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Soft Spoken Secrets (Gudang Garam) # 16
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And after all those hours, Tina, whose only task was wait, was still there. Shane and Alice didn’t know what to say because the truth it was the same “We didn’t know yet…”
Tina embraced both of them with her heart exposed.
“Thank you…Thank you…”
They didn’t voice, but Tina knew they were asking what happened and she answered the unsaid question:
“I dreamed… Bette had died…”
And their arms united in a single embrace.
When Dana came back with the doctor, she found them this way: embraced. She kneeled down and let her arms embrace them all.
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The new dropped like a bomb, but to Tina, who had a dream dressed with black clothes, it was almost a release. Bette was there and she could maybe come back.
That’s what she wanted and also thought, at first.
“She is in a coma. We will see how her vital sighs behave the next few hours.”
And hours became days.
After four days, Madison came home and her arrival brought promises of, maybe, another end to the tragedy. She was already out of the hospital. To Tina it was only missing Bette to her happiness got complete.
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The blonde was the one who always head the schedule. All the time she could, she passed by her lover’s side. Madison would be most of the time with her mother. And they keep chatting with Bette like she was in body and soul there, with them.
At first, to Madison, it sounded, sometimes, creepy. She was there talking, talking and talking without any answer, without a word from the one who always had something to say to her. But she knew her friend was there, inside of some box, lost, without, maybe, a choice to come back. She didn’t want to loose Bette and it was her option be there helping her to heal her wounds and find her way home. The young girl capture the word maybe and placed safely inside her hope. Madison’s hands caressed Bette’s skin, telling her how great it is to have her around them.
The younger brunette didn’t only read books and chat with Bette about the university. She played guitar to her silent friend and paint some watercolor, always asking Bette her opinion.
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wow, Beautiful as always.
I was waiting for this story to come back :)Gee, I can’t take all the sadness anymore….please don’t let Bette die! Honestly, let her wake up. And that Sarah McLachlan song was perfect for it. It’s one of my favourite from that album.
ur killing me !!!!!!!!!!!!!! one of my fav songs by sahra mclachlan
Geez Braz so much love and pain for Tina to see her love slipping away,,,,this is indeed a beautiful story as always and thanks for posting once again!!!
Tears, tears and more tears. That was beautiful written. Talk to someone that has been in a coma,they will tell you thing that was said to them. Just take care of Tina,Madison and Berre. The gang are there for all three of them. thanks
I am so glad you brought us this chapter. Once again you brought tears to my eyes with the beauty of the love Tina has for Bette. I hope that Bette returns to Tina and Madison and doesn’t die.
I so just caught up. Braz that was Amazing. I so love thus story and the way you write. Thank you
This brings a lot of sad memories for me. My sister had to go through a situation like this with her husband. He fought so hard for 21 months before he finally left us. I know that a person in a coma can hear, he heard us and he heard music. One time a sad song was playing and tears where coming from his eyes so he knew. Just make this a happier ending than ours.
No no no don’t let go! Please!Nice going braz!
Hello Braz, I place my hand above my heart and it is beating a torrential beat… I have tears escaping the very confines of my soul and I had thought I had cried my very last tear of despair this month… and you with your beautiful words… your poetic soul… your inspiring lyrical persuasion has brought this out in me and I thank you… for tears are the release upon a universe of beautiful memories… beautiful desires… beautiful hope. I hope that Bette finds her peace… her happiness and that she realizes she is and has always been loved. Your soul is a radiant star my beautiful friend. Hugs and Kisses, JC (oh and I hope it’s not to much a put off but while you are a beautiful woman… I might consider myself a handsome gentleman… though the jury is still out on that one)
Jeeez, Braz! You got us crying through the whole chapter and feel the pain and anguish that Tina is experiencing. Gosh, lady! We need to clean our tears and try to breath deeply, so we can survive your next post. Thanks for such an emotional chappy, dear friend. Big hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha
People are staring, bet they think I’m having an e-mail break-up. You are so good, I’m crying my eyes out…and in public. Thank you. Now please excuse me , I need to blow my nose.
This is sad, you make me cry my friend. Please don’t let Bette die, Tina need her, Madison need her and we all need her, please let her wake up. Please post more, thanks!
Oooooohhhh honey… you don’t have to apologize… why do you thing you hurt my feelings ? well, you know what happened to me and Patie 18 months ago (I’m almost sure I wrote about it), so it was very emotional, but as long as you don’t KILL Bette… I think I will be able to forgive you ;-) — anyway, 2 posts in a day, after weeks of drought is just wonderful… I love your writing… and please, check your PM, one of them that I sent you is still in my OUT Box (from the 16 of february…) — thank you so much for your nice words and I hope Bette will soon be up and… coming (errr… running I mean) :-D