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Window of Opportunity ch.35
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Window of Opportunity
Chapter 35
Bette
To be woken by Tina in such an amorous manner was a welcome disturbance to my sleep. I wasn’t aware of what was occurring initially still in my sleep induced confusion but the moment I saw her with that negligee on, my mind began working quickly and I was more than happy to surrender the idea of sleep. She thanked me and I immediately knew that she enjoyed the parts of the album that she had read. I looked at the clock and figured she had not read many. Knowing her methodical method of doing things, I assumed that she at least read the first one which was the first love letter she sent to me. I loved reading it still today. Her ability to express herself back then when everything was still so confusing to her made me loves her even more. I still to this day, thank the deities who played a part in bringing Eric, who in turn brought Tina, into my gallery that evening. My life would have gone on regardless to whether she had ever entered my gallery but I sincerely doubt that it would have been as wonderful as it has had she not entered my life.
It was all about me from the moment she woke me until the wee hours of the morning when we finally drifted off to sleep. Every time I attempted to express my love to her she diverted me and continued to make love to me. It was one of the most incredible nights of passion that I’ve ever experienced. She had no inhibitions at all. She generally didn’t but her lovemaking was so purposeful and with confidence. She blew my mind over and over and made my body respond when I thought it wasn’t humanly possible to respond any longer. I probably could have slept the day away had the alarm clock not blasted me from my restful slumber. I was quick…well as quick as I could be with every muscle still reeling from the night before…to turn the alarm off and Tina didn’t move. I gently unwrapped myself from her, put on a robe and opened the door to make some coffee. It would be needed desperately today. I was surprised at the sight before me when I opened the door.
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Wow! I think you’ve made me speechless with that chapter. All I can think is wow! It was such an awesome chapter…lots of stuff in it. I love the letter to each other. I just love the whole story. Thanks for such a long chapter too! Looking forward to reading more.
Excellent as always NAG, Have a great time in the sunshine state and maybe when you return home the weather will be better. Md
OK..just speechless, you rock! I am enjoying this so much…the letters are just WOW..thanks :)
That was so Beautiful and so full of LOVE. Thank you for all the time and care you put into this story. You are an amazing writer
So much goodness — it’s hard to know what to comment on. The sweetest aspect was Tina cleaning up Bette’s disaster in the kitchen. Somehow I think she probably repeated the scene after the fire she started in 506. I hope Shana is gone for good but I have a feeling she may be back at some point. Family night and torturing Alice will be interesting. I hope Tina follows through on Dan’s advice and shows Bette how much she values her gifts of love. Enjoy your travels!
Yhat was so awesome.Love that Tina wants to be with Bette abd live in their home with Bette and add on to it. Bette is being so sweet. The talking and planing is what and how it should. Shanta will not give up.until someone really put a stop to it thanks for posting Have a good spring break.
Love this story. Makes me feel so happy. You’re a really good writer
extremely dense chapter so full of Tina and her thoughts & feelings…loving the relationship they are building…if I was Dan I mighta called her on the weekend plans with a smile: “Sounds like u r delaying your return to your apartment Tina so u really just want to be with Bette full time?” Its like T’s trying to keep her head in control but her heart is saying otherwise. 3 months will fly though. Great writing. Thank u for the shout out. I appreciate the compliment. PPS. I’m really hooked. Looking 4 ward to family night & the teasing of Alice. The image of Ange asleep, thumb in mouth, wrapped in her blanket was poignant & yet gorgeous. I wonder what Ange is ‘thinking’ about her moms?
After a very long and tiring day this is just what I needed! Loved Dan’s advice that Tina needs to let Bette know, what she’s thinking too, she’s not a mind reader. And I’m glad that Shana is gone at least for now…sure there’s some more drama in store. As always I’ll be looking forward to your next post:)
WOW! This is just the most romantic story. Don’t end this one any time soon. I’m always happy to see that you’ve posted. This story is just… I can’t even explain it.
As beautiful as we have come to expect, newy…if only we were able to vocalize these thoughts from time to time, relationships would be so much easier. Why is it so much easier to write than to say? And another philosophical moment…LOL that regardless of personal beliefs, we all get religion in our moments of ecstasy! I’ve always found that amusing and wonder if the joke is really on us…
This cahpter was so beatutifully written, it was so very loving in showing each other how they felt and still feel for one another. I am running out of superlatives to describe what your writing makes me feel. You are one very talented lady and we are so thrilled with your ability to put words on paper and make us see, feel, and experience exactly what you are writing about our girls. It is almost as if we are in the scene with them as an invisible spectator. It alsmost transcends the page. We want them and us to have all the love and passion that you are writing about. AWESOME. PPS
I REALLY, REALLY love this story! Thank you for sharing
Great chapter, I love the love that is flowing between these two beautiful women. It is so great to see Bette being honest with her feelings and just doing what comes naturally and what she can tell Tina needs. Tina has always been the to let Bette know how much she appreciated the things Bette did for her so I’m sure she will find some way of recipricating for all the little things that Bette is now doing without being promted. I think Shana is going to use the time away to work on some kind of crazy plan to get Tina back and Bette will have to put her foot in her behind before she gets the idea that she should leave T alone. Angie was so cute sleeping outside the door I think she can feel that her moms are reconnecting and that is why she didn’t try harded to get in. If she was frightened by the loud noises coming from B&T she probably wouls have cried to be let in with her moms. I am just loving this story and that album is the sweetest thing I have ever heard of. It will be charished for some time to come and will remind B&T to keep saying and showing every day how much they love each other. Hope you enjoy your trip and hope to read a new chapter as soon as you get back.
WOWOWOWOWO that was incredible… that was a very powerful chapter..love to see their role reversal the back and forth, the talks,,exceptional!! that album is the sweetest thing i have every seen done… PPS :)
WOWOWOWOWO that was incredible… that was a very powerful chapter..love to see their role reversal the back and forth, the talks,,exceptional!! that album is the sweetest thing i have every seen done… PPS :)