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The Island – Chapter 4
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Edward Stranton had bought the island many years ago after he made one of his first big deals. He wanted a place that was his alone. The island he purchased had moderate temperatures and was out of the normal path of bad weather. He loved the lush landscape and was very careful to maintain the island’s natural beauty while building his large and comfortable home and all the support buildings.
The island had a small airport, a dock, its own power plant and small town to support all the personnel that lived there. There was a guard barracks that housed around 60 guards — both male and female. They handled physical security on the island — which basically meant keeping watch for unauthorized air- or water-craft — as well as acting as a police force if there was ever any trouble in the town. Guards were also stationed at the main house and traveled with Edward, Alice, Shane or Harrison if they left the island. It was one of the most requested posts to be stationed due to the amazing location and the prestige of being one of the elite guards.
The “main house”, where Stranton lived with the girls, was composed of many separate suites in addition to common areas. It had every amenity including a pool, hot tub, and tennis court. The technology throughout it was kept state-of-the-art.
It was a great place for the girls to grow up. Much like at the old group home, Shane knew every inch of the main house and the island. She shared much of it with Alice and they had several places where they could hide and not be found by anyone.
Alice was the future of Stranton Enterprises and both Edward and Harrison made sure she was well-informed in all aspects of the business. She couldn’t sit in on meetings, but she would watch the meetings through a one-way mirror or on closed circuit TV with Harrison close by. She was incredibly smart and had a quick mind.
Shane didn’t have that “heir” mantle. That didn’t make her any less interested in the company and its future. She just had a different way of helping. Shane turned eighteen and had wandering feet, a generous bank account, and a corporate jet at her disposal 24/7. She visited the island frequently, but, preferred flying around to the different company locations. Alice found her to be an invaluable asset to get inside information on the company. They often found information before Edward and Harrison even knew there was info to be had.
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weehhh!!! me loves… I don’t even know what to say except, I really, really hope you post as soon as you can. :D
WOOT! Alice is going to get to see a hot, sweaty, buff DANA! YAY! Well at least Gabby has come and gone from the picture, I really didnt like the ’emotional cripple’. HAHA, I’m liking very much how this is playing out and it seems that Al is taking care of business to a certain extent. I think Dane needs to help her out a little though *wink*. Cant wait to see what type of relationship they have and to watch everyone grow, individually. Fantastic update Goose! You really never cease to amaze me!
Great! i’ve been checking the site like 3 times a day for a Danish fix. I think you are a great writer and loved your first story. I am looking forward to your upcoming posts. Sorry I never commented before. But I figured since I worked up enough courage to post one of my stories, I could handle commenting. Again, thank you for posting. best regards,A
MaGoose, this is an awesome story. I just quickly read the previous posts and thought to myself how you out do yourself with your imagination or gone no Danish writers have gone before. Love the idea of the entire setting, A being a heiress and D being the bodyguard. I will revisit the previous posts in depth. Plus, I will have to finish the rest of “Closure”. Looking forward to more of this exciting story. Thank you.
lol haha…. now, Alice be slow to seduce Dana. Too much enthusiasm can mess things up. Tee hee :) So Gabby is in this story. Hmm, I can see what role she’s gonna playlol Personally I don’t mind Gabby. But ya know what? I think Dana is gonna fall hard for Alice too! hahahaha That’s what I want a PASIONATE DANSIH!!! Yey, blow the horn! Please post soon. I really want to know what happens. And thank you for encouraging me. I’m just afraid of actually writing the story…. I love musing though. ;)
Hahaha…”Holy crap!” is pretty much the reaction I had when I first saw Dana on the show!!! I hope Gabby Fucking Deveux doesn’t get the wrong idea about why Alice is watching training. Wasn’t it cool, the way Edward handled Alice being a lesbian? Too bad he won’t be there when Al finds the nice gal (Dana) he was talking about. Shane was great helping Alice, love their interaction. Great update, as always!!! Thanks!!!
HAHA, Tht was an awesome post i just loved all it of. So sweet how Edward took Alice bein a lesbian :). Sad tht he died thou :( but reli good tht someone like Dana cud be the one to make her happy agen. Loved her reaction wen she first saw Dana and i loved how u described, u had me wanting to see Dana in person u described her so well if u get me lol? :S lol anyway LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. Cant wait for there first actual meetin and Dana’s feelings on it :) Great job x x
WOOT. I LOVE YOU GOOSE. YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY. I love this story
*gives a big thumbs up* Great story MaGoose. Hehehe loved that Alice was checking her file to see if Dana’s a lezzy hihi. Keep it up!
Loved it!!!! This is going to be a very awesome story and I can’t wait to read and enjoy every chapter u post! Thanks MG,U rock. HDD and PPS
WOO freakin HOO there is another post. I thought you were missing, and I didnt know how to file a report when all I could tell the police was that you wrote the best Danish fiction and it had been too long. I love this story…
that was just great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next great update pps I love it