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    Window of Opportunity ch.23

    Story written on March 13, 2008 by newagegirl.
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    The Date…part 2

    Window of Opportunity

    Chapter 23

    Previously:

    “I remember everything. You are more than memorable. Come on, let’s eat. We still have more to do.” We walked back to the blanket holding hands. Angie was already there trying to get the basket opened. With help, she was able to and reached in and pulled out a food container. She and Bette had already set out the plates, utensils and drinks. Bette went about setting the rest of the food out and we sat together watching the sunset. The food was simple yet delicious and the company, two Porters, was enthralling. I was being seduced before my eyes. I have to say, I was loving it.

    Bette:

    I was having such a great time with Tina and Angie. Her face was priceless when she approached us after she read the envelope. I had decided when I thought that including Angie would be a good idea to share with her some thoughts and memories that I hadn’t ever shared with her or had not in a long time. The envelope idea came up and I scrounged through boxes  until I had enough items. One of the things that I hated when Tina left was that she just left. She took few items with her and she was the one who was always taking pictures and putting them in albums. I guess she was too hurt to take our memories with her and in the subsequent time that she’s been gone, she’s never asked for anything. I hope that she’s in a good place to accept some of the memories that I want to present to her. She has no idea the things that I’ve  kept over the years. When we met, I knew she was special and started keeping ticket stubs, brochures, hell I even found some grocery lists…kept because she wrote them.

    Our time at the beach came to an end. It was more than I could have hoped for. We watched the sunset, ate, walked the beach and talked. Angie was having fun running ahead, stopping, running back and then taking off. She should have no problems sleeping tonight.

    After we packed up the basket and blanket and shook as much sand off as we could, we headed back to the car. Tina placed Angie in her car seat and I placed our items in the trunk, careful not to get sand on Tina’s luggage. I opened the box and extracted another envelope. I wasn’t sure what was in it because I purposefully used the same size envelope for each item. I walked to my side of the car and got in. I handed Tina the envelope and told her we had another stop to make before she would be able to open it. She began to pout and I laughed at her antics. We were having a good time.

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    6. I am so in love with your story. The ice cream stop with Angelica was freakin’ hilarious. The kid wasn’t going to share her ice cream — now that is a classic. My only wish was for a passionate kiss to close out the evening. Maybe my wish will be answered when Bette takes Tina to the airport in the morning… Thanks for posting so soon.

    9. I guess a passionate kiss on their first date would have been too much. Love the tone of this story. Can’t wait to see how much they miss each other while Tina’s gone! PPS

    11. What a perfect date… from including Angie, to the envelopes full of memories, to the ice cream parlor… couldn’t have been better! Love your story and always look forward to every post. Thanks for such a wonderful read.

    15. I love that you are writing how Bette can show Tina just how much she loves her and has always loved her. l really appreciate the romantic nature of your writing.

    19. Who wouldn’t fall in love or back in love with Bette after this date. I momentarily feel bad for Tina thinking how she is going to arrange a date that evens compares… until I think of the ice cream , roses and massage..and well no sympathy. Looking forward to your next update.

    20. You know…you would make a really good romance consultant…as long as it didn’t interfere with you updating this story of course ;). Another terrific chapter. Can’t wait for more!

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