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Sunday Mornings: 4(a) – Monday, Take Two …
Sunday Mornings: 4
Seven days was all she wrote,
A kind of ultimatum note, she gave to me …
Monday, I could wait till Tuesday
If I make up my mind
Wednesday would be fine
Thursday’s on my mind
Friday’d give me time
Saturday could wait
But Sunday’d be too late
Seven days will quickly go
The fact remains, I love her so
Seven days
So many ways
But I can’t run away
I can’t run away
“Come on, let’s go get lunch,”
Bette allowed Tina to lead her away, the others choosing to sit and watch with half-transfixed, half-horrified stares as the last scene of the morning played out,
“I can’t believe you actually came …” Tina said again, smiling into Bette’s side as she led them both away,
Bette voice dropped husky and low, “Well there’s a bunch of things I can’t quite believe these days,”
Tina smirked, “Oh yeah … such as?”
But they’d already reached the food trailer, scores of LA dieters ahead ordering raw things, sprouts and egg white omelettes, Bette screwed up her nose as she checked out the menu list, opting for the juice bar instead, she yawned blatantly as she began forcing a carrot through the spout,
Tina chuckled, feeling the lack of sleep too, although Bette always wore it worse, “Tired?”
Bette rolled her eyes, as if to say ‘of course’,
They sat across from one another in the midday sunshine, seemingly unaware of the many set crew who milled around, no one stopping to interrupt the couple who sat with heads bent over juices and salads, talking slowly,
“They shot the ‘lets make a baby’ scene this morning,” Tina said quietly,
Bette looked up from her lunch with one eyebrow raised in interest, “Oh yeah?”
Tina nodded, saying nothing although her eyes and her furrowed brow indicated that in many ways it hadn’t been as easy to watch,
“Can’t be that much fun for you, this …” Bette stated sadly, glancing up to look around. Everywhere she looked elements of their beautiful life were on display, from the quiet suburban setting, the women who milled around and the occasional phrase she would overhear being rehearsed to perfection that made her stop short, imagining herself or Tina,
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(89 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
What a treat. If you could put a tuning fork to a story this would be in perfect pitch…I can see them so clearly…please continue.
Damn good, Sofa. Really, really good.
Awesome, sofa. Thanks.
Damn, this just keeps getting better. I liked how you had Tina ask Bette to be there for her. The last line, what a stupid questions. “Are you coming”?, well duh.
youuuuuu, you keep sneaking these things by me so that i’m not first to comment. hehe. ok, so this was beautiful…i think that *because* i have such issues with the tina/bette cheating issue, i’m compelled by your inner musings and poetic analysis. i’m not saying *because* because its about me, i’m saying *because* because somehow you manage to touch lightly on the difficulties and ‘just under the surface’ pain of the scenerio between these two (pain in terms of what jodi will feel, but perhaps also in terms of tina and bette’s memories of their past relationship) while celebrating the openness of their interactions, because you’re right, they are definately open, and the way you write them, beautifully so. lovely writing babe, and i look forward to reading more of your valentines special;) xo
Hot and sweet!
Keep these coming sofa.Looking forward to the next part.
OMFG that was very sensual and you did it all without any nudity! I must agree with the comments so far sofa, you are a wonderful writer and this is a beautiful snippet!
I feel like I am intruding in their space. Almost like I am easedropping in their conversation. I love how they have that connection again. What I don’t like is that jodi is still in the picture.
”look out for a little valentines special, *grin* ”… L@@King … ;-)
the ending was WOW. :)
I’m loving this series of stories. I think it would indeed be pretty tough for B&T to hear their words in the mouths of the actresses. Wonder if they’ll address that on the show? Looking forward to more, thanks for writing.
Jodie didnt ask for this,she knew fron the beginning that Tina would always have Bettes heart. Once you give your heart complerly,It hard to get it back, that is what both did.Bette didnt handle Tinas heart with a lot of care. thanks
Excellent sofa…waiting for next……
Do I like that Bette is cheating on Jodi, NO. But I so love Bette and Tina together and they just seem to have finally found the same page. On a side note, Alice’s “single white female” comment was SO PERFECT!
Brava, Sofasitter! I’m looking forward to the sequel or should I say the “third coming”. I like their subtle teasing, the “babe” term of endearment that slipped off Tina’s tongue, the references to the sexy undies Tina wore in their first two comings and just about everything else. :> Thanks a lot for this gem!
Hiya Sofa girl! I LOVE how you weave all the necessary components into this one! It is absolutely incredible. Bette really is at a difficult place. She doesn’t want to hurt anyone, but is finding that she needs to go back to the one she was originally with. No doubt she has learned from Jodi I am sure, even if it is learning who she really wants to be with…the woman she strayed from. Damn, this was smoking without even being all about sex! WOO HOO. You are awesome, and these are the best. Thanks for posting.
Damn, next time let the writters at the lword borrow your filming scene. I like yours a hell of alot more. The alpha bette leading tina astray is hot.
mmmm they know each other so well. i think that’s what they both miss…that of intimacy that long term lovers have…bring on the NC17, it’s valentine’s here already…thx for the treat of a post 5.06
Oh…Oh…Oh…so wonderful! I was enraptured by the dialogue, the glances, the touches…the walk home…the moments to come…anxiously awaiting Part B…
I just posted a question on the MB about how the heck Jenny knew what Bev and Nina said in there home! you read my mind. this story is delightful. will you continue to shadow the show? this sneaking around is kind of hot! pps
This is the first time I’ve had the pleasure of reading your contributions–a sofa virgin, if you will. I was impressed and captivated by the picture you painted. You’ve been added to my “favorite authors” list. Now I have to go and catch up on everything you’ve posted!Thanks, Maureen
Ahh thats good!
Damn the ending had me blushing profoundly, so hot yet so intimate wow