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Waiting For a Star to Fall #1 pt 2
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from previous chapter…
…I sure as hell am not perfect, and you don’t need to be perfect!! I will tell you this every day if I have to, just like you were there for me every day when I needed it. If Jodi is gone, it’s her loss. It doesn’t seem to me that she was right for you anyway. You need a woman who is going to value you, and love YOU, instead of one who wants to use you or demand that you be what they want you to be.”
Tears slipped down Bette’s cheeks and Shane felt the hot sting against her own eyelids, as she pulled Bette from the chair into her arms. She could see Bette struggling to deal. Shane wiped away the tears from Bette’s cheeks with her fingertips and wrapped her arms around Bette. She was shaking, but Shane couldn’t hear her cry. Shane felt her pull back and looked searchingly at her, seeing what was in her eyes, and then they kissed. Shane did not expect this and it was unlike any kiss she had had before. There was no trace of power play or seduction, but was warm and sweet, tasting of love and tears. This was a single meeting of two hearts, two souls, that shared much more than they would ever be able to, or need to express.
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When it ended, Shane and Bette looked at each other, in surprise and yet not really, as though it were the most natural thing. Shane did try to speak, "Bette, um.. should we, um, we really, um, you’re up"..and was silenced with Bette’s finger on her lips, lightly tracing them. Bette’s eyes were still wet with tears but Shane saw a small smile in them, a smile for Shane in Bette’s eyes and it was the most beautiful smile she had ever seen. She wanted to live in that smile. Shane kissed Bette’s finger, kissed her eyes, her cheeks and then again her mouth. Shane kept thinking how odd it should have felt to be kissing Bette, but for some reason it wasn’t. It was soft and warm and soon a gentle dance of tongues, and then Shane wasn’t thinking anymore about whether they should be doing this. She felt only Bette’s tongue, licking her lips, stroking her tongue. Bette was not wearing a bra and her breasts were so soft and her nipples so hard against Shane’s, and with every breath they met, until Shane couldn’t breathe at all. Bette was kissing her neck and had her hands on Shane’s back, until they thought they would die if their lips and tongues didn’t meet again.
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Not the likeliest of couples but damn hot. It was well written, too.
Jesus God is right!!! Can’t tell ya how much I’m liking your story…I can see them together, they click emotionally and back each other up..great update!!!!
Hello Caeleigh, first let me say I am so happy you are back… this was so powerful… so full of raw emotions from two characters that exude raw emotions. For me this is all about release… together they can release all of their pent up fear and self hatred… they can release their pasts and move towards their futures. While I don’t see these two a becoming a permanent couple… they have a certain chemistry that allows them to realize that through sexualized energies they can heal… they can each experience a re-birth. I see them moving on from this experience with a deeper kinship… not an “In Love” but a bond that transits all emotional boundaries… they are soul mates on a completely transitional level. I’m sure that almost makes no sense at all :P… but its how I see this… the vivid nature of your words and the stark emotions that you create are a just so very powerful… you better be bring more… you hear me… more. :P… Sincerely, JC
i am not a big fan of shane’s, but i am a big fan of your writing, and picturing bette with anyone the way you wrote this chapter, is hot, hot, hot!!!
Hmmmmmm…. while I don’t think they would ever actually hook up, it was amazingly written and hot to boot! Well done! So when will we see the next chapter/installment/one-off/whatever! Bring on more!
wow…this was hot but as someone said i cant see this going on and on and being meaningful…she was there for bette on this one night as a comforting friend…and i’m not saying that because i think shane is beneath bette or anything (even though she was laying under her in this story…lol) i just think they work good together in a role of support for each other. you wrote this well though and i hope to see more of your work….i am a fan.
Bette and Shane? Sorry, just not my cup of tea.
This is just wrong
Caeleigh brave under taking of an unlikely coupling. I could maybe see a one night stand if the were both drunk but much more than that has to be really short lived. Intellectully and emotionally I just don’t see it going on for very long. But as I said Caeleigh very brave, esp in the face of all the TIbette and Belena fantasy. Shette, Bhane….Doesn’t quite sound right.
I see Shane sharing a deep emotional bond with Bette and also with Jenny, I can’t really picture them in a lasting sexual relationship. I do think Bette and Shane could have comfort sex. I’m glad you wrote this and I hope you write more.
Okay, it is a combo that I never thought I’d see…but it is HOT!!!
Oh good Lord! That was f*cking HOT!!!!!!!!!! I had to read it again! HOT! SEXY! EMOTIONAL! STIMULATING! AWESOME! Bette-n-Shane, Bette-n-Helena… Bette-n-Tina. I am all for either of them, because they are too f*cking hot and sexy to me! I can just see Shane worshipping Bette. I hear ya Shane! I am right there with you, girl! OMFG! What a way to start my morning!
This is so fucking AWESOME!!! I’vbe always thought that Shane had a hidden desire for Bette. I don’t know if it’s desire, admiration or what but Shane feels something for Bette and it only seems natural that they would eventually end up together. Shane admires the relationships that Bette has and i feel that Bette probably sees a younger version of herself when she looks at Shane. i just hope you make this a multipost story. PPS!
WOW – WOW – WOW. I love this story SO SO SO much. It’s always been a fave of mine to see Shane and Bette together. I even wrote one ‘Powerfull Feelings’ but sort of lost my way a little. Please keep up with this one cos your feelings from the two women are making me melt……………If anyone wants to read mine and PM to let me know if I should try and get inspired again – let me know. Thanks again for your story. See ya. FAY.
I just had to read your work. Interesting pairing! (: Definitely very mentally stimulating. Really makes you think about which other unlikely characters could -very possibly- be paired together. (: Looking forward to your next post.