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Freedom Fest Ch. 3
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Previously –
Dana could hear the pain in Shane’s voice. Shane was right, she did abandon her friends. She never thought about how much disappearing might hurt her friends. Dana took a deep breath trying to build the strength to have this conversation. “You’re right Shane. I don’t think I can go to the party. I did try to disappear, abandoning friends in the process, and I do owe you an explanation. And all of it is because of…Alice.”
Chapter 3 –
Dana stopped walking, staring out at the water. She let out a long sigh and sat down on the beach drawing her knees up, protectively wrapping her arms around her legs and resting her chin on her knee.
Shane stood in silence for a moment before sitting down next to her friend. “What happened after the concert?” They continued looking out into the ocean. Both hated showing emotion and knew their pain was written all over their face. Dana thought back to that night and swallowed the lump in her throat. She thought about that night often, but it had been so long since she spoke of the night, probably for the best because the pain was still so raw even after two years.
Freedom Fest 2 Years Ago –
Dana gave Shane a big hug as she said goodbye. The evening had been bitter sweet. She had a blast at the concert with Shane and was so happy her friend accompanied her for the evening. Though she still wished it had been Alice instead. A tradition that began six years before and one Dana refused to let go off. It was early and Dana was still energized from the music. Alice had told her to stop by the restaurant she was currently working at after the concert. Dana figured what the hell. Maybe her cheerful mood would allow for some friendly banter before she got down to business with Alice.
Alice had her back to the door when Dana walked in the restaurant. Dana hesitated at the door staring at Alice. She was always mesmerized by Alice’s beauty and tonight was no different. Dana quietly walked up behind Alice, placing her hands on Alice’s hips. Her warm breath tickled Alice’s neck then ear as she whispered “hey beautiful” with a seductive voice.
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WTH?!! So… Dana didn’t run away because Alice was marrying… That’s good. Because I hate typical Danish story. Wait, no I don’t hate’em; it’s just that I’m sick of reading the same storyline… ;) So this one is different!! yey!! ‘Tis good that you break my predictions. But lemme guess Alice was having an affair, rather forcedly! Right, right, right? The restaurant she worked at was actually a bi-bar…. Sorry, wild imaginations…. What can I say this is what your story makes me to do! So, woman keep postin! Muhahah. Well, I’m so glad that Dana shared that dread piece of her wish to ‘end everything.’ Because, avoiding is never going to solve problem. Now I really wonder what happened…. hmm…. Dana needed to say somethin’…. Maybe Dana confessed her affair with Lara, and Alice shocked her back with another affair herself…. I dunno. Now, I am so into this story. :) Keep the good work up!
Sorry you don’t feel well. At least we go another chapter out of it. Lets have a good ending. I’m pretty sick of Death,and people splitting up thanks
I’m now even more concerned about your author notes, especially the part “the ending could go one of two ways…really good or REALLY BAD! I haven’t decided yet” I think you’re going to slowly drive me crazy, and I will probably enjoy every moment of it. Just don’t kill any of them, please! Oh…poor Dana. I wonder what made her want to kill herself. I’m glad Howie was there to help, he’s a really great kid. It seems like Dana and Alice were attracted to each other, of course. Why didn’t Alice go to the concert? I’m patiently (yeah right!) waiting to read about their conversation…
So sorry you are sick. I hope you feel better soon. I can’t help but be a little happy, though, since we got a new chapter! I vote for the “really good” ending. ;-D I have no problem with the characters having different backgrounds and not following the “standard” show line. Those stories can be a lot of fun. I trust you, but, have my fingers and toes crossed just to make sure. BTW: I don’t find the flashbacks to be confusing. I think you are handing that well. I am dying to know what’s up with Alice/Dana. It must have been pretty bad based on Dana’s suicidal thoughts. Thank goodness for Howie. Thank you so much for the great update, cougar!
I forgot to say that I am very happy that Dana opened up to Shane. I think they both needed that. Thanks!
Hey Coug, just got caught up on this…and well..WOW..wicked powerful writing ya got going(no surprise there)
I like the way you are taking this, the fact that you are taking a chance by following ‘protocol’ so to speak. Just hope we have a happy ending at least. Other than that i’m very pleased and glad to see Dana open up to the almighty shane. Thanks for the update! PPS!
hey, I missed the last post. I’m gad I found this though, I’m really looking forward to your next posts. Thanks and I hope you’ll fee better soon.
I mean feel better. typo lol sorry
I love this. Awesomely emotional. I really want to know what the hell is up with my Danish. I love the story Coug. It’s great. I will be cliffy evil too for a while