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Planet Terror: Omega City
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Many many many nights go by,
I sit alone at home and cry
Over you
What can I do
Don’t want nobody….
Cuz baby it’s you
As the sound of a low raunchy saxophone peeled through the air, Bette Porter stood surveying the street before her. Her mirrored aviator shades slid down her nose. Before she could adjust them, Helena leaned over beside her and did so for her. “thanks baby.” Bette whispered in her ear. She grinned down at the group of mutants watching her every move.
“Ok boys…make my millennium.” She said these words just loudly enough to be heard over the sound of the shotguns in her hand and the ‘chachink’ sound they made when she cocked them at the same time.
“Oh dear, that’s cheesy.” Helena chuckled.
“I’m trying to make up some cool dialogue.” Bette’s grin turned to a pout until the Brit to her right kissed it into a smile.
Three days earlier…
The bed creaked as Bette shifted her weight upon it. One arm flung up, behind her head, the other resting on her belly, she sat in morose silence. Her tshirt rode up, revealing her belly to a slightly cool breeze. She would get up to turn off the air conditioner when she felt good and ready, though it was a damned waste of energy and it was making her cold.
Beside her on the bedspread lay a discarded copy of a famous Buddhist’s last book. “Be present be present…blaaaah…” Bette sighed melodramatically and flung herself onto her side. The hotel room was gigantic, she realized again. Its flooring was made of Peruvian cork and the entire far wall was covered with windows which swung open to let them onto the balcony. Since they were so far off the ground, they thought nothing of it, but lately, Bette had taken to running steel pipes through the tops and bottoms of the frames, just in case, in the hours when she and Helena slept.
The bedroom door creaked open slowly, but Bette’s eyes didn’t move. It was only Helena—alone, since the baby would be sleeping with her grandmother and aunt in larger quarters.
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Hello… yep me again… well I am reading this tale I just wanted to advance drop in and ask… hehe… what did you like better; Vincent Price “Last Man on Earth (1964), “The Omega Man (1971) or “I am Legend (2007) hehe…. all based on the same novel… oh by the way I dl and watch “Girl Without a Face” and absolutely loved it…. thanks for that, Hugs, JC
I normally avoid films starring Mr. NRA guy. “The Omega Man” (I’ll cop to the introduction, hb) and “Soylent Green” are two exceptions. When it comes to acting, Will Smith beats Heston hands down of course. I have yet to recover from the Old Yeller scene in “I Am Legend.” “Planet Terror” is as awesome as ever. Needless to say, I’m totally chuffed by the axe-wielding-but-still-whispering Jenny on security detail.
Hello hb… I’m back… Ok… I think that people just don’t quite understand where Bette is in this whole thing… is she psychotic absolutely not… is she in the wrong again no… if you were suddenly thrust into one horrifying situation after another trying to keep the people you love alive… you would do exactly what she is doing… at least I most likely would… did she cure that one victim… most likely yes… but can she really risk allowing anyone no matter what into their sanctuary… can you imagine how much this is eating away at her soul… to doubt her own superiority in this way… the old Bette would have taken that person in open arms… but this Super powered Bette the one that has placed the safety of humanity upon her shoulders (ie. Her friends and family) cannot even think about that… like I mentioned before she has in a way taken on the persona of “God” or “Goddess” as she is the one that they all look up to… even when she is twisted and lost in her own personal hell she is who they look up to… and she and they won’t realize this until it comes up to them to sacrifice and release themselves of all control in order to save what is important to them… and don’t get me wrong they have all done there share but here and now… until Helena has to walk away from her baby and go out into the darkness to save Bette will she ever truly understand what it is that Bette holds… the fear that she will be alone… forever… because with her new found abilities she could inevitably be “Immortal” and when her family and friends slowly fade away she will be alone… and she is so desperately afraid of this… and that is why she is brutal and is withdrawing… because she knows that in the end she will be alone… or worse yet she will have to kill them upon the time they are infected with one of the many despairs that still exists within this world. Hmmmmmmmmmmm… That must sound ridiculous… sorry about that… hugs, JC
Hello again (again), I cannot imagine just where Bette might end up if something were to happen to Caiohme… if you think she is a rogue right know… this is nothing compared to her losing her future… the future… she is so bent of finding safety right here and now that if anything were to happen to her baby I don’t think there is a force on this planet that could calm that storm… I guess if you read my previous message (I now so long)… I didn’t realize that I actually was inferring one of the struggles that exists within “I am Legend” the fear of being alone… of losing everything and being all that exists… can you imagine what it would be like if all her family were to die… all Bette would have left is to walk and slaughter… and with her addictive personality she wouldn’t stop… she would just walk and walk and kill and kill… blaming herself for everything… infected… zombie… vampire… human… no matter what she would be so lost in despair that she would kill all there was until she suffered existence alone… a state she would hold onto herself as deserving since she had failed in the first place… hmmmmm… ignore me… JC
One question hb… have you ever read the graphic novel series “The Walking Dead” if not I’ll send it your way I just got an extra set and I think you would love it… zombies and just plain kick freaking ass storytelling… JC
oooo, those sound like my kinda graphic novels! the difference to me between bette and the omega dude character, is that he is actually kinda responsible for the virus, ain’t he? his isolation is self-induced and to be honest, will smith’s portrayal didn’t much tug at my heartstrings…i kept thinking “what a dumbfuck that man is”–all along the way he sacrifices the lives of others for only those whom he deems worthy…well anyway, it was the way the film portrayed him in that segment, where i think that the second Omega installment is clearer that Heston’s character IS culpable in something, somehow, though its mixed up, i know…seeing as how the mutants are at once villain (their ‘fire’ thing is rather biblical and western) and victim. to be fair, i’d say Omega Man is my favorite installment thus far, but i haven’t seen Vincent’s version in years. i love me some Price though, and i don’t much like CH. lol…oh well, i’m going to stop rambling now, i love the comments on this one from everyone!!!!
hello hb… actually will smith’s character wasn’t responsible for the creation of the virus… it was a british doctor that created it as a cure for cancer and it mutated as most things do in life :P… WS was the virologist that was in charge of finding a cure… hope that helps :P… JC
lol, dh, doesn’t that sound funny though…a british villain and an american hero. hehehe…ok, i was being picky, certainly, but there were loads of ambiguities with smith’s character that i just didn’t like, despite the new info. i deconstructed the film really quickly and was slightly bothered by some things. i did like some stuff, though i didn’t understand why the infected had such freakishly long jaws. did you notice that? they had really long jaws. maybe they were dislocated. they also reminded me of that creepy alien show from the 90s where all the aliens walk around and have brown spots on their heads and they scared me! ok, so apparantly loads of things scare me. this, i will admit to. i wanna read your walking dead books. lol
hb… hehe… I didn’t think you were being picky at all and you are so right there are quite a few things to take away from this movie… especially with the motives of his character after a certain amount of time had passed… the one scene that was removed that should have been included was the scene between him and the female character that came in later… no matter what the first instinct of someone that has been alone for so long is to feel “Connected” to something or someone and with Sam dying the scene with these two getting down being removed really affected the humanity of the character(s)… as for the infected that would completely be the liberties of bad effects… since they are actually supposed to be Vampires… here they reminded me of a bad representation of the infected from 28 Days later… aliens from the 90’s you mean those small fuzzy balls that eat meat and well stuff… LOL… critters was so much fun… come on please put the Critters in this story… that would be freaking funny :P… hehe… JC
s*** dude, i never watched critters, but how bout Gremlins? i LOVED those little s***s! why am i censoring myself??? i dunnno! i got too excited at the thought. *runs off to do Critter research and figure out a way for both them and Gremlins to be in this one along with Leatherface*
Two Words: “Killer Tomatoes”
absolutely
hello My Beautiful Friend… on a side note… you could never let us down… just as long as you are enjoying this and having fun… then just know you can never disappoint us… JC :P
Yaaaay! I love this story it has a gruesomeness with out being to dark. IMHO due to the grim situation these ladies are up against their lives have become a sort of organized chaos…..when Bette chopped off that young girl’s head(despite the success of her cure)I saw it as she’s no longer living by decisions but on instinct. Please post soon this is one of my favorite stories :).
I never like to read book or movies fill with odd creatures, but i try to keep up with your. Think goodness it fan fiction and Peggy is there to try to keep everyone on an even kilt/ thanks
This is one of my favorites. Can’t wait for your next post for it. Great update!
I do hope you were referencing the original, Tobe Hooper “Chainsaw”. I wonder if IC named Bette’s old boss Franklin after the whiny, wheelchair bound guy you cheered getting slaughtered. OK, so what’s in the tall grass? What’s in the big house? Where did what’s his face go? Will Bette get beyond being homocidal?
this is one of my favorites too!! I don’t blame bette for being paranoid, I think I would do the same thing if I were her =o hehe.. I loved that bette told helena about Stuntman mike, i kinda like him =o anyway thanks for posting HB i frickin’ love this story!! PPS