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Soft Spoken Secrets (Gudamg Garam) # 15
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Previously
When she got at the scene nothing else could guarantee her strength and her knees gave up on her.
The mother wanted to exchange her life for the life of her daughter.
The lover wanted to revival the one she loves, giving anything anyone could ask for.
Tina wanted darkness to descend on her, but she was too brave. Nonetheless, when she sensed under her knees the blood of her beloveds, her heart acidly melted inside her chest and Tina lost herself to despair and began to cry out for Her.
She asked God’s mercy.
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Tina couldn’t walk anymore. Walk, follow, lead was something she was just unable to. The blonde imagine if she would be able someday to do it again. She felt this heavy, wild feeling, this absence of meaning, that only the one’s who lost their souls sensed it. The fact is that, at that minute, Tina felt like someone that had lost half of her humanity. She was half since the tragedy.
Tina couldn’t walk anymore. The close she gets, the weak she felt. Despair assaulted her chest. Disillusion filled her veins.
She couldn’t avoid the thought: Not anymore.
The darkness of her thoughts.
Blackness outside, around, inside, within her.
The line walked slowly. That group of sad people walked counting saving their steps, avoiding the move, as if nobody wanted to get to their final destiny. However they keep walking, moved by the impossibility of change the fate.
Tina couldn’t look to her face. The face reminded her of how lucky she was, but also how unhappy she would be for the rest of her journey. Half alive. Half waiting.
Nonetheless, Tina had to be strong, not only for her. She had to look to Madison. Her daughter was devastated. She was crying like a child for the things she had lived; for what she wanted desperately to live and for the excruciating feeling she couldn’t avoid: guilty.
And Tina knew guilty would mortify a soul, because regret was whipping hers with no mercy.
The blonde had to be strong.
The creamy skinned woman embraced her daughter with the strength and warmth that still remains inside her entrails. She took care to gently avoid the wound that would become the scar that would crystallize the memory.
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Hello Braz, this was yet another truly amazing journey you have taken us on… the strings of words you have weaved create such a vivid emotional bond that one cannot help but feel each and every push and pull upon these characters souls as if they were our very own. The connection that you have created through your writing is so truly brilliant and such a powerful experience… and I thank you. I also want to thank you for your beautiful words towards me… the memories were only open briefly and as painful as they might have been I must thank you for awakening them… it is through your words that I could reconnect to my memories and while not all memories are painless… they all shape us none the less… so thank you… Sincerely, JC
God you’re playing with my nerves! But hey, you’re really one I love to hate!
You really did scare me with this chapter. It was a dream right? Great story!
GOOD GOD!!!! You had me in tears! The whole funeral scene was so heart wrenching. I can’t even imagine saying goodbye to my partner, my lover, the one who compliments my existence. BUT…this sure as hell came close to bringing those feelings of having to do so, so very close to home. I thank god that it was a dream, and hope that Bette will still be okay. You have me on the edge with this one woman! Thanks Braz, you are a terrific writer, and so sweet in what you share with me. Love and Hugs. xoxo
Jeeez, Braz! We were crying, next to Tina & Madison. We could feel all their pain and despair. Then, you placed a “band-aid” on our wounded heart, stating it was only a dream???? Gosh, woman! You certainly know how to shake our feelings with your brilliant writing, dear friend. PPS – Lucero & Marsha
Honeyyyyyyyyy………………… you almost killed me when I realized what i was reading : Bette’s funeral… when I read the word “coffin”, I swear my heart skipped more than one beat :-((( If you had stopped your post after the words “…it didn’t avoid the utter shout that took her throat and gained the air.”, I don’t know if I could have forgiven you… well, it was all a dream, a very vivid and heart breaking dream… one that made me re-live one of mines, 18 months ago… a “nightmare” doesn’t seem a strong enough word for those :-(( — now, I hope that the doctor that just came in has good news, and that Bette will “only” have scars… you’d better post quick, because I won’t sleep well until I know (you wouldn’t want to give me hard nights, honey, would you ?) — anyway, you sure know how to build a rollercoaster… and I am NO drama queen, I HATE drama… I want only LOVE and HAPPINESS and HAPPY SEX… but hey “happy people have no story” — please keep writing :-)
You had me going, I really thought that Bette had died and my face had tears on it. Please do not let Bette make this horrible dream that Tina had a reality.
Please dont kill Bette. My heart wont be able to take it. Please… Please…
Please let Bette not die. I can’t take it. PLEASE
Words just doesnt seems to come to me now. Thanks for posting
I’m usually just a silent reader but man, you almost gave me a heart attack with this chapter. Your description of emotions is so good, it’s almost like watching a movie.
Dude that was crazy wrong the groups are like what the helll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Braz your dream with Tina was so real I really believed it,,,,amazing how you have us loving this painful chapter of love, loss and more love!!!
You made me cry, it was so heartrending and tragic. I hope that Bette will be ok and Tina will have a chance to share her love with her.
Im crying here my friend and please don’t kill Bette, please let her be ok. We all just wanted B&T be together and happy again, please let our wish come true. Please post more, thanks!