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A few extra scenes for episode 508
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“This is really one of the most excruciating things I’ve been through,” Bette turned from the counter top to make the statement.
Tina shifted away from the table and took a tentative step towards her, placing her right hand on Bette’s left hip. They were close enough to kiss. But their earlier promise, that they would stop sleeping together, was still fresh in their minds.
It was a dangerous game. Being so close when the women they were actually with could walk in at any moment. It made their proximity that much more tantalizing.
“I think we should go see Dan,” Bette said, resisting the urge she had to take Tina’s face in her hands and kiss her.
“Dan Foxworthy?”
“He knows us better than anyone,” Bette confirmed Tina’s question with her assessment of Dan’s suitability. “Maybe he can help us figure out what the hell we’re doing.”
“You mean besides having a torrid affair?” Tina asked. She stroked Bette’s cheek with her own as her hands continued to rest on her hips.
Tina felt Bette’s rapid exhalation stream across her face.
“Torrid,” Bette said, quietly. “Good word.”
“I have a few more words for you,” Tina whispered, grasping just the slightest bit of the skin of Bette’s neck between her teeth.
“Are you going home with Sam?” Bette asked as her eyes closed and her head tilted back.
“Are you staying here with Jodi?” Tina countered leaning back to look at her.
“No, I’m not,” Bette said, opening her eyes again.
“Where’s Angie?”
“Sleeping over at Kit’s,” Bette said.
“That frees you up for a sleepover too…”
They heard voices just before the door opened. They scurried to separate themselves before everyone walked in.
“That was incredible. Thank you for showing us,” Sam exclaimed as they walked into the loft. She directed her comments to Tina and Bette. “You guys should check out Jodi’s sculpture up there. It’s amazing.”
“I know, it’s beautiful,” Bette said.
Sam turned specifically to address Tina.
“Did you wanna get going? I should really…” Sam started.
“Yeah, I have to get up so early,” Tina replied, glancing over at Bette.
They quickly said their goodbyes and were on their way out the door.
It wasn’t long at all before everyone had left. Bette and Jodi took only a few minutes to finish with clean up.
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That was great. I really loved it.
I love these one chapter story continuations. Please keep posting them.
I like the one-offs. Please continue.
This is the kind of stuff that should be filling the 8 – 15 minutes that Ilene consistently leaves on the table! Great stuff, JKS!
I loved it. And i don’t think it is a lazy way to write a story. You are right that the scenes that we do get most of the times leave us wanting more, more closeness, more time with them. So this adding scenes to the episodes is actually the fulfilling of a need :whistle: And this one was such an insightful look into what goes inside the heads of those two ladies and what drives them to circle each other without talking about their feelings. I liked that Tina asked Bette to come clean “”Does closer to me mean further from Jodi or do you want both of us?”, that is something that the Tina from the show seems to be asking herself only in her head, lol. Thank you for taking the time to write for us. It was wonderful to read :o)
a very happy dance im doing, even on a very bad knee. love these stories. keep em up. thx
Loved it, thank you. I can see the characters from the show saying and doing these things … if only their potential reunion wasn’t being dragged out through an entire season!Look forward to reading more.
ok, I would be more than happy, for you to take over the writing for the L word. Can you start with Season 6?If it was at all possible, We fanfic readers would be in Tibetteland and very happy. Thankyou
That was a great chapter and i gree with those who said that a moment such as this belongs on screen. I dont normally confess to the feelings I get from reading fanfic but the tender morning conversation did make my cheeks warm. PPS
Clearly I am not alone in loving these. Seriously, I enjoy everything you write. Keep them coming as you can. Thanks.
If I have to write a comment to keep you writing, well here I am. Love anything you write, please continue.
I too am going to chime in about loving these one offs.I’ve tried to become inspired by each episode but to no avail.Keep writing because there are people who will read.
please do continue w/ these one-offs, love your “extended” scenes….i too have been inspired by the unsaid, but unlike you have not had the dedication as of late to put pen to paper; or finger to keyboard, as it were – my lame excuse of work being maddening :( yes, one has to wonder what the holdup is for bette w/ jodi….as much as i think there is an admiration for each other & affection, i don’t think either of them is “in” love even though jodi did say it the one time,it was said more in a “aw, you’re adorable” kind of way than a “i wanna spend the rest of my life w/ you.” wish bette would have spoken up when jodi told her to figure it out & said actually there’s nothing left to figure out, you & i aren’t right, tina & i are, period. Geez, these girls are killing me!!
Love your stories….you give so much more to the screen characters. I always enjoy reading your work. Thanks for posting.
i for one love these snapshots that you do. as you mentioned, it is great to see/read additional time being played out between the 2 of them and you do it so well. thanks for the time that you put into these.
How is it that I always like your version better? Thanks for taking the time to offer this alternative.
Please continue these little post, they are really good!
I adore these extended scenes and can’t imagine considering it a lazy way to write. Just brilliant. I would love to see your version played out… I think you are spot on in not only capturing their emotion, but of also enhancing their missing dialogue. Thanks for taking the time, swimmie!
I loved this chapter. I really enjoy your scene continuations. Please keep them coming.
Fantastic! I love these extra scenes.
Please keep doing what you’re doing. The show always leaves me wanting more.
I love the extended scenes…I’m glad that they are going back to see Dan, but Tina should be nervous as hell that Bette has learned NOTHING from their past relationship and she is still a big cheater. I’m very curious how this is going to be address…but in typical IC fashion, I’m sure it will be ignored…OK,sorry about my detour on the show, but I do love they way you add more to them, thanks, Fins!!!
Very sweet. Thanks for sharing this.
I’m enjoying these extensions to the episodes b/c they fill in the s/l that is often truncated.
Big :) Thanks, swim (Felt like being different tonight…my old self)
I love your extra scenes. I wish the show would take a hint from your writing and give us a little more. Guess you’ll just have to keep up the good work and keep them coming. :) Thanks so much!!!!
You are not lazy at all in any way, shape or form. This one unique extended scenes are a pleasure to read. It is wonderful to experience more time with Tina and Bette through your carefully written words and kind and thougtful dialogue. Please continue and thank you so very much for writing.
Your extra minutes are the best. Pleas keep writing them. Thanks for taking the time.
If this is a lazy way of writing a story, then I will take it anytime of the day. It was wonderful and thoughtful. I like your style because if there is drama it is there for a reason.
**Sigh** Thanks JKS…as always you bring a smile to my face.
JKS please, please, please keep writing theses episode scene continuations. I really look forward to them and you do it so incredibly well!
I hope you continue to write the extended scenes. Always wonderful to read, thanks.
this just another example of why you have been on my favorite author’s list for more than 2 years. great chapter. pps
I look forward to these each week. Please continue…you often capture what Ilene can not.
That was great!
Very nice I love these chapters that add your speical vision to all that gets left out on the tube. More please.
u don’t mean the end end do u? I’m loving what u r doing here…beautiful, sensitive, sweet…pps
i love your little “behind-the-scenes” chapters, they always explain so well what the show doesn’t do…this was perfect yet again, thank you
I for one enjoy these little continuation posts. I think they breathe life into what we imagine the rest of the scene would be like had IC decided to throw us more than a little tease and we still don’t know how it will play out. With her track record we could all be just as disappointed as we have been the last three years, even though she is making us feel good right now I don’t trust her she could easily flip the script. Please continue.
dont stop… I really enjoy reading all your extra scenes. Makes the story much nicer. I like how ur imagination works. Thanks for sharing.
If you feel that you should “stop writing the one chapter ‘episode follow ups'” because someone might not be interested in this approach, then, if I may :), I should tell the reader to “stop reading” your stories. Isn’t that easier? Heh. Please keep posting this extra scenes; we damn well know we won’t get them from the “creators” of this show.
That was great. Thanks for prolonging those few scences. Can’t seems to get enough of these two ladies…lol
HEY JKS, I am all for your wonderful and insightful extended scene stories. They flesh out many of the unknowns of the show. Everyone on the site agrees that we would love to have these filmed and added to the shows. Next best thing is you writing them and posting here for us all to enjoy. I would have adored to see Bette and Tina comfortable in each ours arms instead of all of the recent stolen moments. I have high hopes for Epi 5.12 in providing this. JKS, thank you for continuing this refreshing series. Many thansk from Your Loyal Fan.
Awesome! Yes, you certainly should continue with these shorties. It’s nice to see a little bit more blending and weaving of our ladies. Let’s face it, wouldn’t most of us just welcome a one full hour each week of just them???? LOL! Thanks Swimmie.
That was lovely – a beautiful little moment.
Aw Swimmie, please keep writing these one-offs, we enjoy them very much. It gives us that little bit more of what they are thinking and should be saying to one another out loud. It completes the rest of the story of each episode. Please keep writing. Thank you for doing this we know how limited your time must be. Thanks.
i love these extra scenes that aren’t in the episodes but should be! pms