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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 50
Helena: Hello mommy.
Peggy leaned down and kissed her daughter formally on both cheeks.
Peggy: Helena darling you remember Bette Porter.
Try as she might Helena couldn’t hide the smirk sneaking its way across her face.
Helena: Of course, Bette so nice to see you.
Of all of the things Bette had thought Peggy might want from her, none of them involved her daughter. There was no one Bette despised more then this woman. She didn’t respond to Helena and instead turned toward Peggy.
Bette: I’m sorry Peggy but I can’t stay.
Peggy: Of course you can.
Peggy had already taken her seat and was sipping her Bloody Mary. Bette couldn’t think of a more appropriate drink at this moment.
Bette: No really, I can’t. Today is an important rehearsal and I should be there.
Peggy: Sit Bette.
The tone is Peggy’s voice was reminiscent of every mother Bette had ever known. Without any further protest she sat.
Maitre d: What can I get you to drink?
Bette: I’ll just have a cup of coffee thank you.
Helena: Don’t be silly Bette, get yourself a real drink.
Bette sneered in Helena’s general direction.
Bette: I don’t want a “ real drink”.
Helena: Mommy, tell Bette to order something a little more appropriate for a celebration.
Bette: Celebration?
Bette spun toward Peggy.
Bette: Celebration?
Peggy didn’t flinch.
Peggy: She will have a mimosa.
Bette: First of all I don’t want a mimosa and second I want to know why I’m here. More importantly what could I have possibly have to celebrate with Helena?
Helena: There is no reason to be rude Bette.
Bette took a deep breath before responding.
Bette: I don’t mean to be rude Peggy but I think you know better then anyone that my history with your daughter is less than friendly.
Peggy pointed back at the Maitre d that Bette forgot was standing there.
Peggy: Get her a vodka rocks.
Bette didn’t fight this time. From the looks of it she would need all of the hard alcohol she could get her hands on. The Maitre d spun on his heels and strutted away.
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YOu don’t know how excited I am to see you on here!!! Don’t have time to read it right now but I will first thing in the morning. Can’t wait for this story to continue..
I was just thinking about you. Welcome back. I too will go back to read tomorrow.
i glad you are back, pps
I have to say you had my blood pumping and not really in a good relaxed way….more tense, nervous and wondering what you were going to give us…glad to see you’re back…I think I’m ready!!!
It is about damn time! I keep coming back to this story because it is a reminder of how absoutely proud I am to have the prvilege of being in your life. It the one place that sums up everything I lvoe about you: Your incredibl talent (event in both the writing and the fact that you are so detailed about the show/audition/ rehearsal process – how do you thnk she knows all of this girls?!), your incredible heart (only someone who knows true depth of emotion could write the cliff hangers you do!!), and how much you love me in return (why else would you watch me tool around cleaning all day while I made you write?). I’m sorry I’ve subjected al of your readers to my sappy romantic ideology, but I couldn’t think of a more appropriate medium to use to tell you I am in love with you.
Well I’ll be damned! Welcome back Flair!! Bring on the DRAMA!!!! I loved the last few lines Bette: You told them. Avery: No you just did. LMAOOOO!!!! Great read. Thanks, and again, it’s great to have you back writing again.
Ok I finally got to read this. All I have to say is that one of the biggest drama queens is back.Helena is going to be trouble. Bette has to see Tina again. Avery is getting it from both ends.This is worse than the show itself right now.PPS.
You mentioned this in the car, so I thought I should catch up. I just read the most recent chapter and am going to to start over from the very beginning. Wow, that was long long ago!
flair I am so excited you are back to the story. I have been checking in and low and behold a post. please keep up the great writing.
before i start read i want to say “WELCOME BACK” i really missed your story.. now im off to read.. will comment later..
Great as always…..keep those posts coming. I know you will have our girls together again…..of course, there will be tons of drama to go along with it. Welcome back!
drama drama drama… well i hope Bette do as boring Avery said.. cant wait for Bette and Tina encounter.. Flair.. just perfect as always.. and i hope you do post soon.. i cant wait for months again..lol.. thanks :-)
please write again.. please continue this story.. it is such a nice story.. the twists that you create are really awesome.. please, please, please… post again soon..
lovelovelove it, so glad you’re back :)
welcome back, im always reading this story over and over again…another great update! i sooo love this story and alex heehee! please please please post soon!
I havent read this yet but I just want to say… WHOAAA!!! You finally posted. I’ve waited and waited and waited and I must admit that I gave up and u left me heartbroken. I read all ur chapters within a few days (ya, I was new) and u took me on a roller coaster ride and when u stopped, u left a very disturbed me. I was just telling someone abt how I cudnt sleep for a while after reading ur stories a few days ago and complained that u left me hanging. I dont know if u r going to bring tibette back together, the way u did at first, BUT, I sure hope so (PLEASE!!!) Ok, I’m ranting, but gosh, how cud u just up and leave us like that? Ok ok, I’m just grateful that u r back. Pls dont abandon us again.
OMG..WOW I LOVE YOUR STORY……..i laugh i cry and get angry. i can’t wait until your next post.
Drama keep coming, please post more, thanks!
tbc?