell

    3. ROFL @ Jenny … not a coherent thought huh … sad that we all agree, cool take Squirl, poor Nina tho, or Tina … or what … lol, *goes back to re read* ;)

    4. Holy Hot Mama! This one is a scorcher! I loved, loved, loved the unique twist on IC’s fictionalized version of these two women. I was rather hoping the studio president would excuse himself… it didn’t happen…I guess that’s realistic!

    6. Yow! Drop it like it’s hot! Much. much better than what we saw, and I agree that Helen’s entry was sizzling! Tina yelling “Cut!” was funny! Aaron got to live out many men’s fantasy (and mine, too)–will he ever recover?

    10. well all i can say if that actually did happen all the women around the world would just simply climax at that scene.great work and hey i also thought that scene of the directors cut was somewhat silly as two people wo are similar in their ways can work it in the bedroom

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