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We all make mistakes Ch.17
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Are you back on drugs?” Shane questioned confused at her friends behavior.
“No, now just go.”
The buzzer then went off again.
“Hello?” Alice said think she might know who it was.
“Hi Alice Bette and I are here can we come up?”
“Sure why not, I will leave the door open for you.”
Alice then walked into the living room smiling as she saw Shane and Dana hugging and all her breakfast had been eaten. This has to be the best 24hours ever! Alice thought to herself.
“Dana?” Bette questioned
“Bette.” Dana replied
Bette smiled, “How did you get back here so quick? Tina and I just saw it on the news and headed straight over.”
“It actually happened last night…” Dana started as everyone gathered around the living room to listen to the story. “…I was coming back from a dinner with my manager to celebrate my win and was walking up the stairs when I tripped over my own feet and fell flat on my face!”
All the group covered their mouths trying not to laugh.
“Its okay you can laugh.” Dana pouted
“Aw baby.” Alice put her arm around Dana and kissed her forehead as the rest of the group went into fits of giggles.
“Only you Dane.” Shane commented
“I see how you fell but whats actually wrong?” Tina questioned
“Well I must have landed awkwardly as I have a broken metatarsal.”
Everyone looked confused apart from Bette who new exactly what it was.
“A broken what now?” Alice ask
“Wait Alice how come you don’t know this? By the looks of things Dana has been here all night.” Tina ask
Dana blushed as Alice smirked… “Exactly, she has been here all night!”
“Ew too much information.” Shane said in disgust
“Anyway before we get too far into our sex life, It’s a small bone in my foot which is going to take about eight weeks to heal.”
“What about playing sweetheart? How is it going to affect your game?” Helena ask as the rest of the group started to laugh
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Loving it loving it. It is a great story. Poor dana having to gimp around
great update – love the humour – more soon please. Need to know what / who it is – could it be paparazzi?
Wish I could help you with Up and Coming, since I love it so much, but I’m really bad at these things. I can barely write a decent comment, lol. This was such a fun update!!! Loved “what was it called again?…Oh yeah a tennis racket!”. I can totally picture Dana making this joke and then laughing at it. Alice and Dana are just too cute. Stupid IC. Don’t leave us wondering too much about the cliffhanger… PPS!!!
Why are the Danish writers so awesome at cliffhangers?! Great update, I’m with NKL def should not read at work..too hard to restrain the laughter :D Love it, PPS!!!
Yay! Update!! I am so glad Dana’s injury won’t keep her from playing. Too funny that Alice was so caught up in the sex to realize she hadn’t asked how it happened. Then again, I can understand fully. ;-D Love the conversation about how they injured each other over the years. Cliffhanger? Argh!! My guess is the paparazzi are there. Great update, nbd14! Thanks!!
My guess the whole gang or a parent. love the banter between them. thanks
Urgh! What is it with you Danish writers and cliffhangers huh? I’m just kidding, I loved the update. I had a hard time not laughing at the car in reverse and tennis racket part. I know, I shouldn’t read FF when I’m at work, but I like challenges.. and not laughing at those remarks certainly is one :) And about the cliffhanger… my guess is Will.