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Soft Spoken Secrets (Gudamg Garam) # 13
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Previously
Tina’s voice was loud and clear:
“It didn’t matter. I know you wanted to hurt me …Ok…You got it. And I’m sure that wasn’t enough, but let me tell you that… nothing that you did or do will blur the feelings I carry. Nothing that you can do will convince me the opposite. I won’t give up from you, …I’ve been inside you, Bette and I know… I know we’re not over…”
Bette’s answer caught Tina out of guard.
“I need to see you, Tina… But… you need to tell Madison about our past. About what happened… She still didn’t know yet…”
What Bette didn’t say flew among them: “Me neither…” But Tina decided for t a straight answer.
“I’ve told her, Bette, yesterday, at night.”
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Madison saw her mother getting home crying. And Tina told her what she had been watching. What Tina didn’t expect was Madison’s reaction.
“What a fuck Bette is thinking? What a fuck is Bette doing? Shit! I thought everything was just fine… Shit! What…”
Tina could see that her daughter was also hurt and what she detected in those words was deception. Bette let her down. But Tina knew that only people that Madison really loves could let her down.
“Mad, calm down… I won’t give up…That’s just Bette…”
“What? How could you say that? She was with someone else while you were there.”
“She didn’t saw me…” Tina tried.
“Oh, but I can bet she felt you, just like at the party, when you two…you now…”
“What?” Tina was surprised by the confession and flushed with the memory of their sex.”
“How do you know that?” Did she tell you?” Tina tried to tergiversate, but Madison didn’t let her.
“The sex or the connection?”
“Both” Tina didn’t lied.
“Mom… I’m not a child… Why do you think I told her to go to the cottage? I am your daughter and I trust your skills… Now if you are talking about the connection, at the party she told me to be with you, because, maybe you would need me, but I didn’t see you… She didn’t see you… She felt you. After some minutes I saw you… I don’t know, you felt each other… Anyway, she knew you were there…Damn…How could she fuck up, like this…” Madison returned to the main subject.
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This is sad yet has some beautiful things in it, All Madison want is love of two parent Hope Madison is okay as well as Bette. I need to go back and read this again I have missed something thanks
Oh shit please let Mad and Bette are ok, and please kill that jeremy ass make him gone, dont want to see his crazy ass again. Poor Tina and Bette and what they have to go through their life. Please post more, thanks!
OMG Braz one again you give us endings unexpectedly,and I loved it…the real reason that Tina had left Bette and that Bette never came back was cause she was in an accident. And now this, with Jeremy firing his gun and now who got hit or didnt? Geez, Braz I can’t wait for the next chapter,,LOL. Loved it as always!!
Whaaat??? OMFG! Jeeeez, Braz! Hate crime, stepping in, huh? Shoot! What a drastic way to throw a nice date to the toilette, dear friend. Now, if you could place B on T’s house, for recovery, that would be a good way for T to gain B’s trust and be taken care of. Mmm. Well, Marsha suggested that, Ok? And I agree with her, totally. Now, you better take lots of pics, while you’re in Carnaval. Get a good tan, together with Si. Marsha is already rehearsing some Samba dancing steps for this season. You know we absolutely LOVE that music. It fills our hearts with joy and the way our Brazilian amigos dance, WOW! It’s just AMAZING. Yep. Do not forget your camera, Braz, to capture all those glorious, pagan festivities, that we enjoy so much about your country and send them this way. Hahaha. Big hugs & kisses, for u, dear friend. – Lucero & Marsha
Just when it looks like something good may happen with Bette and Tina something bad happens. I hope whoever got hurt is going to survive.
Hey… do you intend to run for the “Drama Queen” crown next time ? ;-) you really should ;-)) Now, I felt that Jeremy was bad news, but shooting at Bette (or Mad, or both) is really extreme ! (hope you did not have to confront that as a teacher ;-)) — I know you already posted the next chapter, but i’m really too tired now to read it, so… probably tomorrow… anyway, thanks for the explanations about Tina’s story (I was not too bad at guessing, was I, but I did not anticipate the abusing father) — Now, Tina telling Mad that she has a real “Porter” smile made me think of something…… don’t tell me that Santo and Bette are related ? that would explain their resemblance… and probably part of Tina’s attraction to him… but the treason to Bette would be even worse… so… I guess I’ll just have to read the next post… and I hope that you’ll read my comment since, once more, I’m really late ;-) Thanks Honey… and please, nothing really bad for Bette or Tina or Madison… (and Mad hitting on Helena just made me LOL.) – XOXOXOXOXOXO
The conversation between Tina and Madison was so sad yet beautiful. And Madison’s response and dreams of having not only Tina, but Bette as her parent was just filled with yearning. I am thankful for Bette’s sixth sense, but anxious to find out if she was able to stop any serious damage.
oh come on… COME ON… you cant stop here?? Please please continue soon, like right now maybe, need to know what happened. Anyway, just want to let you know that I enjoy this story very much and I look forward to the journey. I just never commented before. I dont comment much, just started recently. I came across a couple of old posts today with the writers feeling kinda low due to lack of response. It was only then that I realise how much comments mean to writers. I honestly never knew. So, I thought I should start commenting as my way of showing appreciation to good stories and hope that the stories I follow will continue. It’s the least I can do in return to enjoying the time that writers invest in writing.
Went back and read all of them again, I know why I miss them, and why I didnt understand the last chapter. Just let everyone be Okay. That poor boy was really brainwash,but it still true today as it was 60 yrs ago,some thing new changes,but we can only hope for a better future. thanks
Wow, Poor Tina. So u just didn’t stop there, I mean da next post is on its way yea:)Oh please PPS