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How could you forget us? Chapter 29
Chapter 29
“Oh my God, Bette this is so beautiful.” Helena stepped into the room, held Bette’s hand and looked around. The room was filled with lighted white pillar candles. Red rose petals were sprinkled everywhere, on the floor, on the bed, in a large garden tub filled with steamy hot water. Also in the tub were floating candles. On the side of the tub was a container chilling a bottle of champagne, a bowl of strawberry’s some chocolate covered, and another bowl filled with whipped cream. Helena walked over to the bowl of strawberries took one out dipped it in the whipped cream and fed it to Bette. “I see you’ve had a very capable accomplice for your evening’s plans.”
Bette licked the whip cream and juice from the strawberry off her lips and kissed Helena lightly. She held Helena around her waist so their hips were together. She looked around the room, smiled and said shyly, “I know it’s kind of cheesy and may be a bit over the top, but I really wanted to do something special for you. I go home tomorrow afternoon. I wanted to take care of you tonight. I know you’ve been stressed over me, over your decision, over whatever else you might have going on that stresses you. I just wanted to say and show you I love you. I wanted to take this night to pamper you and love you and make love to you. I came here to apologize to you, to tell you I love you, to show you that with you is where I want to be and hopefully to convince you that you should be with me. I’m not perfect. I have made a lot of mistakes and I’m likely to make a bunch more but it still love you.” Her voice began to crack as she continued, “You are my best friend and I just am not ready to lose you or be apart from you.”
Helena ran her fingers across Bette’s lips and kissed her. She felt a lump in her throat and a tear running down her cheek. “Elizabeth Porter, it is cheesy and very over the top, but it’s beautiful and sweet and very endearing. I’ve loved my date, every part of it. But you know you’ve set a new standard and I don’t know how you top this going forward but you should know I want to be with you more than you can imagine.”
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(50 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
S I knew that Helena was going back to LA with her love and let me say that this was a wonderful chapter!!!
that was a somewhat of a surprise, i thought they’d stay in nyc. i’m curious, what made you bring them back to l.a…? that was an awesome chapter…FANTASTIC as usual!!! there will be more, right?
Nice update wonder what will happen when they get back to LA?
Hip Hip Hooray!!!! Best news ever for Bette’s ears. Squrl – I’ll be back later to post more comments. I saw the update and just had to read it and now I’m late for my appt. w/ my trainer (I’m blaming you for this one….LOL) Thanks for the update and not leaving us in suspense for too long :)
I love that last paragraph. It stirs a lot of emotions. Beautiful chapter Squirl.
I just got up reading all!!! Great update and great storyline!! I really like Helena in any pairing but never thought about Belena and I must say it works perfectly!!
A tearful Bette just takes my breath away…wow! Helena couldn’t have revealed her decision at a more perfect time. Looking forward to the trip HOME!
squirlie dear you mademy day not only did I see an update but you kept our girls together and even let Helena move back to LA. I could kiss ya right now (figure of speech lol). Thanks for the update.
did you really stop there??? nooo… you really did! anyway, it was a great chapter. thank you (i love that story :o). I hope bette and helena have a long and exciting night ahead. pps
Aww that was so sweet!!!! I was really hoping that Helena would stay in NY, but after this chapter, I’m REALLY HAPPY that she is going home with Bette… it was the right decision.. loved it!!!PPS!!