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A few extra scenes for episode 511
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“That was easy,” Tina commented as Bette entered the living room.
“She was exhausted,” Bette replied. “I guess we all had crazy days. And yes, you can pour me some of that too.”
Tina was already halfway through her first glass of wine when Bette returned from putting Angelica to bed. She set her book down and poured Bette a glass, setting it beside her own on the coffee table. It acted as a silent invitation for Bette to take a position on the sofa beside her.
Bette sat with one leg tucked underneath her, facing Tina. She leaned forward and retrieved her wine glass.
“To this day being over,” Bette said, holding her glass towards Tina.
“I will surely drink to that,” Tina replied, touching the rim of her glass gently to that which was proffered by Bette.
“Though to be fair, most of what happened to me today was my own fault,” Bette said.
“I contributed to what made your day challenging,” Tina replied.
“It wasn’t your responsibility to be faithful to anyone,” Bette said. “It was mine.”
“I’ll be honest,” Tina started. “I was surprised at how much time you spent with Jodi today.”
“I wanted to try to find a way to ease the hurt,” Bette replied. “I finally realized that wasn’t possible.”
“Sometimes the hurt can’t be avoided,” Tina said. “Especially in matters of the heart.”
“At the end of a day like this, I’m glad I have you to talk to,” Bette said. “There’ve been so many times when I thought of telling you something that was happening, only to realize…you weren’t there for me any longer.”
“But I’m here now,” Tina reached and placed her hand on Bette’s knee. “So talk to me.”
“I feel drained,” Bette said. “But I also feel more hopeful than I have for a long time.”
“So do I,” Tina replied.
“It’s been a long time since we’ve shared a bed all night,” Bette said.
“Years,” Tina agreed.
“I’m already looking forward to waking up with you tomorrow,” Bette said.
“Why can’t you just be happy about right now instead of looking forward to something in the future?” Tina asked.
“I am happy about right now,” Bette’s index finger ran down the side of Tina’s face. “I just love watching you sleep.”
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Just beautiful, I really loved it, so beautifully written, I can’t imagine any better ending for that day. this chapter is full of love dear and I would really love to see you continue writing it.Have a lovely evening.
OUTSTANDING
JKS, this was the perfect ending to the day for each of them. Nothing fiery or passionate, just a deep comfortable love between them that they have both finally recognized after all this time. Beautifully done!
This makes up for the longest breakup in the history of the world.. excellent! :)
The last episode was ok. I prefered the Lez Girls drama to the break up.I thought MM was good and I never think that about her.JKS Continue when you can.I hope you can write a reaction to the finale.
HEY JKS, I did love the sentiments that closed epi 5-11 but your words just lift it to another level. How beautiful it could have been to have Bette and Tina, free at last, to reunite in this simple and honest manner. Wonderfully written as the love they share comes through so strongly. Awesome and adorable. More please. Many, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Lovely post-ep vignette! Thank you. Snoozefest (re ep itself) is right. Hate to say this, but I hope Bette showered before getting in bed with Tina. LOL!
You should be writing scenary for these last episodes instead of Ilene. So nice story..
I’m just glad we have you to finish it for us…what a wonderful ending for us. Thank you JKS
JKS, The was just PERFECT!!!!! Thank you
Absolutely beautiful! I always enjoy reading your posts. Thank you and hope you’ll post another soon.
I just love these. I could actually picture this taking place. Too bad IC doesn’t write scenes like this one. Keep them coming! :)
that brought tears to my eyes, post soon something, anything…
I just love your extensions! This was excellent. However boring ep 11 was, I thought Bette and Jodi’s scenes were great and executed wonderfully. You could feel the emotions. JKS, I’m not complaining. Anytime you have free to write, I’ll be waiting to read! Great job!!
excellent – yet again.
that was seriously amazing. i dont understand why we couldnt have just had five minutes of Tibette at the end! your stories are so sweet and so loving, i really love reading them.
I am always interested in your stories (well except for one, the Helena one). You allow Bette and Tina to be real human women and not ic clones.
That was great!
That was great. WE should have had that, instead will jump to another day. Just once it would be nice to see them be a family and be together at the end of the day.
JKS. I can’t believe I held my breath while reading the entire post. Geez..You do this to me every time. **exhaling***
Oh wow… one word – PERFECT!! And i agree wt azmama, I actually liked that scene too as it was done so well. I hated it when I read the spoilers but when I watched it, it was like whoa!!!
JKS, this was excellent. I agree with azmama, I would have loved to see this play out on the screen. I know that it’s hard to find the time to write, but when you do I’ll be here waiting.
That would’ve been wonderful on the screen. I love these little written extensions of episodes. I actually liked Bette and Jodi’s scenes in episode 11. It was, IMO, some of the best duo acting of the season. I also thought that Tina did an excellent job in this episode. Controlled and not too histrionic. There were some WTF moments like Kit and the gun and going to SheBar. What was she going to do? Commit pre-mediated murder??? And throwing a loaded gun w/her fingerprints in the dumpster??? WTF?? For a street-wise sistah, that was pretty lame. Every gangsta wannabe knows that’s dumb. But, jks, please post aagain as soon as your schedule allows. Maybe you could continue from this ending point???
The professor’s lullaby is a siren song.
Very sweet. Always glad to see your take on the episode. Whatever you can do, whenever you can do it, I’ll be reading.
Awesome as always!!!
absolutely perfect!!!!
Sorry, this is how the last lines of the previous post should have read: These scenes onscreen would have helped me to get over the excruciating parts and sleep soundly after going through the ordeal of watching it. => “I am happy about right now. I just love reading your fanfic.”
Awww. Another feel-good one-off after an AWFUL, UGHly episode. That long-drawn-out breakup surely left a bitter aftertaste. But I feel a lot better now after reading these tender scenes which I really wish played out at the end of that godawful episode. These scenes onscreen would have helped to get over the excruciating parts and sleep soundly after going through the ordeal of watching it. => “I am happy about right now. I just love reading your fanfic.”
jks, as always a treat. my thoughts exactly about the gun and im not even street wise. thx again for the gift.
loved it and i would agree with you, that break up went on for WAY too long. and- i thought the exact same thing as azmama when Kit threw the gun in the dumpster.but as for what you wrote- it was awesome. i too would have loved to see this on the screen. maybe next season we’ll be able to get some B&T family at home time.thanks for the post JKS and know how much they are enjoyed.
Thanks a lot, JKS! And more! more! more! :>
obviously Bette’s finished reading Lez Girls – agree with the others- i would never let myself to get in the postion with my ex that Bette did.And yes about the acting – in fact all the acting has mostly be great – especially Laurel, Jenn, Mia, Rachel and Leisha – pity about Kate ( i blame the script and the non-development of her character ) and the others ( Daniele ) are a car crash in waiting – the character isn’t strong enough and i don’t care a hoot. great work JKS X
I almost wrote to you to beg you to write this kind of chapter. Evidently you were well ahead of me:-) Cute and very Tibette. Hope there will be more of these.
I love it, it was the perfect ending to episode 11. You are brilliant, thanks for sharing!
Bette can help me sleep anytime! That was very beautiful and sexy. Would love to read more soon!
Swimmie that was lovely. To see our girls back together as a family with Angie is almost too much to believe. Would have been lovely for us to have seen that on the screen but alas and alack. We know your studies are very important so post when you can.
I loved it and agree with everyone else. We need to see these types of moments on the big screen. Thanks for putting our hopes and wishes down on paper. I can’t wait for your next post.
JKS — Thank you, thank you, thank you – for responding with a two-fer after 511! I just wish we could see all the little nuances you write so well on the BIG screen. It’s a shame that so many cherished family moments have been missed. I’m loving the story. I will keep my fingers crossed that we get to see Bette wake up in the morning… but I know I’m probably asking for too much… I can’t help it though…it’s just so GOOD!