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You (Part the Sixtieth)
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Sunlight on her eyelids was what ended up waking Dana, although Alice’s sporadic mumbling and frantic arm movements from some sort of weird dream should have accomplished it long before. Dana couldn’t say as she cared, though. Still, she figured now was as good a time as any to move a little so Alice’s elbow didn’t end up blinding her.
They’d ended up making love all night after coming home from Runyon Canyon. Alice had protested this at first, since it was obvious that Dana was tired. Dana did her best to assure her that it was just from the stress of waiting for her test results, and she really thought it was. She hadn’t felt bad, and in fact she still felt pretty decent. She was still tired, of course, but that was probably from the hours upon end they’d spent together last night, relearning anew every curve and sensitive spot on one another’s bodies. Dana hadn’t felt so complete in a very long time, and although Alice’s arm was still coming precariously close to her face with every movement, she knew this was the happiest she’d ever been.
Dr. Shapiro hadn’t called yesterday. This worried Alice a little, but Dana knew that results from a biopsy usually took a few days to come back. Alice knew that too, obviously, but she couldn’t help but think that if the results weren’t close to immediate, it meant something was wrong. Dana tried to soothe these fears, but in the back of her mind she was afraid too. She tried to act like she wasn’t to calm Alice down, but there was really nothing she could do to stop it.
As was typical of Alice, though, she wasn’t able to hide it. Alice just knew, and eventually she realized that it was stupid to try and act like it wasn’t bothering her in the first place. When they’d made it home the night before after stopping for ice cream at a roadside stand, Alice had gone straight for the couch, pulling Dana with her. She didn’t say anything, but in the end she didn’t have to. All she did was pull Dana into her arms, and somehow Dana knew that it was okay to be scared. She wasn’t going to hurt Alice with it…in fact, she’d be hurting her more if she acted like it wasn’t bothering her.
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I hope that everything comes back ok for dana as her and alice need a break somewhere along the line please no more cancer or anything bad like that pps
Hey MT! Sorry I haven’t commented for a while but you know i’m always reading! Fabulous “filler” part. As always, looking forward to the next one =)
I have one comment and one comment only: J: But you yada yada’ed over the best part! E: No…I mentioned the bisque.
im scared muted so very scared :S..loved this chapter, wen don’t i love em though haha :)
I enjoyed your story, but I have this sinking feel something bad is among to come. Please make her in remission. :) Thanks for your story.
I was so excited to see an update to this. Very cool! Again — so not filler. Sixteen! Holy moly… I don’t know what’s more impressive: the number, or, that Dana was able to keep count. Hi, Socks! I don’t think you are a pervert. I like the touch with the wine — it conveyed a lot about Dana wanting to get back another part of her life before the illness and the on-going concerns Alice has for her health. I also think Alice needs to pick her battles. She needs to just accept things like the limo. I worry that Dana will start to second-guess everything she does. If that makes sense. I have faith that you will keep Dana safe. If not, no clone for you. ;-D I hope you got to class on time! Thanks for another great chapter, MT!!
Ah…one of my favorite sayings from one of my favorite shows. “You forgot to mention the best part”….”I mentioned the bisque”! Elaine is a hero of mine! Anyway, onto the story, keep up the good work, very nicely done.
16 huh? Wowsers. I really hope the results are going to be ok, cause I’m having a bit of a strange feeling about it too. I hope for the best.Great update!