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Sexual Attraction – Chapter 12
Shane rested her hand on her head as she flicked the ash in the tray. She brought the cigarette to her lips and inhaled. She sighed heavily as she exhaled the smoke through her nostrils. Carmen walked into the kitchen of her apartment and wrapped her arms around Shane’s neck. She kissed the outside of her mouth and pulled away. Shane grabbed Carmen by the wrist and pulled her on her lap. Carmen chuckled softly and stared into Shane’s eyes. Shane smiled softly at her girlfriend and wrapped her arms around her waist.
“Would you like to go to the Planet?”
“I would love to,” Carmen smiled warmly. Shane pulled her into a kiss, and Carmen pulled away.
“Your kiss taste like an ashtray.” She got up from Shane’s lap, and Shane chuckled. She snubbed her cigarette out and put it in the tray. She got up from her chair and grabbed her phone off the table. She walked away and grabbed her jacket. She grabbed Carmen’s hand, and they walked out of the door.
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Bette walked into the bedroom as Tina was taking a shower. She walked over to the closet and grabbed Tina’s tote bag. She found Tina’s passport and looked towards the door. She flipped it open and didn’t find it stamped for her trip to Vancouver. She felt her stomach in knots as she began to look for a ticket. She noticed that there wasn’t a tag on the bag from the airport. She heard the door open to the bathroom, and she stuffed the bag back into the closet. She sat down slowly on the bed and covered her mouth with her hand. She shook her head and fought the tears. Tina walked into the bedroom with a towel wrapped around her.
“Hey baby,” Bette looked at Tina as she walked over to the closet. She didn’t say a word and stared down at the floor. Tina turned around and looked at Bette. “What’s the matter?” Bette finally looked up at Tina and shook her head.
“Nothing,” she smiled faintly. “I’m going to take a shower and then we can leave.” She walked out of the bedroom and walked towards the bathroom.
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Shane and Carmen were sitting at their table in The Planet. Alice and Dana came in, and Alice stopped.
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Aww shit son this is so not going to turn out well.I’ve been a silent reader but after this I had to comment.
I’m glad, that you didn’t make Bette and Carmen cheat, that would have been too weird…But I can’t wait how Shane is going to explain this to Helena. Love this story!! PPS
Bette is been so strong, if it had been me,I would have lost this old Taurus temper and shit would have hit the fan. Helena came at the right time, Bette will reconize Tinas panties. How will Shane explaine the shirt and panty to Carman???? Tina knows that Bette knows Just please post soon. I have a feeling that Bette will leave and Shane has lost a dear friend also Both Tina abd Shane a lot of friends. thanks
Some how tina knows that bette knows something is going on….i wonder’s whose clothes they are????
Wow. This is bad on so many levels. Shane is busted for sure. Carmen will know she lied about where she was that weekend. I am guessing she will try to keep Tina out of it. If those are Tina’s clothes, though — The fan will not know what hit it. Thanks, AKcb, for another wonderfully written chapter to this great story.
it’s time to grill those two. I don’t know how what kind of lie will Shane say this time. She and Tina are caught on guard for sure. lying and cheating at the expense of their friends and love ones, anyway…Tina, Tina, Tina, I can’t believe this woman, she knows that Bette is within the proximity and still wanted to have one round with shane in the restroom were Bette can check her on her taking so long in the bathroom. I’m impressed w/ this Bette’s patience, she will never act until she has the proof in front of her, then came Helena. This story is great.PPS…
I guess I’m one of the few who is not into all this shipping. I don’t care who is together it depends on how well the story is written and this is a well writen story so it works….I was wondering when Helena was going to show up and put a wretch in Shane and Tina’s secret rendezvous.
Please let the stuff be Tina’s and let Bette recognize it. It has to be over soon..I know Bette suspects, but to have Tina after Shane in the bathroom, with Bette in the next room and could come in at any time…Of course, these are the ones who were having at it on Tina’s kitchen floor with Angie in the next room. Tina just plain does not give a damn about anyone. I can’t stand her making a fool of Bette any longer. It has to come down hard on Tina and soon, please. Shane’s a skank as well, who also cares about no one… and I love Shane..sob.. Please let the stuff be Tina’s and see how they try to weasel their way out of it, in front of everyone.
good good good. Please Post Soon, this is goooooood.
Uh oh…
Busted!
This can’t end on a happy note. At least, hopefully, no one will get killed. Try To PPS.
HEY ACB, Shit will really hit the fan if Bette recognise these panties. I can’t wait to read if there is a major blow-out here. I think that this affair is about to be revealed. Brilliant plot development. More please, Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan
i just read this story today & it’s so captivating. i’m not a big fan for tina-shane and i certainly hope there’s still a tiny bit of redemption for shane, cause i absolutely love carmen! poor her, gotta deal with another heartbreak, again! keep it coming!
Hello AKcb, oh yeah the heat has just risen to extreme, these two are so cooked. If Shane tries to intercede and play that Tina wasn’t there Bette is going to see brimstone… Bette already knows that Tina is lying to her and to have one of her “Best” friends not only betray her but to out and out lie to her is going to set her over the edge. Tina realizes that she is completely Fu**ed here and she needs to find any way to salvation when it comes to Bette… she better just come clean cause if she lets this go deeper then I want to see Camen kick her @$$ and then Shane’s. This story is so freaking awesome. Sincerely, JC
Shit shit shit. This is a big shit, mess. Somebody will die from this. Big mess in front. OMG OMG OMG OMG. did not want to comment but this mess could not keep me out of it.
OMG this is soooooooooo bad soooooooo messy can’t sleep after reading this. I am waiting for your next post. I can feel the storm’s coming. gob smacked i am… PPS
Cleanup on aisle 3!!!
oh shit!! i fell bad for bette and carmen