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Carmine Lips: caramel skin
Previously 20
At that moment, my nucleus was on fire. She woke up the hunger inside my womb and it would be insatiable. The fire devastated my entrails. Lust set fire on my devilry carmine heart. My blood forever colored from carmine wines. She was the wood, paper, fuel to my desire and she made my existence full of life again.
I let her went away from my embrace. She let my arms orphan from her warm touch.
I watched her moving away from me.
She turned twice to look at me. First, just her eyes looked out for me. The last time, she turned all her body and kept walking while she waved me goodbye.
That night…That night… dreams made a line to be dreamed. Again.
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She was sparingly. Bette was economizing her feelings. She received me with light eyes, a warm embrace and some kind of fear inside her voice.
I wasn’t sparingly at all. I embrace her for a long time.
Time enough to call people’s attention.
Time enough to tears bloom from my eyes.
Time enough to breath her taste. To taste her scents.
Time enough to kiss her on the neck, behind her right ear, my little secret pleasure place. This place in her body I choose to be always, when I need, want and could. At least in public areas.
I felt her tension.
And then I felt her tension went away to inhabit other body. She was just like a scared child inside safest arms. But I also sensed she was not complete. Some peaces of my mocha woman denied itself to surf in such wave of relaxation.
“It’s so good to see you, B… I can’t just put in words…how…how much I’ve been missing you…me…”
That was me. I was comple-te-ly exposed.
Naked …More naked than anyone can be. The kind of nudeness that told you, and the others, that you’re giving yourself, that you’re more than bared in flesh and blood. More than any puritan, any religious, any false moralist could maculate.
The art of living with love.
Love subscripted my body.
Do you know what I mean? I even didn’t know what she would tell me and there – was – I – almost saying: “Please, please… say you still love me like I do love you….Please…”
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(58 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
You are unbelievable! Just so you know, you could never disappoint me (or anyone else) with your stories. I can’t tell you enough how beautiful and moving your stories are. Amazing!
Wow!
I have to say that MCKT said it best already. You are an extraordinary writer my friend. I am never disappointed, and always appreciate that your posts will illicit alot of passion and emotion. I can’t wait for more, though I do understand how crazy things have been as of late. I know as soon as they get into a normal routine, you will be crashing the site server with all your updates! BRING IT ON! ;-)) Thanks for your lovely shout out.
I feel high, it always feel like that whenever I read your story, you can’t imagine the way you make me feel, your talent and usage of words as beautifully as you do is so breath taking, I really am in love with this story. They are made for each other and only for one another, they could live in a world that has nobody but them and it would be enough. Thank you for your generosity and for being the person you are.All my love
Braz, you’re already making your magic, here! We know these girls may slip out of your hands, every now and then, but you can always find a way to lead them back together, while making it poetic, delightful and erotic to read. Thanks, dear friend for updating our fav story. PPS. Big Hugs & Kisses for u – Lucero & Marsha
Woww… you just left me speachless… which is something ! I would soooo love to tell my love in such wonderful words to my beloved one :-) — I just KNEW it could not be the end… and now, how to get rid of their respective spouse ? tell me… please… thanks for your so beautiful words… Thank you, honey XOXOX
Wow, moving and amazing. Hope that they can make it work.
Wow! It’s so moving..
Beautifully written. PS.
I am speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and I love that u find the time to fit this in..
WOW!!! Perfect ending to this chapter Braz…..
Damn that was awesome and beautiful, love it. Please post more, thanks!