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Love & Pride,
Chapter 81
“Alice – we all get teased about something – you made plenty of jokes when Helena got her community service and you are always saying that Tina and I are dull “
“For your freaking information – I am getting sex – lots of it “
“Is there anyone else in the room ? “ Helena asked
Alice looked around at the others
“Yes – Dana “
“That would be Dana who is with Lara – that Dana ? “ Tina said quietly
“Yes – yes it is “
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There was a stunned silence when Alice confirmed Tina’s question. For several seconds no one spoke
“You and Dana are fucking each other behind Lara’s back ?” Tina asked as if she hadn’t fully grasped what Alice had confirmed a few seconds previous
“Yes “
“God “ Helena looked at her friends and saw that they were as shocked as she was.
“Does Lara have any idea ?” Tina asked
“No – I don’t think she does “
“You are fucking Dana behind Lara’s back and yet you have just told the four of us as if you are fucking proud of yourself “ Tina said. Bette could recognise the rising anger in Tina’s voice and she put her hand on Tina’s arm as if to calm her down.
“I am not proud of it but I am in love with Dana “
“Has it occurred to you that Lara is also in love with Dana and has been for most of time we have been in England ?”
“Really ? “ Alice replied sarcastically “ And has it occurred to you that I have been watching the woman I love with someone else for that time ?”
Tina looked at the others
“Will someone else tell Alice what a shitty thing she is doing because she seems to think that its fine to fuck someone who is dating someone else “
“Its not good “ Shane said
“And you would know as you have had more affairs than anyone else this year – you are in no moral position to criticise me Shane “
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Wow, a chapter on cheating among friends, definitely a controversial, divisive topic. Is this your indirect dig on B&T’s Le Affair this season? Cheating is cheating and no matter how in love the cheats claim to be, they are still breaking the heart of someone else, the third party, in the process. That’s why B&T are keeping it a secret in the show. I guess Alice got really pissed by the ribbing she had been getting from her mates that’s why she broadcasted it. This is going to be messy. Btw, I’ve been reading this story from its earliest chapters in the past few days and I have to say, I LOVE your Bette and Tina as college lovers. :> I am endlessly amused by the way they’ve been getting it on like rabbits, like they have invented sex! They are such insatiable teenagers. Poor Helena! It must be torture to hear the loved-up couple getting it on almost every night without fail! LOL! Though it doesn’t seem realisitic that they would have no other lover ’til the day they die, I hope their sweet, pure love for each other will stand the test of time. :> Thanks for this, Ally and PPS. :>
Wow. What a chapter! Gotta stick up for my girl Alice here. I know what she is doing is wrong. I would like more background on how the cheating started, but, cheating is rarely a good thing. And she shouldn’t have said anything, but, her friends had been riding her on her lack of sex life for a while. I could see her finally snapping and spilling the beans. However… I am very upset that her “friends” have basically thrown her away at this point: she has lost them, her housing for the next year, and the band in one fell swoop. She may also lose Dana. If Dana is just playing Alice, she is going to be pissed it got out and do whatever she can to make it up to Lara. If she cares about Alice, she will probably still be pissed that the news came out the way it did. And why do I get the feeling that if Dana and Lara stay together that Dana will be allowed to live in the house? Please show Alice a little love, Ally. And, whatever you do, don’t have her start an opposing band with Molly. Thanks for the thought-provoking (and rant-inducing) chapter. PPS!!
Poor Al!, Hopefully this can be fixed!
Dana is as guilty as Alice maybe more so as she is the one that is really the cheater. Alice has no strings to anyone. Alice can make fun,do crazy thing ,and say nasty things to people but she can’t take it. Dana should be in Shameville right now. thanks
God! Sensitive subject Ally. I will not coment about the cheating part, but God, how can a friend think so poorly about what seemed to be her family. Hope you’re not writing a general truth, it wouldn’t be good for my social life…
oh and mightymouse : my parents met in college. they fell madly in love. It was in 1976, they’ve been together for more than 30 years and they are each other’s only lover. So it exists!
There seems be a several mentions on loyalty and cheating. Will that mean anything for Bette and Tina later on?
Wow. I’d love a Bette and Tina eye fucking on stage. Hot. Yeah, Alice is an asshole. She is friends with Lara.. so to go behind her back and humiliate her is awful. Its worse than Shane who has no ties to the other party. I’m glad Tina went after Alice. Lara was her first friend on campus. She helped her with her feelings for Bette. I hope that Helena didn’t tell Alice that BS about Tina because she was definitely not flaunting herself in front of Helena. Drama meter pushed up.
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I was as upset as Tina was. Great writing Ally. Post again soon!!
another comment because I keep re-remembering how great this story is. I just love how this story is such a fantastic contradiction to the real L word. I mean, here, B and T tell each other constantly how much they love each other and they communicate and they are so cute. on TLW it’s like pulling teeth to get them to talk. I LOVE this fic and I hope B&T stay hopelessly in love until the end… I love the cute adventures of them warding off evil temptresses who cross their path. I mean, Bette was ready to throw down for Tina when HELENA, her SISTER, had eyes for Tina. Now, some random-ass Molly is in the picture. Please. Anyway, I love all of your stories and this one in particular! Keep writing! =)
whoa, make sure i never cheat with alice!!! i wont have any friends. interesting chapter. thx
yikes! Why don’t they just pull out the sticks and stones and best Alice to death. Some group of friends this is turning out to be. Maybe if they didn’t pick on Alice so much this little blow would never have happened. And what a bunch of hypocrites! No one cares when Shane sleeps with “involved” women, but now that Alice is doing the same thing it is the end of the world. And already they are kicking Alice out of the band; WTF? I know everyone is upset but this seems drastic. If they want to be mad and cut someone off it should be Dana. I really hope that Alice’s “friends” come to their collective senses real quick and reach out to their former friend. PPS!!!
that should read BEAT Alice to death – sorry.
we need the rest of this story… I read the entire thing but I need more :)Great story
Uh, it’s no big deal that Shane screws people behind their partners back because it’s just a casual encounter with her, where as Alice is the Whore of Babylon because she’s making love with someone she’s been in love with for a year? Not sure I get that distinction. And Dana’s perfidy is only noted on second thought with none of the rage reserved for Alice? But Dana is the one who is supposed to be part of this sacred couple that everyone is so upset about. Not getting that distinction either. And as always, it’s quite OK to bait Alice endlessly. When she reacts everyone gets very sanctimonious. What do you have against Alice, Ally?
ohhh! this is becoming an interesting story. I don’t know why.. but I have the feeling you don’t really like Alice! hehe. I would love to see B&T singing together but I have the feeling it’s going to make some trouble. I can’t wait to read Alice reaction to the news.. ohh and how dana and al will explain the affair to Lara. Guess we are on for some drama! Please, post soon and I hope you are feeling better. Caro
The little signs of affection B&T show for one another are fantastic. Tina should have a stage name so Molly can never find her again. Also, it would be adorable if B&T just sang love songs at each other on stage… how cute are they?
OK! I’m sooo glad you updated….cuz i just finished re-reading this fine story. I am curious how people are going to react to Dana, cuz i think she deserves most of the anger as Bette noted. And although Alice did seem…boastful in regards to her accomplishments and then spiteful when people were trying to point out that this is not a good thing. I hope though that someone…probably Bette could go and talk to her. Because she shouldn’t be left out for doing what her heart couldn’t stop apparently. I like the idea of Bette and Tina singing together, i think…you should try and i don’t know…i don’t want T&B to break up or cheat on one another, and i know you’ve written other women interested in them, but i think it would be interesting drama if say Bette were to get a friend that wasn’t apart of the group that falls for her in a much more…subtle manner but i always enjoy the way you write your stories…so i’ll just keep reading….carry on!
Yeah, B&T singing together, that could be interesting. I know Alice can be an idiot, but there must be a way to “fix” this. She’s a major part of the Framily. Great update as usual Ally!
what fantastic update!!! Alice and her big mouth…. but really dana is a trouble maker she is playing alice or lara maybe both!!… trouble is paradise… like how helena is mellowing out… :)
wat T and B sing? bring it on. Al knows she’s in the wrong that’s why she attacked everyone else to try to justify her actions. Dana is absolutely wrong and I love me some Lara. Happy that Helena is happy. Love this story.
I think u’ve captured Alice’s personality well, although in a different way. I may have liked her in S1-S3 but I began to dislike her in S4. I find her to be self-centered and self-righteous and somehow, since she’s not a “control freak”, she always behave like she’s the victim and her ill behaviour is forgiven. B&T got a lot of heat for whatever they did on the show but Alice… hmmm… I mean, somethg as simple as that Phylis thg or outing Niki, to jeopardise her friends’ careers and thought nothg of it? Gosh!!Back to good thgs, the update is great, as always, and I cant wait for B&T to take the stage together, that shud be super hot. Thanks Ally.
Whoa, Alice really doesn’t think things through does she. I may not want Alice to be in misery but screwing around on friends is a big no-no. I hope that Alice can see what she is doing before it is too late. I love Shane’s idea for a band, will the girls go for it???? I love this story more every chapter!
Damn that was a mess and bad. Hope they all can sit down and talk and work thing out, they all friend after all. Bette and Tina sing together, that would be cool. Please post more, thanks!
Are you ever gonna finish this story?…or continue “you’re my home”?…wonderful stories, I do hope you continue.
Hi AllyI found about this site about 3 months ago, found out about your writing about the same time, and addicted to your story since then! :-) Really enjoy your style of writing and the story and the twist… sometimes so drawn to the drama you created… :D BIG THANKS for sharing your talent with us – the readers here! Really appreciate it! :-)And now I read this story (yup, from chapter 1 to 81) for the second time… and really curious… does it end here? If not, will you continue? :-)Thanks again… :-)
Please continue with this story!!!! I love your writing very much !!!
S’il vous plaît continuez avec le reste de cette histoire. Grand merci.
Love and Pride needs continuing or a Sequel please Ally.
Another wonderful story. Hopefully one day this one will continue as well. Thanks for the awesome stories.