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You (Part the Sixty-Third)
“So do you want to just go home? We can go get something to eat. Or go to the beach. Or…wherever, I don’t care,” Alice said as she drove at a speed that was a little more than legally safe. Usually Dana would have told her to slow down, or would have at least looked out the side window to try and calm herself down a little, but she was in too good a mood to care.
“I don’t really wanna go to beach, if that’s okay. I think that’s where I’m going with Shane later…unless you really want to go. We can.”
Alice shot her a concerned glance, picking up on the nervous tone in Dana’s voice and hating that she might have caused it. “No, it was just a suggestion. Whatever you want to do, hun. This is your day, you can pick anything.”
“Do you not want me to go with Shane later? I can call her, I’m sure she won’t be mad if you want to celebrate,” Dana said. She hadn’t even given a thought to agreeing to hang out with Shane later, and while she knew Alice probably wasn’t going to be too upset about it, she still felt bad that she hadn’t checked first.
“Honey, what are you talking about? You’ve been hanging out with me exclusively for the past few days. I think it’ll do you good to get out of the house for awhile. And I have some stuff I can work on too. I was just saying that if you wanted to go somewhere or do something, we can. But we’ve got that party coming up in a couple days anyway, so it’s no rush, okay? Seriously, Dana, whatever you want to do is perfectly okay. You’re the one who just got good news here, not me.”
“Yeah?” Dana asked, still a little bit worried.
“Of course, yeah! What, do you think I’m trying to hold you captive or something?”
Dana shook her head, even though Alice was watching the road for once instead of looking at her while they talked, and thus couldn’t see her do it. After a second, when Alice didn’t say anything, she realized she was going to have to say something. “No, not at all! I just thought you might be mad that I didn’t check with you first or something. I should have, and I’m sorry.”
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Is Alice being to close with Dana,Or is Dana getting tired of Alice Shoot I,m going to go back and read the last ten or fifteen chapters thanks
Love the way you write them…I am looking fwd to how you will write the wedding planning!!!! Keep Up The Great Work!!!!
‘You’ update!! Woo Hoo!! Looks like our girls need a bit of time to process everything. They seem ready, though — to both talk about it and to give each other time if needed. ‘Kit was behind the counter doing God-knows-what’ — Hee! I think that almost every time I see her behind the counter. Love that Shane and Dana just rode around listening to music. On a personal note: I am glad you took away your page limit requirement. I didn’t realize you had one and that must be hard to keep up with and still write the way you want. I think both stories are holding up fine. I am curious about the new project… More fan fiction, or, something else? Thanks so much for another great chapter, MT!!