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You’re my home – chapter 10
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CHAPTER 10
Bette handed Tina another beer as they all sat around a roaring fire talking and joking. Nikki and Jenny were alone in their tent – dangerous given Alice and Shane’s success at spoiling Bette and Tina’s fun. Every so often Shane or Alice would look at Bette and Tina and snort with laughter.
“You are a couple of jackasses – I hope you know that “ Bette said after one fit of giggles from their two friends
“Sure – anything you say Dean Porter “ Alice sniggered and lent against Tasha
“You know that we won’t take it lying down “ Bette added
“I thought that was what you were doing “ Shane snorted
“Can we just change the record here – for four hours you two have laughed yourself senseless about what you did — funny- now — move on “ Tasha said to Alice pushing her away.
“Thank you Tasha -how old are you two again ?” Kit asked
“As Tina keeps telling us – we are both 7 “ Shane giggled. Molly laughed and hugged her girlfriend closer.
“I’m going to find some more wood for the fire “ Tina handed Bette her beer bottle and stood up
“I’ll come with you “
“No – you stay there “ Tina walked across to Shane and Alice and slapped them hard across the back of their heads “ I have two volunteers “
Tina headed towards the woods holding the torch she had picked up. Shane and Alice followed her both aware that they were in trouble. When Tina was sure she was out of ear-shot of the others she turned and faced her friends
“Okay – lets have all the jokes out of the way “
“Come on Tina – its funny – the two of you looked so funny “ Shane laughed
“Yes it was funny -I have no doubt that when you two do it to someone else it will be even funnier but I am asking the two of you to stop “
“Why – when do we ever get the better of Bette ?”
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too sweet…i’m glad shane and alice had some fun, its kinda part of the camping deal…and bette is gorgeous when she’s vulnerable and tina when she’s alpha. loving the story. be well. pps
oh god, this was such a beautiful chapter!!! you’ve brought me to tears, (which just proves once again i’m just a big softy) Please keep’em coming, we’ve missed you a lot!
Hey Ally! I’m happy to read that you’re feeling better and sounding so positive about your life. These last posts are fantastic. I love reading your stories and these two are just brilliant! Both so tender and sweet as well as sexy and funny. Love that Tina brought out their rings… perfect setting. I have loved the strong and gorgeous Tina this season.
Good for tina for giving it to alice and shane! bette tossed her phone yeah for letting go… and for leaning on tina!!! alpha t to the rescue!!
Bette phone didnt mean a thing to her, she has her T back. Was so glad to see the rings back where they belong. Jodie better watch out. she will have a Alpha T or tiger on her. Alice and Shane is in a lot of trouble.can’t hardly wait. thanks
this was beautiful
Just a fabulous story written by a master storyteller. Brava!!!
Awesome writing Thnx
AWESOME chapter, the ring was indeed a VERY nice touch.
cant wait to see how they get them back. thx
I haven’t cried in awhile…post soon.
Great chapter. I just love Shane and Alice,they are true partners in crime – hilarious.The Dana tribute was very touching. PPS
It’s so great to see you posting again – I love this story. Your B&T dialogue is spot on. On another note I hope the BBC/ITV don’t have another one of those rubbish reality shows to find someone to ‘star’as Alex in the Flashdance production. Keep up the writing your a real star.
Great post! Nice surprise with the rings.
Great chapter. Tina so strong and protecting. And Bette let can go. Love it. PPS
very nice way for them to reconnect again…
Oh Ally, I just got to read the last 2 chapters together, so sweet, so touching, just wonderful. Thank you, Md
Wonderful update AllyE. Love alpha Tina, that steel magnolia effect, very stong but oh so loving and gentle all at the same time. There is nothing like an alpha Tina, love her to pieces. You do write them so well. Bette is shy, well, Jennifer is shy and she brings that to her character and it comes through as well. Those two together are just unbeatable. As you can tell I love this story. What I love about Tina is that she so lovingly and subtle gets Bette around to her way of thinking and feeling w/o pushing or being forceful. With her talking to Alice & Shane and making them understand just how vulnerable Bette is from what had happpened. Oh but the payback is going to be absolute HELL for Alice and Shane, especially Alice. I’m gonna love it. So happy you are doing better and feeling like writing. Just feeling better period is great. Post when you can.
Thanks for another great chapter. I’ll have to watch Dancing with the Stars now to see is JB is there. She’s stunning. Thanks Ally for all your writing. Take care.
that made my heart flutter..thanks Ally.
Ally, that may very possibly be my most favourite chapter you have ever written for Bette and Tina. It was so true to their characters and the way JB and LuH have always played them. I wish I.C. could write dialogue for these two like you do. I loved this!
“You are a part of me – the best part of me Bette Porter. Everything good in my life I have because of you or because you have given me the confidence to bring that part of me out.” Beautiful! Brought tears to my eyes. PS.
Magnificent! Alpha Tina putting Shane and Alice in line was AWESOME. And the ending was beautiful and priceless, I had tears in my eyes.
I know exactly how Bette feels; your Bette is very much like me personalty wise. Write as often as you can. Thank you
That was awesome and you make me cry!