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The After Party
I heard Jodi’s words and was instantly paralyzed with, with…..with what, I don’t know? There were so many thoughts and emotions already running through me, when I heard Jodi say, “Tina got really drunk,” and following Jodi’s movement I turned and, and there she was. And there she was, in all of her drunken glory, passed out on the couch. Incredulity, most of all, she couldn’t really be here, could she? Looking at her and Jodi busying about making sure Tina was comfortable, I finally let the feelings that I had spent the last few days struggling with; sweep over me, all of them gripped and encompassed me. It was the one feeling that had me turning around and walking back to the bedroom. On the way, I passed Jodi in the hall as she was bringing a pillow out for Tina. Just as I was about to step through the doorway, I heard Jodi call out to me, I turned to look at her.
She spoke, but mostly signed, “When I come back in there, I expect those silly, white pajamas to be off of you so we can ‘reconnect.’” And then threw a smile at me as she stepped into the living room to deliver the pillow to Tina.
I’m glad that she didn’t wait for my reply, that would come soon enough. On the off chance that Tina was not fully passed out, I would rather this conversation take place solely between Jodi and I, in the bedroom. Oh, how I would rather……there were so many different ways in which I could finish that sentence, but now is not the time to dwell on that. No now, right now, all I have to do is get through the next few minutes, and then hopefully I can sleep.
All too soon, in a way, Jodi was strutting into the room, no doubt expecting to have her way with me. As she climbed on to the bed, I gave her a weak smile as I said, “I’m sorry, you know ten, maybe even twenty minutes earlier I would have still been eager to reconnect….but now, the only thing I really want is to get some sleep. Tomorrow will be the first day in several, that I’ll get to have Angie all to myself, and she needs to have all of my attention.” Having finished making my excuse, I looked at her again and I couldn’t determine what the look on her face meant. I kept looking at her, waiting for her response, and realized the overall look was one of bemusement. Just as I was about to ask her what that was about, she leaned forward and gave me a kiss on the cheek and said, “Of course, you get some sleep, I’m just gonna get changed.”
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(76 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
I do wonder why Tina believes Bette’s Yes I am answer when she know she’s lying herself by saying she regrets their kiss. As usual Bette is finally catching up with her heart and now is going to have to make a decision, live in denial or go after Tina. I hope we see more from you on this story.
You definitely need to continue to write either this story or another one, I don’t care just write.
You’re doing great…go take another nap and write chapter two!
For a first timer you are doing just great. Please continue and make them talk more, please. PPS
Truly a great start – but how do you feel about a 2nd chapter, followed by a 3rd . . ?
WOW!!!! One of the Best starts to a story!!!!! Please keep this going. Thanks
This is an exceptional start. Where’s the next chapter?
That was good!
oh pretty please do continue!..what a great start!!!
You do have a flair for writing. This was well written and expressed. Probably right on as far as Bette’s thoughts.PPS.
Great start, but just one thing – it needs a 2nd part!
this is a great start. Please keep going. Bette is a mess right now, but it seems that her head is finally catching up to her heart.
Oh good Lord, please continue with Bette’s thoughts. This is SO what I figured was going through her mind. And it is mind-boggling that Tina doesn’t know this insticntively and JODI doesn’t SEE it. But, then again, maybe there is a bit of insecurity on Tina’s part that’s causing her not to know with her heart that Bette was lying. Instead, her head must be running the show. I wonder what would have happened if Tina would have challenged Bette’s ‘Yes, I am’ by kissing her gorgeous @ss before she walked away? Hmmmmmm…
Your future is what you make of it Bette, so go for it dammit!! Welcome, this was a fantastic start! Thanks!
Part 2 coming???
bette just need to make her mind and got to tina who is her past and future
Please do write ch. 2. I think you’ve got a line on the Lovely Ms. Porter’s dilemma. Take us all the way.
Hey, this is a really good start. Please continue.
WELL DONE. U must continue.
Bette, your future is in that house and her name is Tina.
Very nice, where is the next post?????